Os..moment..PART 8a PAGE 13 updated on 26 august,16 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
hi guyzz...enjoy new part and please comment for my satsfaction and motivation😃
part 5

"shhh".dev put his finger on her lips.

"sans lelo thora."

"han ab bolo.sun ra hn mn.kiya kia hai maine aesa jo itna gussa ara raha hai".dev moved himself more close to her and was asking him with a smirk on his face.

"whhh"

"han bolo"

"mnn kh raiii".sona gulped down.

"kia kh rai thyn app"

Sona was watching him with wide eyes and with growing proximity,she thought ,she had made biggest mistake of her life to come here.

...

"maa jaldi chalo.class bnd hojaye gi aur phr mjhy na bolna "

Ishwari was getting ready and smiling by watching impatience of neha who was excited to go to her English language classes.she still remember the struggle dev had made to convince neha to resume her studies.

"ayii beta"

"maa tm kitni der karti ho.abhi dev bhaiya ka kam hota to dorii chali ati mgar mere kam mn to hamesha der krti ho."

Ishwari control her emotions "nai beta aesa kuch nai.bss sari kharab hogai thi usay badal rai thi"

"bsss maa rhndo chalo jaldi"

She relieved a sigh and counted her struggle she had made to change neha's thoughts about her but all gone in vain.

She shrugged and went outside.

...

"please ap chorayn.mujhy jana hai"

"abhi to app kh rai thi that I had to answer.to ab question pochye"

Dev was enjoying teasing her and didn't know what pleasures he was getting doing this.he had never gone so close to a women but there was something in ms.doctor.

*knock*

"sir ".tina was calling.dev came back to his senses and look towards sona who was trying hard to control her tears.

"I am soo sorry.i -i-i- don't know----I am sorry for my behavior."

Sona moved her eyes up and they were filled with tears.she gather her stuff,quickly open door and ran outside.tina was stunned seeing a women leaving mr.dixit cabin's crying.

"sir!any problem?"

"na"ai tina !she was a friend and just upset".dev try to composed himself and took files from tina.

"I check them out."

"ok sir"

"how I could do this."dev started to work on files but was continuously thinking about her!!

...

She quickly reaches home and went straight to her room.

"sona kiya hua.itni jaldi kun agai."asha inquired her in a worried voice.

"maa bss sar mn dard hai.mn sunay ja rai.please disturn na krye ga"

As she reached her room,she break into tears."badtameez!jahil!kiya smjhta hai apnay apko."

"I will never forgive you mr dixit and I just hate you"!!!!

...

"form lelya manine.kl tk submit krdn gi"

Ishwari didn't listen what neha was saying and fell on road unconsciously!!!

...

CONTINUEE😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
its really nice and interesting. continue soon.😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: krystle123

its really nice and interesting. continue soon.😛


thnx for always being first person to comment on my post😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: priyanvs

nice update dear

cotinue soon


thnx😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Neha fell down 🤔
Devakshi scene was different
Excellent
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Dear you are awesome .
Yours update going day by day more interesting .I love to read urs stories . Keep updating and Ya Thanks for pm . You are a lively writer and also a very gud human being .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Oye hoye... Interesting update yaar...
Good one...

Thanks a lottt for the pm sweetie...

Luv
Sri
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: cherrynicolem

Neha fell down 🤔

Devakshi scene was different
Excellent


That's ishwari fell down..😆

Thnx for liking😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Muku007

Dear you are awesome .
Yours update going day by day more interesting .I love to read urs stories . Keep updating and Ya Thanks for pm . You are a lively writer and also a very gud human being .


Thnx for such sweet words and time😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: luvflicksgirl

Oye hoye... Interesting update yaar...

Good one...

Thanks a lottt for the pm sweetie...

Luv
Sri


Thnx😃

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