New FF: Heer's Secret prt22 pg96 Jun9

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#131

that was a nice update jaz...I hate to say this...but I am hating Prem like anything in this fic... aw... Aarav is so cute...waiting for his mommy to show the fishes and Preet is a true gentle man... He surely deserves Heer and vice versa...post the nxt one soom

Priyo....

Quote

268143

@268143

Master

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#132

thanx 4 da pm .... am so glad u decided 2 update 😊 well i jst finishd readin it n Aarav is such a cutie lovin him ⭐️ n Preet sounds like da perfect gentlemen 😍

hope u hav a gr8 holiday 👍🏼 sounds like a well needed break aftr hearin how busy uve been 😲

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

zaara006

@zaara006

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#133

Firstly, thanks for the pm, i was starting to wonder where you were, as there weere no topics fro you.😊 Secondly, gosh.... you have been busy... if thats the right word for it!!!!! 😉 And lastly, thank you for updating the ff, despite the fact that your schedule is very... ummm 'busy', i would say overloaded!!!!! 😆

Now to the ff. It is good, as usual. Prem is a real bad boy in here, isn't he????? !!!!! Preet and Arav are sooo sweet, i cna't decide who is sweeter than who, the little child or the grown, gentleman!!!!!!!😃 Now this is one place n which i wouldn't mind Heer ending up with Preet, but lets see of Prem changes, eh!!!!!!!😊

Good luck with all you exam and presentation, etc(i can't remember what else you said.. 😛😛😛 but good luck for them too!)😊

Hope you can write update this, when you have a bit of time on your hands. 😆

Edited by zaara006 - 16 years ago

Quote

Thapanee

@Thapanee

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#134

i'm so happy tht u have updated ur ff.....preet is such a nice guy and aarav is so sweet...

enjoy ur holiday and good luck for ur paper and presentations😊

Quote

ashpush

@ashpush

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#135

awww Jaz, that was sooooo sweet of u to pm me and let me know...thanx a lot..really appreciate it :)

Now coming to the update...it was awsome Jaz....Hmm so Prem doesnt admit his love huh.....and Aarav is so cute... the way u described his happiness on his "good deed" was so sweet... I actually feel sorry for Heer.She had to go through a lot in her life..Thanx 4 the update Jaz, late though it was😆

And seems like ur really busy...so will u be able to update regularly from now on? update asap

Ash

Quote

Shagufta

@JanuaryEmbers

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#136

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!👏

Quote

poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#137

hey
awesum update
aarav sooo cute
good luck with ur presentation
thanks for pm

Quote

Lamia Tasnim Liana

@-Liana-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#138

Hi Jaz,How r u dear??Hope u r sorry u should b sorry im sorry bcos of us u had to update it in ur busy time though u dont have time to breath u had updated it FF only for us thts really appreciatable👏&yes congratulation for ur new black dress.if im not mistaken this ll b ur 5th 1????😳

This part good👏.Prem!!!He again disgust me😡i really want to hate him(only in this FF)but cant whenever i try Harshu's innocense stop me to hate,I really want to see PremHeer togather now matter how is he but i felt bad for Preet He is toooooooooooo good&so understanding but i cant give him the place of Prem bcos i knw somwhere in his heartt he loves Heer more than the world.Loved Aarav He is really cutsweet mama's sweet boy😳i must say Heer is the greatest moothe&also had a very nice family&friend who support her so well.Preet is a sweet heart i must say the bobd he shares with Aarav hi outstanding,but the bond tht Aarav ll share with Prem will b out of world i believe this lil angel will change Prem for sure&ll feel sad for Preet but cant help it im selfish i cant tolarate PremHeer's seperation

Quote

Angie

@angel82

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#139

Jaz, no probs hon about the updates..take your time..we can understand that life keeps you busy...It keeps all of busy at one point or the other.... Oh cool so your gonna have a blast in your new Black dress in vegas..enjoy!!😉

Awesome update...Prem so much in love yet not ready to accept it...thats his character in this story where he doesnt want any commitments in life, rite?

Aarav was soo sweet....well described...his moments with Heer, Balraj's thoughts, Prem's thoughts everything....

Preet a perfect gentleman, every girl's dream guy....Now thats not Fair...I mean , thats what our Prem has to be but here its Preet... imagining HC as Prem here is quite difficult....He cant be a Prem who goes around sleeping with women...I always get Richard Gere's pic in my mind while reading Prem's part...except for some parts where I can imagine HC ..and only when HC is Prem , AG is Heer ...and when Prem is RG Preet is Clooney for me...hehehe...I know all oldies...but I soon want to kick RG from my mind and bring HC completely, after Prem becomes a more desirable character in this story...

I like the way the story is shaping up...its cool....Hope Heer realizes that its only Prem she loves and Prem too realizes that he cannot live without her and tries to win her back...Hope Prem comes to know about Aarav and he becomes the best dad in the world , a better one than Preet...hope Prem becomes every girl's dream guy....I really feel bad for Preet but Prem and Heer are meant to be....

Now all the hopes written above, is becoz I will be very less active during december and I will be taking a long leave from the forum from Jan... so dont know how far I will be able to catch up with this wonderful FF...

luv

Angie

Edited by angel82 - 16 years ago

Quote

Parth Garewal

@Parth Garewal

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#140

awww....i love aarav...sooo sweeet lil kid...very nice description of him...n loved preet's side too but rele curious to noe what n how prem ll do...i noe he ll get his heer back but since u told that he is villain in dis ff then lemme say...i rele dont want heer to go wid preet but i dont want him to b wid a villain too...so i ll accept her as preet's wify in future,,hehe...well i love ur story line...very nice...love ur ff..but my lil complain if u dont mind - plz update soon....as ur ff soooo nice n v r toooo curious to noe what ll happen...but v ll noe only if u update n so plz update soon....

Quote

1 ... 12 13 14 15 16 ... 76

New FF: Heer's Secret prt22 pg96 Jun9 - Page 14

Related Topics

Explore Topics