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Posted: 14 years ago
Spot on analysis Aksh
you always know with what intention i have written the scene 👏
mikhael is childish he wants everything he sees. some kids and elders also are like that
but do not worry will try nd redeem mikhael in later scenes especially gauri's pardafash
No matter what a parent does that character rarely changes only if something drastic happens
yes MK and KK will fit those dialogues better than a child actor and MK
Edited by myviewprem - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

loved all the parts i missed, nice to see what arjuns childhood was like, hope to see arohi coming back soon in the ff. and to see what will happen between arohi and arjun, cant wait as i know you wont disapoint.

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Scene74 Arjun shares gifts with Mikhael

Rashi looking at Arjun a bit surprised

Arjun: What happened Rashi?
Rashi: Nothing, Mikhael and I hardly share our toys. When dad buys any toy he buys one for Mikhael and one for me. We never shared our toys or gave ours toys to each other. But you got so many gifts for first time and you are giving them away to all of us. Why? I thought you will be possessive about your first gifts you ever recieved in life Arjun. You know how to play PSPO well-that day you played in my room so well then why you told dad you will not play on PSPO?
Arjun: That's because the biggest gift i want is smile on all your faces. If Billu, Makrand, you and Mikhael are happy then i will think that is best gift i have got in life. These material things will come and go, but you all are the biggest gifts GOD has given to me. I would be so lonely and miserable without all of you. Right?
Rashi keeps quiet for sometime and then says
Rashi: I had never thought like that ever in my life. But may be you are right. When Mikhael bhaiya is happy he usually gives me a ride on his cycle and we go to the garden almost a KM away and play there. May be i will tell Mikhael bhaiya to take all of us to that garden one day. It has swings and slides etc. It will be fun. Good night Arjun
Arjun: Good night. Don't you want any of these gifts
Rashi: No, because all these gifts are mine only right. I will use them whenever i want. And from today all my things are yours and Mikhael and Billu and Makrands too. But not Romit's, he will chew all my stuff up. I do not want him to chew up my things especially my dolls up. Good Night
Arjun and Rashi laugh and she leaves
Later at night 1am or so Arjun goes to Mikhael room with the PSPO and football guys kit.

Mikhael just lying on his stomach and watching TV. Seeing Arjun he switches off TV and throws remote.

Arjun: Mikhael, this is for you. Keeps the games near his bed.

Mikhael: I do not want it and pushes them in hand

Arjun picks them and keeps them on bed.

Arjun opens the football guys kits and arranges them on floor and starts playing and says: Wow,

Mikhael, look at the goalposts and refrees. How do these score goals. How to operate? Purposely places wrongly on ground and tries. After sometime acts frustrated.

Mikhael observing the game: Its not like that you dumbo, just press that key

Arjun: Which one? And presses wrong key on purpose

Mikhael: The black one on right side

Arjun: Which black one, so many are there.

Mikhael: Let me show and gets down and starts showing how to play

Arjun watching him with smile on face.

Mikhael: There, i have arranged. All you have to do is press these buttons

Arjun: Show me once.

Mikhael starts playing and enjoys a lot. After game ends Arjun says "This game is not going to my head. I think i will not play this. You also do not want it, so may be i will give it to someone else"

Mikhael: No, i mean. I will take it . But only because you are giving, otherwise i do not want it

Arjun: OK, good night i am going

Mikhael: You forgot your PSPO

Arjun: OK, thanks. By the way you have a PSPO right

Mikhael: Yes, its there and points to it

Arjun: Let me see

Arjun opens and sees it and says "Wow, this version. I just love it. Can i have this?"

Mikhael: You want that

Arjun: Yes, you can keep the newer version. I mean only if you say i will keep it

Mikhael all excited: Yes, you can keep it and gets busy opening the new PSPO

Arjun: Thanks for your PSPO

Mikhael: Welcome, Bro

Arjun: Bro means

Mikhael: Bro means brother

Arjun gets shocked and stares at him. First time Mikhael acknowledges him as brother after 3 weeks of him coming to house.

Mikhael after sometime: You still here. You want something

Arjun: No, nothing at all

Turns to leave and turns back and say's "Good night Bro"

Mikhael: Good night Arjun

Arjun walks out and bumps into RPS watching them (he actually came to pacify Mikhael but now sees no need for that as Arjun has already done that). Arjun smiles seepishly.

Arjun: Sorry dad, i did not obey your command.................................................. Good Night

RPS: Good night.......................Good Night

Arjun walks some distance and RPS says "Arjun" and he turns back and RPS says "thanks" and Arjun smiles and says "Good night dad" and walks off with RPS looking at him going to his room.

Edited by myviewprem - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
prem.. this is how Arjun became ari's mother teresa !! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

but beautifully done.. loved the Arjun-Rashi convo.. although, i always imagined Rashi to be atleast as perceptive as Arjun.. but i suppose thats for the show.. u have deviated from that story.. n since Rudr is more caring here.. Rashi's rxns are more valid.. so this is where they'll start learning from each other.. Arjun teaching the non-materialistic perspective n Rashi teaching him the nuances of relationships..
I see mikhail is ready to accept Arjun as a brother.. after his own ego n needs r satisfied.. basically once his mind is at peace.. he has no qualms with the world.. very accurate description prem!!👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
i love this selfless arjun.. he is soo cute :)
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awww.....arjun is so sweet...
great update..:)

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it, loving how arjun is able to change mickales view with out him realising. love your style of writing.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww arjun tum itne sweet kyun ho!!! <3 him man.x
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Scene75 RPS-Arjun emotional farewell

Rudra and Arjun coming out of flashback. Arjun keeps his hand on Rudra's shoulder.

Arjun: Dad

RPS turns back and realizes Arjun standing behind his back watching photo album and closes it: Arjun

Arjun: comes and kneels in front of RPS and looks at the album

Arjun: You still have this album dad

RPS: Yes

Arjun: I thought you told me you never believe in looking back at old memories

RPS: Yes (thinking-i did not mean memories associated with my children, i meant some other memories)

Arjun: I came to meet you one last time before i leave the house

RPS: Take care Arjun and all the best

Arjun: Can i request you one last thing?

RPS: Yes

Arjun: Can i once keep my head on your lap, just for a few seconds?

RPS stares at him unable to understand what sort of request it is.

Arjun: That was my dream since childhood, that once for 5 seconds at least i must keep my head on your lap. I may never get that opportunity once i leave the house (chokes and cannot continue)

Any other day RPS would have thought Arjun had gone crazy. But not today, today if Arjun asks him the most precious thing of his also-he would not think twice before saying Yes to Arjun and hence nods his head

Arjun gently places his head on his lap and Arjun remembers all the scenes with RPS like him bringing him to house, playing cricket, going trekking, etc

Slowly tears start falling out of his eyes on to RPS lap and drench his lap.

RPS remembers him seeing Arjun first time, him risking his life so many times for RPS, saving RPS in court. RPS wishes that time freezes here and Arjun never leaves him or the house.

Here RPS again goes in flashback and is remembering listening to Arjun convo with Rashi yesterday night when he was feeding her and saying "Rashi's was the lap he had always cried on from childhood".

RPS thinks "Sorry Arjun, never realized that you may ever require my shoulder/lap to cry on"

RPS cannot any longer keep his pent up emotions and wants to stroke Arjun's head like any father will do to a son when a son places his head on father's lap for comfort. He takes his hand towards Arjun head but something stops him.

Arjun gets up after a minute or so and wipes his tears and says "Thanks dad, i love you" and hugs him.

RPS: I love you too, Arjun, I love you too

Romit comes and calls him.

Arjun: I will come Romit. One minute.

Romit leaves

Arjun: Bye dad, take care

RPS: Bye son, remember you are leaving the house and business not our family. You will always remain my son and Rashi, Romit and Mikhael's brother. You are always welcome to visit us whenever you feel like seeing us.

Both hug each other

Arjun: Thanks dad. You can also come and meet me at the new apartment. I forgot to tell you, i have taken a new apartment on rent

RPS: I already know that. Romit had informed me.

Arjun goes to the door and looks back once at RPS and then leaves.

Arjun at gate about to leave. Romit tells driver to leave him till apartment.

Arjun hugs Romit and tells him to take care.

Raj comes running and hugs him and starts crying. Arjun lifts him and cuddles and kisses him to pacify him.

RPS sees this from the window of his room and Arjun also looks at him too.

Arjun thinks "Dad, wish you had shown me a bit of affection when i really needed it most today. I know you love me but still what stops you from showing your affection dad?"

RPS thinking "Arjun, wish i could ever console you like you are doing to Raj but"

Arjun sits in car and leaves

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Posted: 14 years ago
but what!?!?! aah Prem..u know how to keep ur readers hanging by the thread.. update soon..

so finally arjun expressed his deepest desire.. n he got it too!! very emotional, very touching n very beautifully written prem.. well done!! but i suppose u already know what kind of response u r gonna get for this scene 😉

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