new ff - love's life!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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im posting a post after a long , long time!! but now im wid a love story of three love birds...........

(1)kunal(k) - he's 19, has two best friends namely PREM and NEEV.he's a bit naughty and if one is wid him, no one seems to cry(ummm....lemme make it clear that he's kinda happy-go-lucky type)he secretly loves anjali

(2)prem(p) - he's 19 too and has 2 best buddies namely kunal and neev.he loves to play pranks and he alvays fights wid mukti😆hes a flirt too.

(3)neev(n)- hes ofcourse 19 and his best frnds are kunal and prem.his best frnd also includes prachi and both kunal and prem teases him wid prachi though he has no such feelings for her.

so all 3 characters are the best buddies

(4)anjali(a) - shes new to the college and pretty too.she soon makes 2 best frnds of her - mukti and prachi.shes too shy, sanskari yet too different😊

(5)mukti(m) - shes 19,prachi and anjali are her frnds and has got in touch with prem who always teases her and she really gets a lot irritated.shes too cute too.

(6)prachi(pr) - shes 19 ,anjali and mukti r her best frnds and also neev.shes also a good frnd of prem and kunal.its bcoz of her that kunal and anjali met and prem and mukti too.

well everyone are frnds such that K feels shy in front of A while shes her normal self. P and M always fight wid each other and N and PR are good frnds.

all of them live in a hostel

K,N,P in boys hostel and A,M,PR in girls hostel.

so hows the intro?shall i contd?wanna add sumthin?

plz plz plz comment on this 😊

love ya,

EA lover!!!!😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok im too excited to post!! 😆 SO HERE YOU GO...(have fun!)(na is for narrator)
na:raat ka samay hai lekin battiyan buji nahin aaiye jaante hai yeh girls hostel se -
"o god! mujhe itna dar kabhi nahi laga.yaar kal result aanevala hai!"
"are yaar! raat ke 12 baj rahe hai aur tu na soi hai na mujhe sone de rahi hai!""mukti," (she turns - they show her eyes and then her lips and finally we see that its prachi)"anjali nai aai hai pehli baar to usne yahan exam di hai.aur..." "haan,"(now the girl turns her face and they show its mukti and she says) "magar kya usne kabhi exam nahi di?kya kabhi usne result nahin dekha?"
PR:haan magar....
"CHUP"(suddenly everythin stops and the girl stands and then turns and shes anjali.she says)"chup karo!!tumhe tension nahi ho rahi lekin mujhe ho rahi hai aur main nai hun, yahaan ke rules aur ....(she then realises that shes speakin a lot and looks up to them)
umm...im sorry!mujhe itna zyada nahi bolna chahiye tha.im...im..sorry!"
sub lok chup hai.achanak M and PR starts laughin!
PR:its ok yaar!after all we are frnds!
A:ya but.....
M:enough!ab so jayen?!
PR and A smiles and then they sleep!
na:to yeh karan tha!Bhai ab to hum bhi so jaate hai!to kal milenge!!!


2nd day:
sab apne class main hain
M goes to sit beside PR when
PR:are yahan nahi!tum janti to ho yahan kon bethta hain!
M:ya!us stupid prem ka dost neev!
she goes and sits besides A
then sum1 cums and
PR:aaj bhi main hi pehle aai!
"haan baba!humesha ki tarah tum hi jeeti!lo tumhari chocolate!"(after showin his lips and eyes they show him and its neev)
PR smiles
M:tumhe yeh stupid nahi lagta!chocolates and all this stuff!(looks at anjali whos busy thinkin abt her mks)anjali!anjali!AAAAAnjaliiiiiii!
A:kya? kya hua???M stares at her A:im im sorry!
then sum1 cums and claps in front of M's face and says
"basanti,tum class mein ho isliye mat chillao!varna sab bhag jayange yeh soch kar ki ek bevakuf yahaan aa tapka hai"
M looks angrily at him and he smiles most rudely
M:mr.prem ( and then they show prem)tum apni jagah par beth jao.varna tum ek bevakuf ki tarah bhatgoge!!!
aur haan mera peecha chod lo!!!
P:xcuse me!tumhara peecha kaun kar hain!main to bas (suddenly sum1 puts his hand on his shoulder.he turns and sees that its kunal)
K:yaar chup kar.koi (he looks at A)disturb ho raha hai!
A looks at him.K just starts lookin at P.
P:koidisturb ho raha hain? yeh koi kaun hai?!?!
K:are mera matlab vo nahi tha!i mean sab disturb ho rahe hai!sob!ok!
P takes him at his place and hastily makes him sit and he sits too.
P:yaar tujhe neev ki tarah pyaar to nahi ho gaya??

wot will he say now??will he reveal the truth??


PLS PLS COMMENT 😊 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its really good
keep it goin 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey is kunal is eijaz???????? it is so gud n yeh plzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon.............. n i think that kunal is not going to tell the truth.............. cont soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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1st yes kunal is eijaz.actually i havent kept it eijaz as i dont think it wud suit a college guy! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sorry not eijaz 😆
i havent kept it kavya! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 2
kunal is thinkin that shall he tell the truth?as he is a good frnd of his!
"kavya!":prem "im talkin to you tell me na!aur yeh koi nai baat to nahi hai!neev prachi se aur tu kisi aur se!
K:actually.....(thinks and says)NO(smiles)stop thinkin all this.aur vesbhi ma'am aa rahi hogi.aaj marks milne vaale hai!remember?
P:ya.of course!
ma'am (Ma)
comes.(shes prerna of KZK)
students:good mrng ma'am
Ma:good mrng!(she sees sum1 busy talkin)mukti aur anjali aaj padhai ke mks milne vaale hai aur tum log baate kar rahe ho.change your places.
but ma'am:A and M
Ma:no buts!umm.....prem sit wid mukti
P:wot! i..i...mean im fine here.
Ma:do as i say!sit here and A go sit wid K.
K feels happy while A has no such feelings.
P(thinks):ma'am muje A ke saath bhi bitha sakte the!but no!yeh basanti hi mili!fool! 😆
A sits K smiles.
K:u comfortable na?
A:ya
Pr:o god ab M aur P jagda na kare to achha.
N:dont worry kuch nahi hoga.
Ma:ok class here are ur mks.
while giving mks she calls out:Mukti!
M stands and P puts his leg in between anware of the staircase in front.
M trips and falls down
M:aaaaaaaaaaa!
Pr and A:mukti!
everyone stares!

ab kya hoga????
janne ke liye dekhiye 'love's life!'


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Posted: 18 years ago
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it is very very nice...awesum
continue soon 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part 3

PR and A:mukti!(softly)kya hua ?
M:co...coc..coacroach!P ke per ke niche ek coacroach
hai!
P also becums scared and takes off his leg!
as M knew wot he was plannin to do from before,she smiled to herself!
A:are dumb!you shouted so loudly!you'll be punished!
M:are actually,.....
(suddenly)
Ma:wots goin on?mukti cant you just start going to see your marks outside?i would have made others follow you!
now do wot you all want to!im leavin!
actually all becums happy as ma'am goes out!
all just rushes out to see their marks!!! 😆
all were crowded near the mksheet
A was so confused she didnt know wot to do!
suddenly sum1 cums and holds her hand and takes her inside.
it was Kunal! 😊
A looks up and smiles and says thanks to him!
K:come on now! we have to go to see the marks.(he smiles and looks at her constantly)then sum1 pushes him and he cums in his senses
PR and M comes too!PR looks at her mks and then goes out.
M turns back and she clashes wid P
M:o god!tum yahaan bhi mera peeche karna nahi chhodoge,hai na?
P:no ways!kisine mujhe push kiya aur...
M:stop makin excuses!and let me go!
N cums and P stops him.P:as usual u r late !
N:ya actually i was talkin to a frnd
P:frnd ya...? wotever!i saw your mks and you have got good mks of 70%(guys,to get these many mks in college is tuff. so its good,ok na?)
Na:to is tarah se pura hota hai din!
kal hai sari day hai!

janne ke liye padhiye ye dusra part (jo main abhi likh rahi hoon)



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Posted: 18 years ago
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guys i am writin only one part today and may not be able to write tomorrow as my uncle and aunt are cumin to visit us.

sorry!

and ya i have started a new ff which is very intrestin! it is in KS forum! do have a look at it you'll surely enjoy it!😊 its title is - kya mujhe pyaar hai?😛


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