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awesome update... but did not like Arohi angage.. she read the diary after 3 yrs.. what arjun doing now... does he still love her.. update next part soon

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis

oh my God Ruky, u are really evil
u made aru open that wooden cupboard after 3 long long years
oh no - she is already engaged to aman
aru returing the pendant was tooo saaad
what happened to my arjun khan
has his passion for flying planes turned him into an IAF officer
somehow i didn't like aman's character - may be because he is already engaged to aru
hope aru goes back to her place and finds more about arjun
luving this story
pls continue ruky[/DIV]

"What had not changed in these 3 years?" > was expecting something else like she had a boyfriend but not what you wrote after it! "She had grown to a twenty-three year old young woman, independent and optimistic. Trailing her eyes down her fingers she saw a band commitment, a diamond ring. Arohi observed the iridescent looking shape of the diamond; peeking into it she saw the day Aman proposed to her, yes she was engaged." ENGAGED... SHE'S ENGAGED TO SOME IDIOT CALLED AMAN, WHAT THE 🤬?!!

Originally posted by: love.1

"He voice began to break as he knew the time was failing. She let go of his grasp, Tears came to her eyes she fixed back her sunglasses on her face so no one could see her drops. Then she turned on her heels and walked to the car. Arjun sight saw her leave. He knew from the start just how this would end, they lives began slitting at the seams. Arjun turned around. This deep silence, the world has distributed it to everyone. He did not intend to let go of the priceless moments but to enfold with them. Tears came to his eyelashes but he brushed it away from his skin, sadness is a part of everyone's life." > 😭 😭 😭 do you know how much I cried here... I couldnt read on when reading this part, I forced myself to read to the end of this paragraph! 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭😭😭 😭 😭😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 I hate that evil mind of yours for making them cry! But I knew you was going to do that! 😒 Now suffer with all my emotions and hugs because I just want to hold the pair of them and cry and tell them Ruky's evil mind will give up soon, then we all can laugh at it together! Sadness is apart of life > I like that line, so true!

😲 three years... three whole years 😲 what the f**k!!!!!

She found his diary... knew she would find it when she's back in the UK but after three whole years she bloody found it GOD!

she's going back to Delhi OMG...!

"What had not changed in these 3 years?" > was expecting something else like she had a boyfriend but not what you wrote after it! "She had grown to a twenty-three year old young woman, independent and optimistic. Trailing her eyes down her fingers she saw a band commitment, a diamond ring. Arohi observed the iridescent looking shape of the diamond; peeking into it she saw the day Aman proposed to her, yes she was engaged." ENGAGED... SHE'S ENGAGED TO SOME IDIOT CALLED AMAN, WHAT THE 🤬?!!

😡 I HATE YOU AND YOUR EVIL MIND!!!!!!!! 😡 HOW COULD YOU??!!!!

PYAR KE DUSHMAN!!!!!

I thought she wouldn't read the diary but thank god your evil mind did something good and let her read that diary! She still loves him OMG! And she knows he loved (loves) her!

"Nobody has ever known me in this world, like you have, then why did you hide this? Embracing the diary with all she had, for all sad words of tongue and pen which leaked into the paper, they were the saddest" > touched my heart! ❤️

Scared to know what will happen next 😕

Where is Arjun? What is he doing? Did he become a IAF officer??? Is he married or engaged?????? or still madly in love with Arohi and never moved on???? > QUESTIONS i WANT ANSWERS TO lol!

Dude Arohi is going back to Delhi to get MARRIED??? 😲 Kill me now or I'm goint to hunt someone's evil mind down... Why are you doing this to them! hahahahahaha... your evil mind is good but soon it will run out of ideas and have to bring the two together then I will be laughing at you! 😉

Fingers and toes crossed something happens in Delhi that the marriage doesnt go through!

Was a great update... the emotions and the shocks were nicely described! Felt all the emotions!

Want to hug them so badly man!!!! 🤗 Where is Arjun??!

Waiting to see what your evil mind has in plan, so please update soon! 😊

Thanks

*and yeah now I have stopped hehehehe! 😆 Enjoy!

Originally posted by: Ruky07

woah !!!!!! naz is on trek 😛 reading ur comment made me laugh
awww u cried and forced urself to get pass the chapter 😆 i like making people cry
yes indeed i want to give my FF and touch of realism
yes my evil mind is not stopping 😛 3 WHOLE YEAR ! HAA SHOCK ! SHE'S ENGAGED 😲
🤬 to much censored lauguage used, U need to control ur emotions. embrace urself for pain.
awww i knw am a great writer, my writing touches people 😆
yes there are alot of questions, but in time they all will be answered. For now arjun is not comming into the picture for at least 2 updates, then...
yes marriage, but arohi is ganna go on mission
my evil mind will run out of ideas and then u can laugh but for now i'm the one laughing 😃
thank you very much really appreciate this, glad you liked it
and please dnt hunt me down😔 am scared !
yes u can hug them if u want i will not stop u, i'll try updating soon

So mean like to make people cry... lame!

Great can't wait to read the next update! God knows what your evil mind and you have come up with! But I'm ready to endure all the pain...!

Originally posted by: Karnika007

OMG you are back i cant believe and i am sooo happy..
read all 3 parts and the pain is getting deeper and deeper with every word..
superb writing plz pm me when u update...