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Posted: 14 years ago
wow prem.. u r on a roll!!

It was a pleasant scene but not a surprise, RPS looking at the album n Arjun joining in...They flash-backing together to the first time Arjun was there and how RPS maturely n perceptively made decisions to make sure Arjun didn't feel out of place.. Although, I was a bit taken aback by Rashi accepting Arjun outright and Mikhail's insecurity.. i remember some a line.. "bade bhai ko maan samman aur chote bhai ko lad-pyar!!" whether its true or not, it definitely fits here.. hehe.. i dont rem where i heard that..n i dont think its really true..but rashi i think felt instantly comfy with arjun because he was more accessible as opposed to micky who had the arrogance of being an older child n such n wanted to be respected in that vein.. n again the dose of reality in arjun's thoughts regarding RPS's real motive in adopting three orphans!! superbly done prem!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Scene71 RPS introduces Arjun as his son at party

Next they plan to play hide and seek. They divide all kids into two teams. Rashi, Mikhael and Makrand go in one team. Arjun and Billu in another team. Play starts. Mikhael has to hide and Arjun's team has to search. The score is 4 points Arjun team and 4 points Rashi team. Only 10 minutes provided to search the hidden person of the team. Whoever wins this round that team will be winner.

Everyone keeps searching but cannot find Mikhael because their team has found perfect place in house-the attic to hide. Arjun, Billu and two others of his team reach there. Arjun climbs up attic and finds Mikhael and Mikhael says "Arjun". Arjun keeps finger on his lips indicating to keep quiet.

Billu: Arjun bhai what are you doing there for so long. Is Mikhael bhaiya there in attic?

Arjun: No, no one is in attic

Looks at Mikhael and smiles and climbs down and leaves the place.

Rashi group again win.

Mikhael finds him alone and ask: Why did you tell lies? Because Rashi is leader of our group and you want her to win

Arjun: No, because i do not want my elder brother to lose ever any game in his life.

Mikhael shocked and cannot respond. He had never thought Arjun will so soon call him elder brother because he always was aloof and silent and never called him a brother.

Rashi comes and pulls Arjun for another game. The next game is "Pass the ball" and Arjun does not understand when a kid is explaining in english about game and asks many questions. Initially kid translates in hindi but later says "Learn English and come if you want to play this game" and all start laughing.

A voice from back "Yes, next time you all come home for party to our house, Arjun will speak better English than majority of you kids. Its my promise"

Arjun turns back and sees RPS standing behind him.

RPS keeps hands on his shoulders and says: Right Arjun

Arjun just smiles

RPS takes him center stage and calls Kumud also and says

"Ladies and Gentlemen and kids, I would like to introduce Arjun, my son to all of you. Please welcome Arjun Singhania. Hope you give him same love and respect that you have given to me and my other family members"

RPS also calls and introduces Billu and Makrand as Arjun friends who will be part of their household from today.
Everyone starts clapping and all go and greet Arjun and give him gifts. Arjun is overwhelmed with all attention.
Edited by myviewprem - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hello prem,
your FF is always so detailed and i love it, and i love the relationship between arjun and rashi but somehow i feel sorry for mickael -.-
and i think in the last parts RPS was a great Father :))

love it and cont. and thanks for the Pms
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: myviewprem

I am not studing law yet to decide on my future career may be law in college
why did you feel i am doing law? because i made Arjun argue in court like a lawyer?

yeh but not jus dat....u seem 2 hav a lawyer kinda mind..if u kno wa i mean....im doin law so das y am sayin lol....the way u approach thngz is diff das all.....
cool u at skool atm den..u shud defo luk in2 dis field atleast😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mIsHeZ.x

yeh but not jus dat....u seem 2 hav a lawyer kinda mind..if u kno wa i mean....im doin law so das y am sayin lol....the way u approach thngz is diff das all.....
cool u at skool atm den..u shud defo luk in2 dis field atleast😊

thanks for advice
right now i want to be everything at least once in life doctor, lawyer, engineer, pilot, scuba driver, journalist, police, politician it changes every month etc 😉
so trying to be some though my FF 😆😆 my Bro also thinks i will be good lawyer because i keep eating his head with all my analysis of news on TV and paper and win all arguments over him. 😊
Indeed i must admit some of RPS and Arjun dialogues or advices are those my parents and brothers give me. I just put them based on situation. So credit for some of the dialogues go to my family too.
Edited by myviewprem - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Scene72 Arjun calls RPS dad first time

After everyone give him gifts he goes to find RPS who is sitting in garden and drinking with friends. Arjun runs towards him and stops at some distance looking at his friends. RPS excuses himself and goes towards Arjun.

Arjun runs towards him and hugs him and starts crying. RPS surprised that his serious, silent Arjun is crying. He holds on to him for sometime till he cools down and then asks him

RPS: What happened Arjun?

Arjun: Nothing dad

RPS: What did you just say?

Arjun: Nothing

RPS: After that

Arjun: Dad

RPS looks very happy and wipes his tears and says "Atlast, i have been excpecting you to call me dad without hesitation for past 3 weeks, but you never said. And today you have called me dad without my insistence. I am happy"

Arjun(still sobbing): "I thought you had got me to do household work"

RPS: What?(shocked)

Arjun: Yes Makrand was saying many kids in orphanage are adopted and treated as servants by their adopted family

RPS walks Arjun towards steps and sits down with him on steps (thinking in mind-how innocent Arjun is just speaks whatever is in mind) and

RPS: Really, And what do you think?

Arjun: About what dad?

RPS: About me? On, why i adopted you?

Arjun: Till today evening, i was thinking the same as Makrand

RPS: And from today evening

Arjun(hugging): Because you like me and love me dad

RPS in mind (Thats not the only reason-there is one more deeper purpose)

Arjun: dad

RPS: Yes, beta (coming out of thoughts)

RPS(hugging him tight): I know you have faced lots of trouble in childhood Arjun and that too alone. But from now on you are my son. You do not have to fear anyone for any action or think twice before saying or doing anything because from now on i am there to care for you and protect you. From now on i do not want a hesitant and shy Arjun, i want a confident and bold Arjun. Do what you think is right and if you do not understand come and speak to me or dadi. If its something you cannot discuss with elders, i mean kid talks speak to rashi or mikhael. They are your elder siblings and i am sure will guide you. Otherwise i am always there right.

Arjun nodding his head

RPS: That's my son.

Arjun: Dad, mom is fine with me staying in house right?

RPS: Yes and looks at him

RPS: I know Arjun, Kumud and Mikhael have not yet accepted you whole heartedly. But Mikhael is like that, childish, egostic and immature. Give both of them sometime. I am sure they will accept you too but it will take a bit longer. But promise me you will try your best to make them comfortable. I know it should be other way round but i am requesting you because you are mature and can understand. You promise me that right.

Arjun: Promise, dad

RPS:One more thing Arjun you spoke openly to me about your thoughts on why i got you from orphanage. But just one advice, do not speak so openly about your thoughts with others especially outsiders. You are small and cannot understand the world still but people take advantage of other people's open nature and innocence. Yes you can speak openly with me on anything you think, but avoid doing that in outside world. Sometimes speaking out your thoughts can lead to grave consequences. I am not saying keep quiet or avoid speaking with anyone but there is a correct time to speak or reveal anything. If you do not reveal your thoughts at correct time they go waste, they lose their value. Apart from your close family avoid speaking openly about your thoughts with anyone else.

Arjun is listening to him confused.

RPS: You did not understand what i said.

Arjun: Not really dad

RPS: You will as you grow up. Forget all that now. Let's go in now and open all gifts you got. Chalo Chalo Chalo (RPS gets up looking all excited and takes Arjun inside with him)

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Posted: 14 years ago
yay!! i am rejoicing along wid arjun... it must be such a beautiful brilliant glowing feeling inside of him to be accepted n attended in that way.. n i like the growing pace of the sibling-relationships


Edited by aksh4IF - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Shilpa.Arjuhiii

hello prem,

your FF is always so detailed and i love it, and i love the relationship between arjun and rashi but somehow i feel sorry for mickael -.-
and i think in the last parts RPS was a great Father :))

love it and cont. and thanks for the Pms

I am just trying to analyze why mikhael behaves the way he behaves in serial through my FF
so trying tp put some childhood scenes to anlayze why he behaves badly with Arjun and cannot stand him.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Scene73 Arjun opening his gifts

After everyone leaves Mikhael, Rashi, Billu, Makrand and Arjun along with RPS sit in Arjun's bedroom opening all gifts Arjun has got. Arjun has got some very nice and costly gifts.

Arjun has got an PSPO and Football Guys set. Mikhael likes it so much. Mikhael opens both and sees it.

Mikhael: Wow, football guys set, lucky Arjun.

Arjun: You like it.

Mikhael: Yes, very much

Arjun: Then you can keep it

Mikhael: Really, thanks

RPS: No Arjun, these are your gifts. You can keep them. Mikhaelhhhhhhhhhh and stares at him

Mikhael: No, i do not want it. Gives back and gets up

Arjun holds his hand: No, wait Mikhael you can really take it. I do not know how to play these toys. They will be lying in a corner
Mikhael looking at RPS

Arjun: Please dad, can i give it to Mikhaellllllll. I really do not play all this

RPS: Fine(but showing displeasure on face)

After sometime

Mikhael: Wow a latest PSPO. I just love this latest version

RPS: You also have one right

Mikhael: Its an old version

RPS: Thats fine. I will get you one next time. You can adjust with current version

Mikhael getting angry and walks off

Arjun: Mikhael..........................Mikhael

Arjun: Dad, its OK. I will not play in PSPO.

RPS: Enough Arjun, do not spoil him by giving in to all his requests. Already Kumud has spoilt him enough, i do not want another person to start pampering his ego.

Arjun: But he is my brother dad. You only told today right

RPS: No means No. Its my command

After sometime leaves saying "You people open and keep looking. I have work Good Night"

Billu looking at so many gifts and becomes sad

Arjun: What happened Billu?

Billu: Arjun bhai, wish someone had given me so many gifts

Arjun: They are yours also. Since when did my things become mine and not ours? They are all yours and Makrands and Rashi's and Mikhael's too. Take anything you want.

Billu: Thanks Arjun bhai.

Billu picks up one gift and says

Billu: Bhai, can i take this

Arjun: Yes Billu, it's yours

Billu picks one more and says

Billu: And this

Arjun: Yes, take it Billu. You do not have to ask again and again. Take anything you want.

Billu picks up 7-8 of his favourite gifts and gives 3 to Makrand to hold them.

Arjun: Makrand, you can also take any gift that you like

Makrand: No Arjun bhai, you keep them. I will take from you when i want to play

Makrand and Billu: Good night bhai. Good night didi we are going to sleep

Edited by myviewprem - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
haha... looks like i commented before u added the other two posts..

*aksh bows down* superb convo btw arjun n RPS.. I can imagine MK n KK doing that scene.. well not KK but a younger actor.. but MK would have rocked that scene.. I think Sami wud do well too.. hehe... me n my visual imaginations... anyways.. prem.. that convo was superb.. arjun finally shedding his fears about Rudr n trusting him n accepting him as a father! RPS reciprocating but knowing that he has some deep secrets to delve!!⭐️

Mikhail's ego n RPS curbing it as a father should rightly do.. 👍🏼 Arjun easily sharing .. again another quality that is natural.. realistic.. for a kid who has nothing in life.. the more important thing is that he has people to share it with ⭐️ And for Mikhail, who has always had everything, family, material things.. he doesn't appreciate n perceive the people in his life.⭐️ superbly done.. Prem!! Billu being the younger one is easily taken in by the gifts... too innocent to understand, Makarand being the older one takes after Arjun himself.. he is more stable n mature n is also far more reserved. ⭐️

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