NEW OS : Jaag Dard-e-Ishq Jaag UPDATED 06/01

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello Friends ,

Wanted to write something on KMH1. As you all know, mujhe kuch sujha toh I cannot resist posing here 😳 so here is the promo and will post the OS when it is complete.

'I did not do it Arohi , Mera yakeen karo' his face his voice was still crystal clear to her. She woke up again in the middle of the night. How many times she had woken up like this? Every other day she gets the same dream, he is asking her to believe him, extending his hand asking her to hold him, support him, she stood there watching him in disbelief.

He was standing at the edge of the cliff, if she holds his hand he will survive. 'Arohi , mujhpe yakeen nahi hai?' disbelief is in his voice now, before she can answer, he dropped his hand down took a step back, fell off the cliff. At that point she would wake up. why did she not hold him, pull him back, believe him.
After writing a couple of paras it occured to me that the below song suits the OS, so used it for the title
Jaag Dard-e-Ishq jaag dil ko bekaraar kar
chhed ke aansuon kaa raag
Jaag dard-e-ishq jaag, jaag dard-e-ishq jaag
Kisko sunaoon daastaan, kisko dikhaaoon dil ke daag
Jaaoon kahaan ki door tak, jaltaa nahin koi chiraag
Raakh ban chuki hai aag, raakh ban chuki hai aag

aisi chali havaa-e-gam, aisaa badal gayaa samaa
Rooth ke mujh se chal diye ...
Rooth ke mujh se chal diye, meri khushi ke kaaravaan
Das rahen hain gham ke naag


aankh zaraa lagi teri, saaraa jahaan so gayaa
Ye zamin so gai, aasamaan so gayaa
So gayaa pyaar kaa chiraag
Jaag Dard-e-Ishq jaag dil ko bekaraar kar
chhed ke aansuon kaa raag
Jaag dard-e-ishq jaag, jaag dard-e-ishq jaag
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AAKMH2 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww... m in love wid da concept

kavya jii...u rock lyk always

waiting impatiently

cntnue sooo

zyada tarpana mt
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: AAKMH2




aww... m in love wid da concept

kavya jii...u rock lyk always

waiting impatiently

cntnue sooo

zyada tarpana mt

Theek hai jaldi post karne ka sochingi. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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whatta start...👍🏼
continue soon kavya, we'll be waiting
Arjuhisis thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow new OS - it's been a long time since u wrote one, I guess, kavya
Lemme read the promo
Congo on the new one dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it. I always like your writing
con soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
yupppieee😃
waiting
Arjuhisis thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
Interesting promo - waiting for the story
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh kavya di hw u r wrtng al ds?? Am in lv wth d promi itself.. Now plz post d os ssoon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Captivating start as always.. Plz continue soon

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