New FF: Heer's Secret prt22 pg96 Jun9 - Page 15

hi jaz
firstly thanks for the pm and the update, i have been waiting for this one for a while now, cant hate prem, dont make him do something really bad but can see he just cannot admit the truth even to himself, his struggle seems to be within himself, feel sorry for him but i think being with heer and his son would make him a better person........have u read "Blackmail' by rehana, think her id is tania something, sort of similar story to this one but in that prem acknowledges his love for heer the first and only time he sleeps with her.....and later forces her to marry him when he finds out abt his son.......interestingly both of u have given him sons and not daughters........anyways i dont see the same happening here, maybe prem will use aarav to get heer to marry him and will later fall in love with him and also fess up his love for heer.....
preet i think will be a sweatheart and see that heer loves prem and aarav too needs his real father, but i am guessing he has been in love with heer for a long time since they were firends from before so maybe he wont give up too easily......
anyways do keep updating this its really very different....
coming back to the delay and ur plans to party in vegas.....when the cat is away to BD the mice are partying in vegas....have a great time and come back to the forum soon, hopefully as soon as the show and prem comes back 😉

hey this is a good update, and I really loved heer and Aarav's relationship.. it's amazing..... please update soon, waiting for your next PM....

hi very cute update. pls PM me everytime u update ur FF.

awesomeeeee update!!! luved prem's and heer's intense conversation!!! i really like how much preet understands heer!! aarav is simply adorable.....and plz update soon this time....luv this ff and u know it!

Hayyeee!Koi busy rehna tumse sikhe!!🤗Good luck with everything di!! And have fun in Vegas....ohhh sexy dress!😉

Great update!!!omgg i wanted to hit Prem round the head...kya ego hai yaar!! Ufff ladke bhi naa.....I loved the lil standoffnish between the two really interesting!! And SO MUCH fun to read!🤣

Aarav...☺️I'm in love.....for the billionth time...☺️

OMG...I FELL IN LOVE WITH PREET!He is just so perfect in this part...I mean Heer is so lucky...not that she should stay with Preet of course, it's Prem forever....but then awww poor Preet will be BROKEN!! Becharra....who will be his new lady love??? *wink* Tell naa!

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Shabz

Hey!

awww....arav is so cute...

I just read all the parts, and I have to say, I am absolutely loving your FF- it's amazing!! I love Heer, it's so great that she is strong enough to stand up to Prem despite being a single mother having faced so much at such a young age!! I guess the support she has recieved from her parents and Preet has given her this strength, and of course having that little sweet Aarav with her 😳 I'm happy she had support from her parents- Teji and Balraj sound wonderful!! Heer's love for Aarav is so sweet, Aarav is so cute, I love him already- love his little story about letting Bob the fish go as he had a wife and kids, it was so adorable, LOL!! And when you write about him 'squirming to get free' from his mother's hug was just spot on- exactly how I imagined a little child would behave- well written 👏!! Oh gosh, no matter how big-headed Prem is, we will end up loving him more, won't we?? Your desription of him in black is just so sexy!! 😳 I wonder how long it will take him to find out Heer's secret, and to what extent he can go to to get his Heer! He feels that having sex with Heer will quench the thirst he has for her, but I think deep down he knows that it won't make things better, as he really loves her and it will take more than having 'last time' sex to make him forget about her! Someone wrote a comment about him being a 'grown man with needs' but I don't think this is true, as his grown needs were being fulfilled by meaningless sex with those gorgeous models, so clearly it is not all about the sex when it comes to Heer, deep down he loves her, he is just not ready to admit it yet, and I'm sure you will reveal why that is 😉 I can't wait to see how Prem and Heer's relationship unfolds, but I can't help feel bad for Preet- he's such a darling, he has always stood by Heer which is a very rare trait in men, if only all men were like this, LOL!! Great FF so far, I hope you will be able to update soon, but I totally understand how pressuring work can be, so take your time!! It's the same with me, university takes up so much energy and time!! I understand that you have your own studies to think of!! I just couldn't help expressing how much I love this FF, you are an incredibly talented writer 👏👏👏 I like the fact that it is modern, it makes it more unique and interesting to read, as I have already read too many traditional FFs and want to read something different!! Hope you will continue with this as it is great!! xx