Os..moment..PART 8a PAGE 13 updated on 26 august,16 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys.sorry for delay.I was busy in some personal stuff..I know drama is going more interesting than os 😆 but I have to complete what I started.enjoy

Part 6

"mr dixit.she needs a complete bed rest and a proper diet.I think inhn ne bauhaut salon apne upar attention hi nai di."
ishwari was admitted in hospital since 3 days and now her condition was getting stable.

"doctor just tell me what I need to do?"

"you should concern with a nutritionist and plan accordingly.I suggest you to contact Dr.sonakshi Bose.she is a best nutritionist of town."

by hearing her name,dev was shocked for a while. how he will convince a person who was expelled from job because of him and whatever happened in his cabin,she will not even talk to him.

"give me her number and address. I urgently want to meet her."

you have to say yes ms. bose!! ab sawal maa ka hai!!
,...
in next hour,he was at her home waiting for her to come down.

"how he has come over here Dada.mujhy is insan ki shikal bhi nai dekhni.us ki yahan job to bauhaut door ki bat hai."

"sona sun.beth idhar."
saurubh calm her down and said in a low tone.
"dekh sona.tu 3 din se job dhund rai hai aur kuch nai hora.ghar ka kharch ,emi,medicines kahan se hoga.mn ne Mr dixit se bat ki hai.wh tujhy triple offer KR rahe hn.offer bura nai hai."

"par Dada..."

"I know tuhje apna self respect bauhaut pyara hai but bat yahan zarorat ki hai.tu soch le."

she was struggling for 3 days and still no job was final.she leaned back and made her final decision.

dev was impatiently waiting for her.
"Mr dixit.I will come from tomorrow at 9:00 am."
saying this,she went back upstairs and a lonely tear fall from her face.

a smile came on dev face and he rush back to hospital as ishwari was getting discharge today.
...
exactly at 9:00am,he was waiting for her in lounge.

"kahin irada to nai badal dya.hai bhi to itni akru,mjhy ullo Na bna dya ho."

as he was about to call her,sona step in the house.
"good morning Mr dixit."

"thank god you didn't ditch me."

"excuse me Mr dixit."

sona didn't understand what he meant by this line.

"I mean to say I thought you will not come."

"I promise you Mr dixit and I fulfil my commitments.aunty kahan hain???"

"is taraf."

as she took next step,her foot tripped and as she was about to fall...

"dekh KR ms bose..."

"sonaaa!!!!"

dev look at himself.drenched in rain,he had slept on that bench.rain has stop.
"kia time hogya."
it was 4:00 am .
"subha honay wali hai.maa uthegi air mjhy nai dekhe GI to pareshan hojaye GI.mjhy ghar Jana chaye."

he wiped his tears and look up in the dark sky which was as dark as his eyes,as deep as his pain was in his heart.her thought just came back to her,he shrugged himself and went to his car because if he start thinking her ,he will be lost...again!!!

Continue😃




Edited by attiya1.3 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
hi new reader here
i absolutely loved it :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: debby_11

hi new reader here
i absolutely loved it :)

Thnx😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
its awesome... continue soon dear 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: koolgurl

amazing cont sooon plz


Thnx😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: krystle123

its awesome... continue soon dear 😛


Thnx😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Hey do PM when u update next interesting plot loved it second meeting was amazing in his office
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sp8699

Hey do PM when u update next interesting plot loved it second meeting was amazing in his office


I will try my best...thnx😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Amazing Start

Dev seems to be in such deep pain
please do continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
I read all in one go didn't realize you've continued already

Its a Fantastic Story , the emotions so well portrayed

please do pm me when you update next

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