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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
i think ur story is really goodd... im lookin forward to readin more.. n have fun wif aunt/uncle.. lolz 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
great work...... cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
very very nice prt. continue soon. i will defo check ur other fanfic..too eager to see it
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Posted: 18 years ago
#14
as i didnt write a part yesterday,enjoy two parts today 😛
ok so here goes part 4:

kunal,prem and neev are very excited to see all the girls wid wonderful sarees!kunal is too eager to have a look at anjali.(they all are lookin very handsum in their shervanis)
in girls hostel,
PR is ready and is sittin on a bed,waitin for A and M to get ready.
she then gets frustrated and speaks
PR:yaar mukti!tujhe saari pehanna bhi nahi aata!aur A jaldi kar na!tujhe bhi to taiyar hona hai!
M:ek kaam kar tu neeche chali ja aur hum taiyar hokar aa rahe hai! aur vaise bhi tera neev to vahaan hai hi!
PR:mukti tu bandh kar!tu yeh apni saari baatein leke prem ke saath ja na!
M:us duffer ka naam mat le! you know how i hate him!
A:are now you both stop fightin na!aur mukti tu sidhi khadi rahe!
PR goes down laughin at her self!
after 10 - 15 min she gets ready and M goes down
PR enters and N cant take his eyes from her!
PR cums straight to her
PR:hmmmm......kafi handsum lag rahe ho!
N:aur tum to......saav amma jaisi lag rahi ho!(jokes)
PR:neev! tum ......(and they start runnin as they do in kayamath)
M enters and P sees her and says to himself
P:chahe basanti jaisi bhi ho par hai badi khubsurat!
M cums at him and cums and cums and........
passes by him and meets her friend(FR)
(this is a new entry guys!!!!)
FR:i was waitin for you since long and you came so late.(they show her eyes and lips)
M:im sorry,natasha(N)!BTW you are lookin gr8!
(they show her FR and its sneha frm kzk)
N:but not as good as you!
yhey both laugh!and talk !
P just stares at M
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
part 5:
in the hostel,
A gets ready and looks at the time!
A:o god its too late!i think i'll take a car!
she takes the car and drives to the college
meanwhile in the college:
while PR and N were runnin,
K asks them:ummm....where's anjali?
PR:she 'll be cumin soon!
K goes and stands almost near the gate pretending to talk with his friends
A cums.she steps outside d car and shuts the door when she realies her sari'a pallu had got stuck in the car!
she then sees that the key of the car was in the car too!
A:o god!ab kya karu?!?
sum1:can i help?
A turns and looks at him.he is K!
A:ya plz!
(at this time a music cums for this 2 love birds!the music the 1 which came for soham and anjali 😳 )
K cums and takes out the bobpin from her hair and A just stares at him.K then unlocks the door,she pulls her pallu and he gives her the key wid the pin!
A:thanks!
P looks all this and says to himself:kya K anjali se pyaar karta hai?us din bhi jab maine yeh usse puchha to usne bahut der baad na kaha tha!
mujhe nahi lagta ki kunal mujhe sach kahega!aur anjali ko main pooch nahi sakta kyunki maine kabhi usse itni baat nahi ki, aur aisa sawal poochna thik nahi rahega!
ab main is rahasya ko khud dhund ke pata lagaoonga!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
hey guys,
youll arent replyin at all!i think i'll stop the ff 😭
you all have hurt my heart!! 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
no plz dun think so nd spoil ur mood...your fanfic is really excellent...plz do continue...
i luv it

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