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MyshaAlvi007

@MyshaAlvi007

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

i wish tu kmh cv's ki team me hoti atleast stry thoda or romantic ho jati :/
luv dis os
once again u prooved dat arjun is equals to selfless luv...luv dat :)
d bst part was arohi believe him widout any evidence
n when she was abt to shoot herself i thot kahi aisa na ho k arjun ki fansi ruk jaye or ye akele marr jaye to bechare arjun ka kya hoega

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kavyasam

@kavyasam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: MyshaAlvi007
i wish tu kmh cv's ki team me hoti atleast stry thoda or romantic ho jati :/
luv dis os
once again u prooved dat arjun is equals to selfless luv...luv dat :)
d bst part was arohi believe him widout any evidence
n when she was abt to shoot herself i thot kahi aisa na ho k arjun ki fansi ruk jaye or ye akele marr jaye to bechare arjun ka kya hoega

OMG yeh thought mujhe kyun nahi aaya??? It would have been so intense. I am sucker for happy endings and can never think of separating arjuhi, but first time I am liking it. Guys just imagine, arohi speaks to arjun tells him she believes him and shoots herself, and arjun is proved innocent he now knows arohi believed him, and what will happen of him. now this ending is more intense than anything else, what do you say. .

Edited by kavyasam - 12 years ago

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kavyasam

@kavyasam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

@all - thank you so much for liking this OS. as always great support and motivation from you. I myself did not know I can write stories until I did here. I had tried my hands on stories and poems when I was in school, but as a kid it was all childish. now I can proudly say I never accepted defeat 😆. but seriously big thank you 🤗😳

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kavyasam

@kavyasam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

I am going to write another ending now. based on Myshaalvi's comment above. I can't get it out of my head. be prepared to shed more tears 😳

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sh.

@.Dulcet

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

I love this OS soo much :) <3.. and i swear xou did justice to the scene di and exactly that should be the scene in KMH1.. Her thoughts were perfectly described and this OS has soo much feel to it di :)

thank you so much for the pm!!

-shilpa

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kavyasam

@kavyasam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: .Dulcet
I love this OS soo much :) <3.. and i swear xou did justice to the scene di and exactly that should be the scene in KMH1.. Her thoughts were perfectly described and this OS has soo much feel to it di :)

thank you so much for the pm!!

-shilpa

Thanks Shilpa :). they showed arohi feeling for arjun towards the end on the day of he was to be hanged but it was not enough, plus they made her say things like what is happening was correct, it is justice. arohi knew better than that actually they hurried towards the end.

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Anjali

@--Anjali--

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Res...will surely edit after exam

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-sanju-

@-sanju-

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Di.. OMG! I feltchoked as I read through the phone call. I did! I was lost! I could imagine the smallest of the details playing out. And it was heart wrenching! And now I can't get Punji's face out of my mind! That first look of his..
But this is perfect!! If they didn't rush through we would've got something atleast remotely so beautiful instead..
Even in KMH2, I'd wanted to see if Arohi would've trusted him even if he wasn't with her when Daddu was shot. The trust, it matters.. Knowing the one you love trusts you irrespective of the whole world's accusations, is what matters the most!
For that feeling of such undying and epic tale of love that KMH was.. For everything that the characters went through.. They should've never shown that scene where Arohi refuses to believe him.. Aaah! I miss KMH so bad..

And that idea is not something I'm going to say "I'll be looking forward to read" to.. Because I won't be able to take it.. I don't want to see Arjun in anymore pain than he'd already been subjected to.. It'll kill him! Punji will dieee!! I don't want to read it and then not be able to get that out of my mind! </3

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kavyasam

@kavyasam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: -sanju-
Di.. OMG! I feltchoked as I read through the phone call. I did! I was lost! I could imagine the smallest of the details playing out. And it was heart wrenching! And now I can't get Punji's face out of my mind! That first look of his..
But this is perfect!! If they didn't rush through we would've got something atleast remotely so beautiful instead..
Even in KMH2, I'd wanted to see if Arohi would've trusted him even if he wasn't with her when Daddu was shot. The trust, it matters.. Knowing the one you love trusts you irrespective of the whole world's accusations, is what matters the most!
For that feeling of such undying and epic tale of love that KMH was.. For everything that the characters went through.. They should've never shown that scene where Arohi refuses to believe him.. Aaah! I miss KMH so bad..

And that idea is not something I'm going to say "I'll be looking forward to read" to.. Because I won't be able to take it.. I don't want to see Arjun in anymore pain than he'd already been subjected to.. It'll kill him! Punji will dieee!! I don't want to read it and then not be able to get that out of my mind! </3

🤗 miss talking to you. Punji had gained so much peace in those 2 years he will be devoid of pain, I cant even imagine what will happen of him. it will like the lines mar gaye mit gaye phir bhi na zhuke, love goes on. Am not sure Sanju if I can write it, it is too intense to even think. It will be too disturbing. But if there is any thing to which this story line will suit it is KMH. Usne ek dil ke liye duniya dedi isne ek pal ke liye zindagi, partners in everything. Pata nai even before writing I am shaken.

KMH2 ditto to what you said. I would have loved to see it. They might have shown it also, arohi ahluwalia proved several times that she can be there for Arjun irrespective of what he did to her. Initially in the show she is bit immature free spirited, slowly her role got intense. Miss it,

@bold - Ditto Ditto Ditto

. They should have shown her to be in disbelief instead of showing like she actually was okay if he was punished with death. Result of passing from CV to CV.

thank you for such a lovely feedback, it was pleasure to read your thoughts.

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-sanju-

@-sanju-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

🤗..
I'm still getting used to college😆 It's taking too long, still a mess🤢 Exams seem to be going on endlessly🥱 I'm yet to read BTBH.. Abhi Shubhaarambh ka mahurat nai nikal raha

And even through this one I'd felt both might die in the end!😲 But then meet in their Afterlife❤️😆 Reminds me of the Salaam Namaste dream! Okay, ab main kuch bhi bol rahi hu😆

True, Arohi Alhuwalia was infact a strong character.. She was capable of showing blind faith in Arjun.. Would've loved to see her take a strong stand even without the proof! And for someone who followed her heart with such determination, the track would've fit perfectly.. But Sigh! End barbaad nai kiya toh it wouldn't be KMH!😆

KMH1 toh they completely defied the essence of the very words 'Kitni Mohabbat Hai' by making her show distrust in Arjun.. What was the whole point of them having come so far, of their love being all that great if she's not capable of the most basic emotion of trust on someone she claims to love in a way unknown to the world, unseen in time, all the greatness.. Makes that hollow! Idk if this was actually supposed to be the reason for him being in Jail.. Or they just did it to wrap up? 😳

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