NEW OS : Jaag Dard-e-Ishq Jaag UPDATED 06/01 - Page 5

Originally posted by: -pranjal-

Oh you updated & I missed this 😭 😭 😭 😭

Off to Read ...Will comment Tomorrow ...Sorry for being late 😳

RES

sorry

Originally posted by: kavyasam

oh! actually u were not in my buddy list while I send PMs so I sent buddy request but forgot to send PM

sorry 😳

Splendid Kavya 👏 👏 👏 👏

Absolutely breathtaking, overwhelming update!!! ⭐️ Thanks a lot for the beautiful part. ...hats off to you...it was so emotional & touchy 👏 👏 👏

This was fantabulously magnificently Excellent👏 👏 emotional and touchy update. You portray emotions with such class that i am sure like me all other readers too just lose their self here into the OS. 😃 your Writing has not only excellence but also brilliance of presentation... and we start living your write up & flow in the magic & a stream of emotions set by you. *bows Down* ⭐️ u have an awesome talent to touch the chords of the people's heart. & this touched me deeply 😊 Nooo i am not exaggerating ...you are really Brilliant 👏

he way u have written is awesome. I was having tears throughout while reading this, 😊 it was one intense OS i have read. Arohi is a succesful singer yet feeling of longing didnt let her spend single moment without thinking about him. 😊 The best part about this OS was Arohi didn't need Any proof to trust Arjun. 😊 her tears & their conversation Gosh those were heart wrenching 😭 Arjun made those Words true in Real scene "Ek dil ke liye Duniya dedi" she tried to kill her self twice but first thought made her stop & she talked to Arjun & Second time it was Purvi. 😊 God i almost forget i am reading fiction I was thanking God that she stopped on time & didnt use that pistol 😃 otherwise yaha yeh apne saath kuch kar leti & Arjun riha hoke aa jata That feeling scared me. They got the proof. I wish tumne aur thoda likha hota 😊 sorry for being greedy but your writing has such deapth ki i was involve in it & wanted to see them face to face those unsaid moments, tears, & finally hug,. Gosh i almost dreamed of it. 😃

Sorry I am not able to write much, I am feeling so emotional ki kyta bolu.

Thank U sweet heart for this master peace. May god bless u to write even more and more and make every one sway with you.

Love
Pranjal.

Originally posted by: AAKMH2

Beautiful os kavya


thank u fr refreshing kmh1 memory.so beautifully

miss my punjii

keeo writing

Originally posted by: -pranjal-

Splendid Kavya 👏 👏 👏 👏

Absolutely breathtaking, overwhelming update!!! ⭐️ Thanks a lot for the beautiful part. ...hats off to you...it was so emotional & touchy 👏 👏 👏

This was fantabulously magnificently Excellent👏 👏 emotional and touchy update. You portray emotions with such class that i am sure like me all other readers too just lose their self here into the OS. 😃 your Writing has not only excellence but also brilliance of presentation... and we start living your write up & flow in the magic & a stream of emotions set by you. *bows Down* ⭐️ u have an awesome talent to touch the chords of the people's heart. & this touched me deeply 😊 Nooo i am not exaggerating ...you are really Brilliant 👏

he way u have written is awesome. I was having tears throughout while reading this, 😊 it was one intense OS i have read. Arohi is a succesful singer yet feeling of longing didnt let her spend single moment without thinking about him. 😊 The best part about this OS was Arohi didn't need Any proof to trust Arjun. 😊 her tears & their conversation Gosh those were heart wrenching 😭 Arjun made those Words true in Real scene "Ek dil ke liye Duniya dedi" she tried to kill her self twice but first thought made her stop & she talked to Arjun & Second time it was Purvi. 😊 God i almost forget i am reading fiction I was thanking God that she stopped on time & didnt use that pistol 😃 otherwise yaha yeh apne saath kuch kar leti & Arjun riha hoke aa jata That feeling scared me. They got the proof. I wish tumne aur thoda likha hota 😊 sorry for being greedy but your writing has such deapth ki i was involve in it & wanted to see them face to face those unsaid moments, tears, & finally hug,. Gosh i almost dreamed of it. 😃

Sorry I am not able to write much, I am feeling so emotional ki kyta bolu.

Thank U sweet heart for this master peace. May god bless u to write even more and more and make every one sway with you.

Love
Pranjal.