New FF: Heer's Secret prt22 pg96 Jun9 - Page 16

Originally posted by: munam_13

that was a nice update jaz...I hate to say this...but I am hating Prem like anything in this fic... aw... Aarav is so cute...waiting for his mommy to show the fishes and Preet is a true gentle man... He surely deserves Heer and vice versa...post the nxt one soom

Priyo....

Originally posted by: 268143

thanx 4 da pm .... am so glad u decided 2 update 😊 well i jst finishd readin it n Aarav is such a cutie lovin him ⭐️ n Preet sounds like da perfect gentlemen 😍

hope u hav a gr8 holiday 👍🏼 sounds like a well needed break aftr hearin how busy uve been 😲

Originally posted by: zaara006

Firstly, thanks for the pm, i was starting to wonder where you were, as there weere no topics fro you.😊 Secondly, gosh.... you have been busy... if thats the right word for it!!!!! 😉 And lastly, thank you for updating the ff, despite the fact that your schedule is very... ummm 'busy', i would say overloaded!!!!! 😆 ha ha...busy seems to not cover it any longer...its odd how busy i am...i was never like this...i guess its the perks of being a senior in university

Now to the ff. It is good, as usual. Prem is a real bad boy in here, isn't he????? !!!!! Preet and Arav are sooo sweet, i cna't decide who is sweeter than who, the little child or the grown, gentleman!!!!!!!😃 Now this is one place n which i wouldn't mind Heer ending up with Preet, but lets see of Prem changes, eh!!!!!!!😊 let me tell you about prem...you aint seen nothing yet...you think this is bad...😉😉 aage aage dekho hota hai kya!!! 😛😛...lets see who gets heer...preet or prem 😉

Good luck with all you exam and presentation, etc(i can't remember what else you said.. 😛😛😛 but good luck for them too!)😊 thanks yaar...i did really good actually...grades were awesome!!! 😛😛😛

Hope you can write update this, when you have a bit of time on your hands. 😆 finally had some time, but thanks for being so understanding...love ya 🤗

Originally posted by: Thapanee

i'm so happy tht u have updated ur ff.....preet is such a nice guy and aarav is so sweet...

enjoy ur holiday and good luck for ur paper and presentations😊

Originally posted by: ashpush

awww Jaz, that was sooooo sweet of u to pm me and let me know...thanx a lot..really appreciate it :)

Now coming to the update...it was awsome Jaz....Hmm so Prem doesnt admit his love huh.....and Aarav is so cute... the way u described his happiness on his "good deed" was so sweet... I actually feel sorry for Heer.She had to go through a lot in her life..Thanx 4 the update Jaz, late though it was😆

And seems like ur really busy...so will u be able to update regularly from now on? update asap

Ash

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!👏

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

hey
awesum update
aarav sooo cute
good luck with ur presentation
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: lian

Hi Jaz,How r u dear??Hope u r sorry u should b sorry im sorry bcos of us u had to update it in ur busy time though u dont have time to breath u had updated it FF only for us thts really appreciatable👏&yes congratulation for ur new black dress.if im not mistaken this ll b ur 5th 1????😳 he he...im still alive yaar...thats all i can say...school, work and family is taking over my life...again 😕😕😕...as for the black dress...lol...you are right 😆😆...good keeping track 😛

This part good👏.Prem!!!He again disgust me😡i really want to hate him(only in this FF)but cant whenever i try Harshu's innocense stop me to hate,I really want to see PremHeer togather now matter how is he but i felt bad for Preet He is toooooooooooo good&so understanding but i cant give him the place of Prem bcos i knw somwhere in his heartt he loves Heer more than the world.Loved Aarav He is really cutsweet mama's sweet boy😳i must say Heer is the greatest moothe&also had a very nice family&friend who support her so well.Preet is a sweet heart i must say the bobd he shares with Aarav hi outstanding,but the bond tht Aarav ll share with Prem will b out of world i believe this lil angel will change Prem for sure&ll feel sad for Preet but cant help it im selfish i cant tolarate PremHeer's seperation
i warned you all...that prem would not be our typical prem...yeh toh kuch aur hi hai...just wait and watch how he turns out...😛😛😛...ha ha...true prem loyalist i see...lets see if you feel the same way as the story progresses...lol...lets see if prem changes after he finds out about aarav...the question isnt WHEN he will find out..it is IF he will find out 😉😉

Originally posted by: angel82

Jaz, no probs hon about the updates..take your time..we can understand that life keeps you busy...It keeps all of busy at one point or the other.... Oh cool so your gonna have a blast in your new Black dress in vegas..enjoy!!😉 vegas was really fun...the dress rocked, we danced until our feet were about to fall off...and let me tell you...not drinking has perks...like you get to see your friends drunk dialing and stuff 😆😆😆...hilarious!!!

Awesome update...Prem so much in love yet not ready to accept it...thats his character in this story where he doesnt want any commitments in life, rite? yup..thats right...he is a *wham bam thank you mam* kind of guy 😆😆😆

Aarav was soo sweet....well described...his moments with Heer, Balraj's thoughts, Prem's thoughts everything.... thanks for liking my details...i think sometimes i go a bit overboard 😳😳😳

Preet a perfect gentleman, every girl's dream guy....Now thats not Fair...I mean , thats what our Prem has to be but here its Preet... imagining HC as Prem here is quite difficult....He cant be a Prem who goes around sleeping with women...I always get Richard Gere's pic in my mind while reading Prem's part...except for some parts where I can imagine HC ..and only when HC is Prem , AG is Heer ...and when Prem is RG Preet is Clooney for me...hehehe...I know all oldies...but I soon want to kick RG from my mind and bring HC completely, after Prem becomes a more desirable character in this story... lol...i know prem is hard to digest in this story...but it doesnt get better...not now at least...watch what this playboy does 😛😛😛...and i presonally am rooting for Preet...but i always deliver what the audience wants...😳😳😳

I like the way the story is shaping up...its cool....Hope Heer realizes that its only Prem she loves and Prem too realizes that he cannot live without her and tries to win her back...Hope Prem comes to know about Aarav and he becomes the best dad in the world , a better one than Preet...hope Prem becomes every girl's dream guy....I really feel bad for Preet but Prem and Heer are meant to be.... ha ha...another premeer loyalist...should i be shocked...i think not 😆😆😆...ill see what i can do...but like i said once to someone else...the question isnt when, its if prem finds out about aarav 😉😉😉...evil...right 😈

Now all the hopes written above, is becoz I will be very less active during december and I will be taking a long leave from the forum from Jan... so dont know how far I will be able to catch up with this wonderful FF... aww...angie...say it aint so...i hope we do see you around...sorry for the delay but it couldnt be helped...hope you are back soon 😃😃

luv

Angie

Originally posted by: Parth Garewal

awww....i love aarav...sooo sweeet lil kid...very nice description of him...n loved preet's side too but rele curious to noe what n how prem ll do...i noe he ll get his heer back but since u told that he is villain in dis ff then lemme say...i rele dont want heer to go wid preet but i dont want him to b wid a villain too...so i ll accept her as preet's wify in future,,hehe...well i love ur story line...very nice...love ur ff..but my lil complain if u dont mind - plz update soon....as ur ff soooo nice n v r toooo curious to noe what ll happen...but v ll noe only if u update n so plz update soon....

Originally posted by: fj08

hi jaz
firstly thanks for the pm and the update, i have been waiting for this one for a while now, cant hate prem, dont make him do something really bad but can see he just cannot admit the truth even to himself, his struggle seems to be within himself, feel sorry for him but i think being with heer and his son would make him a better person........have u read "Blackmail' by rehana, think her id is tania something, sort of similar story to this one but in that prem acknowledges his love for heer the first and only time he sleeps with her.....and later forces her to marry him when he finds out abt his son.......interestingly both of u have given him sons and not daughters........anyways i dont see the same happening here, maybe prem will use aarav to get heer to marry him and will later fall in love with him and also fess up his love for heer.....
preet i think will be a sweatheart and see that heer loves prem and aarav too needs his real father, but i am guessing he has been in love with heer for a long time since they were firends from before so maybe he wont give up too easily......
anyways do keep updating this its really very different....
coming back to the delay and ur plans to party in vegas.....when the cat is away to BD the mice are partying in vegas....have a great time and come back to the forum soon, hopefully as soon as the show and prem comes back 😉

Originally posted by: kis desh Rocks!

hey this is a good update, and I really loved heer and Aarav's relationship.. it's amazing..... please update soon, waiting for your next PM....

Originally posted by: destinny

hi very cute update. pls PM me everytime u update ur FF.

Pls add me to ur PM list.

thannx and do continue soon

Originally posted by: fijiana

hey jaz.hey no worries know you are super busy and exams are important.coming back tothe updates awesome as usual.aaarav sounds cute and pretty much adorable.well when prem finds out about aarav he is so going to get him at any cost.well do update if and when you get the time.well enjoy vegas and all the best for the finals and presentation.take care

Originally posted by: hil4ever

awesomeeeee update!!! luved prem's and heer's intense conversation!!! i really like how much preet understands heer!! aarav is simply adorable.....and plz update soon this time....luv this ff and u know it!

Originally posted by: shabo24

Hayyeee!Koi busy rehna tumse sikhe!!🤗Good luck with everything di!! And have fun in Vegas....ohhh sexy dress!😉 shabbo!!!! have i told you i love you lately!!! ❤️...🤗...everything went really well, school, vegas and weddings 😃😃😃...thanks for the wishes 😃😃😃

Great update!!!omgg i wanted to hit Prem round the head...kya ego hai yaar!! Ufff ladke bhi naa.....I loved the lil standoffnish between the two really interesting!! And SO MUCH fun to read!🤣 heer has a secret to protect at all costs...and prem just wants in her pants again...there has to be some s*xual tension right...😉😉😉...dono ke dono stubborn hai...aage aage dekho...hota hai kya 😛😛

Aarav...☺️I'm in love.....for the billionth time...☺️ i know right!? he is too cute...akhir...beta kiska hai 😛

OMG...I FELL IN LOVE WITH PREET!He is just so perfect in this part...I mean Heer is so lucky...not that she should stay with Preet of course, it's Prem forever....but then awww poor Preet will be BROKEN!! Becharra....who will be his new lady love??? *wink* Tell naa! who says that preet needs a new lady love...who says its not prem who will need a new lady love 😉😉😉...vaise...lets say for arguments sake...preet needs a new woman...are you volunteering 😛😛😛...

Can't wait to see what happens next! next part up soon...promise 😳

Shabz

Originally posted by: .xganga.x

Hey!

That was an awesome update!

Sorry for commenting late!

I absoulutely adore Aarav!! He's soooo cute, and sweet how he let Bob go because he apparently had a wife and little kids....lol!

Preet's just as sweet, talk about understanding!!!

Can't wait till the next update! and thanks for the PM!

xXx

Sunayna

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Originally posted by: chillingal16

awww....arav is so cute...

love the relationship between heer and him...

and preet..wow so understanding..

prem is such an.. i dn tknw..dnt hve any words for him...

cant wait for the next part..

finally caugth up!

can u pls PM me when u post the next part!

thanks in advance!

Originally posted by: prab_rockinn

thx for the pm..... the part is really nice...

it so beautifully explains prems condition and his ego...

aarav is adorable.... n preet is awesome... i mean aaj kal aise ladke milte kahaan hai....

will be waitin for more......

Originally posted by: Pyari_Zahra

I just read all the parts, and I have to say, I am absolutely loving your FF- it's amazing!! wow...thanks for taking the time to read all my parts and for such a long comment...i Love it!! 😃😃I love Heer, it's so great that she is strong enough to stand up to Prem despite being a single mother having faced so much at such a young age!! I guess the support she has recieved from her parents and Preet has given her this strength, and of course having that little sweet Aarav with her 😳 I'm happy she had support from her parents- Teji and Balraj sound wonderful!! yeah...they are...i always hated how desi parents like disown their daughters when the make these kinds of mistakes...i mean...haan...ghalti hui hai...but come on...what can you do...suck it up and be there for her because she needs you the most now...right? 😳 Heer's love for Aarav is so sweet, Aarav is so cute, I love him already- love his little story about letting Bob the fish go as he had a wife and kids, it was so adorable, LOL!! And when you write about him 'squirming to get free' from his mother's hug was just spot on- exactly how I imagined a little child would behave- well written 👏!! i could totally picture the scene in my head when i was writing it...it seemed so natural 😛 Oh gosh, no matter how big-headed Prem is, we will end up loving him more, won't we?? Your desription of him in black is just so sexy!! 😳 I wonder how long it will take him to find out Heer's secret, and to what extent he can go to to get his Heer! He feels that having sex with Heer will quench the thirst he has for her, but I think deep down he knows that it won't make things better, as he really loves her and it will take more than having 'last time' sex to make him forget about her! Someone wrote a comment about him being a 'grown man with needs' but I don't think this is true, as his grown needs were being fulfilled by meaningless sex with those gorgeous models, so clearly it is not all about the sex when it comes to Heer, deep down he loves her, he is just not ready to admit it yet, and I'm sure you will reveal why that is 😉 yaar...you caught on right away...it isnt just about sex for prem...although that is what he thinks...but you are right...if it was just needs...hes got bimbos left, right and center...why would he search for heer...this isnt a physical need...its an emotional need he refused to see 😉😉😉...im so glad you caught on...no one else mentioned it 😆😆 I can't wait to see how Prem and Heer's relationship unfolds, but I can't help feel bad for Preet- he's such a darling, he has always stood by Heer which is a very rare trait in men, if only all men were like this, LOL!! Great FF so far, I hope you will be able to update soon, but I totally understand how pressuring work can be, so take your time!! It's the same with me, university takes up so much energy and time!! I understand that you have your own studies to think of!! I just couldn't help expressing how much I love this FF, you are an incredibly talented writer 👏👏👏 I like the fact that it is modern, it makes it more unique and interesting to read, as I have already read too many traditional FFs and want to read something different!! Hope you will continue with this as it is great!! xx thanks for such a wonderful comment...i look forward to reading lamba comments from you from now on 😉😉...no pressure though...well...maybe a little 😆😆😆...life has a way of taking over preset plans...what can ya do...but next update will be posted very soon...keep an eye out for the PM 😃😃😃

Originally posted by: chicagogal

this is the 1st and only ff i read and will read...the best...very well...

Originally posted by: shabo24

Hayyeee!Koi busy rehna tumse sikhe!!🤗Good luck with everything di!! And have fun in Vegas....ohhh sexy dress!😉 shabbo!!!! have i told you i love you lately!!! ❤️...🤗...everything went really well, school, vegas and weddings 😃😃😃...thanks for the wishes 😃😃😃as a matter of fact, yesh you have, but no harm in repeating😉😛😛

Aarav...☺️I'm in love.....for the billionth time...☺️ i know right!? he is too cute...akhir...beta kiska hai 😛ahhh ye baath tum bilkul sahi kahi!😆

OMG...I FELL IN LOVE WITH PREET!He is just so perfect in this part...I mean Heer is so lucky...not that she should stay with Preet of course, it's Prem forever....but then awww poor Preet will be BROKEN!! Becharra....who will be his new lady love??? *wink* Tell naa! who says that preet needs a new lady love...who says its not prem who will need a new lady love 😉😉😉...vaise...lets say for arguments sake...preet needs a new woman...are you volunteering 😛😛😛...YES YES YES! A thousand times yes!! chalo, prem nahi, toh bhai hi toh sahi...akhir preet bhi burra nahin hain naa?😉😉

Can't wait to see what happens next! next part up soon...promise 😳take ur time didz! it;s worth the wait😳😃

Shabz

Preet had dropped Heer off at the front porch, just like a true gentleman. They paused for a minute outside and said their good-bye's. Preet placed a soft kiss on her lips, and then while resting his forehead on hers he said, "I love you."

Doing what she usually did, Heer just pushed away from Preet after a few seconds. She took his hands in hers, smiled at him, then leaned in and placed a kiss on the corner of his lips and whispered, "Goodnight." Then she went inside the house and leaned against the door in the dark as she heard Preet's car drive away.

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Heer knew that she had hit the jackpot with Preet. He was the kind of guy that every girl dreamed of. He was the guy that had fallen for her, just because she was who she was; just because she was Heer Maan, his childhood friend and love. Even after all they had been through he had never left her side. How many men would have stayed behind to help raise another man's child?

Preet knew Heer inside and out, better then she even knew herself sometimes. He did all the little things that Heer missed when she was with Prem. Her and Prem's relationship was not the usual; they were boyfriend and girlfriend and nothing more really - most of the day they did their own thing and usually only met at night, that too in bed. They had done the usual dinners with stock holders and society members, the charities, the auctions, the company parties and so on. At the beginning they had gone out, but it soon stopped because Heer didn't like the attention they drew from the paparazzi, but what surprised Heer the most was that Prem had seemed unaffected by the fact that their social life ceased. Still she didn't mind as long as she had him in her life.

With Preet it was something else all together. They were your typical couple who had dates and small fights. They joked around with one another and laughed with one another. Most importantly, they were one hundred percent honest with each other, no matter what. The honesty is something that Heer valued over all else. She knew that no matter what happened she could turn back and see Preet behind her, always; she cherished that with all her heart.

However, Preet did more then just that. Preet was the kind of guy that texted her every morning to say "Good morning.", and texted every night to say "Good night and sweet dreams." He knew she loved the rain so he texted her every time it rained, he texted her just when he was missing her, even if they were in the shop together, just at different ends. He never forgot any important date - from her and Aarav's birthday to their first official date, even her parent's anniversary. He would get her flowers just because, especially orchids because she loved them. He never…never…failed to compliment her when she dressed up, and even if she wasn't dressed up.

Heer remembered one time when she had just gotten out of the shower; her hair was a wet mess of curls, her face void of any trace of make up. She was in a robe putting cream on her face and hands. She was walking in the hallway and saw Preet and he said, "Hey beautiful."

"I do not look beautiful. I look like I just woke up, no make up, just so…blah," Heer said, trying to brush off his compliment.

Preet came by her and pushed a strand of her hair behind one ear, and caressed her face with his palm, "You do not look 'blah'. You look fresh and naturally beautiful. You don't need make up to enhance your beauty. You look perfect." Saying that he placed a kiss on her forehead just as Aarav ran to him and took him away to show Preet his new toys. Heer just stared on, a new warmth seeping through her body.

Preet was that guy who she could turn to in times of need and despair. He was the guy she could celebrate her happiness with. He offered a shoulder to cry on and hope to hold on to. Above all, he was the guy who never failed to make her smile. How she caught the attention of such a great guy, she would never know.

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Heer made her way to her room, only after she hand peeked in on Aarav. He was sleeping peacefully, his one arm around his stuffed Sponge Bob, one arm out of the covers dangling over the bed. She tip-toed in and straightened him out, pulled the cover over him once again, and then placed a soft kiss on his forehead. She watched him for a bit; he was innocent and peaceful, totally unaware of the storm that was brewing.

Heer walked out and slowly closed the door of Aarav's room and headed to hers. She opened the door to her room, but her eyes were closed as she rubbed her temples, feeling the onset of a headache. She stopped for a second to just breathe.

"So, is it true?" came a voice from somewhere in the room.

Heer's eyes shot up in shock, her heart raced at a mile a minute; she wasn't expecting anyone in her room at this time of night. Once her eyes focused and the fear died, Heer saw her two darling sisters sitting in her room, Ashlesha in her chair and Meher on her bed, with both sets of eyes glued on her, waiting for an answer.

"Shit! What the hell are you guys doing here now? You nearly scared the life out of me!" she demanded. Putting her purse and coat down she flipped the switch on the wall illuminating the room with a soft light.

"Sorry Didi, I told Meher this wasn't a good idea. I knew we should have waited until tomorrow morning," Ashlesha said in a guilty voice.

"Oh quit being so goody-goody Rash! So is it true, is it true?" Meher asked as she jumped on the bed.

"Is what true?" Heer replied, trying to avoid the subject she knew her sisters were inkling towards.

"Di don't play dumb! Is it true? Is Prem Jhuneja really back?" mocked Meher.

"Yes, he is back?" Ashlesha asked.

Heer watched the emotions play on the faces of her sisters; it started with shock, acceptance, intrigue and ended in curiosity.

"Did you tell him about Aarav Didi?" Ashlesha jumped in.

"No," Heer said, her eyes down cast.

"What?! Why not!? He has to know, now that he is back," Meher protested.

"Look Meher, I have already been over this with Mom and Dad. I refuse to go through this with you two as well."

"Don't get all high-and-mighty with me Di; have you listened to that boy of yours lately?" Meher questioned. "All he talks about is 'dad stuff'."

"What do you mean?" Now her sisters had her full attention, as Heer waited for an answer.

"What Meher means Didi is..." Ashlesha came and joined Meher on the bed and continued, but not before playfully smacking Meher on the head. "What Meher's saying is that Aarav talks about his 'dad' a lot. The other night when we read him his bed time story, the one about the elephant who broke his trunk and was looking for someone to fix it, Aarav just went on and on about his 'dad'."

"Yeah..." Meher piped in, "...he said that when he found his 'real Dad', his Dad would fix everything for him. How cute, but how sad, is that?"

Heer clenched her fists at her side, tension running through her body. "Look Meher I have enough to deal with, I don't have time for this now."

"But Didi, now that Prem is back in town, he is bound to run into Aarav somewhere. Don't you think that one look at him and Prem will know Aarav is his?" Ashlesha offered.

Heer felt the pangs of her headache, turn into full fledged throbs. Ashlesha was right; one look at Aarav and Prem would know Aarav was his son. Aarav was the splitting image of Prem, Heer noticed it right from the moment they placed Aarav in her arms after he was born. They had the same deep chocolate eyes, the same wavy and unruly hair, the same bridge on their nose, the same almost non-existent dimple on their right cheek, you could only see it if you knew it was there, the same temperament that could rise and fall with the drop of a hat.

"Now let's get to the good stuff." Meher said, sitting up properly, with her legs folded under her, and rubbing her hands together. "How was it when you saw him? Was the sexual tension still there, it was, wasn't it? He kissed you didn't he? I just know he did. Prem seems like he is the knock-you-over-the-head-with-a-club kind of man," she said not waiting for an answer to the first question. She looked at her sisters who looked at her blankly, "I mean that he is a passionate man. All he probably has to do is look at a girl and she will be more then willing to fall into bed with him. I mean he probably has a big..."

"Meher!" Both Heer and Ashlesha screamed in unison. They looked at each other and began laughing.

"Bed…I was going to say he probably has a big BED." Meher completed. She looked at her sisters who clearly looked relieved. "Did you think that I was referring to the male anatomy? Oh my God…you did, didn't you? Ewww! Gross! Get your minds out of the gutter!"

Heer and Ashlesha looked at each other and blushed just a bit because of their train of thought. Life with Meher had taught them to expect the unexpected.

"You know Meher, I swear sometimes I think Mom and Dad lied to us." Heer said between her giggles.

"Huh, why?" Meher asked confused.

"Because sometimes I swear it's you that was adopted and not Ashlesha." Heer replied.

"I know, right? I'm telling you Didi, Mom and Dad just found our Meher at the side of the street and took her in. They just said I was adopted because I'm the one that is mature and has the stronger heart," Ashlesha teased.

"Ha ha, you two are just classical comedians. I'm laughing so hard, my sides hurt. NOT!" Meher shot back, and then crossed her arms in mock anger.

"Oh come on Meher. We are only teasing," Ashlesha said as she took Meher into a hug.

"Stop it Rash, get off of me!" Meher shrugged her off.

Both sisters noticed that Heer and become quiet and was just staring off into space, lost in her own world.

"Sorry Didi, we didn't want to put more stress and worry on you. Right Meher?" Ashlesha nudged.

"Yeah, I guess so. Sorry Di," Meher replied, half heartedly.

"We should go, night Didi," Ashlesha said as she dragged Meher, by the hand, out of her room.

Heer's reply was no more then an "Uh huh." She fell onto the bed as her two sisters exited.

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Heer watched as her sisters left. She was amazed at how different the three of them were, yet how united they were. Heer was the talented artsy one, who took the art classes and ballet classes. She had good grades in school and was the typical elder daughter of the house. Meher was the off the wall, fun and games kind of girl, she always had been. She had began taking acting classes as a small child in camp, and just kept running with it. She managed to pass school, usually with half descent grades. She was not the least bit serious about life, and she had some mouth on her, said what ever came to mind. Then there was Ashlesha, the golden-one. She was the one with perfect 4.0 GPA all through high school and now into university. She chose the medical profession, and planned to end up with an MD even if it killed her; she would be called Dr. Maan come hell or high water. She was the apple of their parents, the perfect child; respectful and kind. Of course, she was also the adopted one.

Two years after Heer was born her parents wanted to have another child. They tried and tried for nearly two years with no success. They did everything they could from body-temperature mapping to ovulation sticks, to in-vitro as well; but nothing helped. The doctors said that the chances of Teji having another baby were slim to none. So they had decided to adopt a child. They had a home, stability and love to give a child who was in need. After another year they had gotten a month old baby girl. It took time because they made sure that everything was legal and done properly. They named the baby Ashlesha, and just like that Heer had a baby sister at the age of five.

Heer and Ashlesha had bonded just like blood siblings. She watched out for her sister, took care of her sister, and loved her sister to death; after all...she had a permanent play date. Balraj and Teji were happy with their two girls. It came as a huge shock when they found out that Teji was pregnant, three months after bringing Ashlesha home; shocked but happy none the less.

Soon it was Heer, Ashlesha and new baby Meher. They three sisters were inseparable. Meher and Ashlesha were so close in age that you would think they were the closest of the three, but that was not the case. Heer and Ashlesha were closer than Meher. Meher was the odd ball, dare-devil child, while Heer and Ashlesha preferred to stick to their tea-parties.

One month, Ashlesha had gotten a terrible skin rash, which took weeks to heal. Meher had begun calling her 'rash-rash-Ashlesha' to tease her. However, over the years it had died down to just Rash, but it was more endearing now. Ashlesha had tried to fight the nickname but lost, so she just accepted it, and now even liked it. It was a symbol, albeit unflattering symbol, of love that the three sisters shared for one another.

Even thought the sisters were different like that, they're one in the same. If anyone so much as looked at the other in a bad way, the other two were there to take care of the situation. They united against their parents when it came to grades and late nights. They defended each other no matter what, even if they were wrong. They were always there for each other. Heer could never forget that. They had been so helpful when she was pregnant with Aarav. They took her to doctor's appointments, they dealt with her cravings and mood swings. Along with Preet, they are what made her finish school and give birth to a baby, all with a smile on her face...most of the time.

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Kay…im bak!! And yay im the first to comment!!!! lolz

OMG!!! Jazz….that was a wonderful update!!!! I loved it!!!!!!! I've been a silent reader of your ff…and I also read your other ff: ek paal….that was also fantastic!!! I love your writing!!! And I can say that you're very talented!!!! Keep up the great work!!!!!

Awww….preet is sooo sweet!! True…any girl would like to have a guy like him…but I hope in this fanfic Prem gets better and doesn't act like a player…lolz…I love the bond between the three sisters…its so sweet…even though they're all different but still are insperable…aww..how cute!!! And aarav seems really cute!!! I bet he looks really handsome since he literally looks like his dad…lolz…he must have girls surrounding him all the time!!! lol

Well seems like you've been busy the whole December…glad that you had a great time in vegas…I've never been there…but I'd love to go anytime!!!! I know how cousins and family can get really annoying…half my winter break was to survive my family and cousins…lolz…so I understand!!! But yeah…I loved the update!!! You did an awesome job as always….i love reading you FFs!!!! they're very entertaining…and keeps the reader glued to it!!!! Well happy new year…looking forward to your next udapte!!!

Bye

Garima