New FF: Heer's Secret prt22 pg96 Jun9 - Page 17

hey
awesum super update
yay prem's back
wonder what will happen?

Jazzy di!🤗Here's hoping you have more time, ohh your lucky no more clinical hours, I'm still doing hours at the hospital and it's fun and all but sometimes the day never ends.

As usual, amazing, fabulous, awesome, fantastic, excellent, DIVINE! It was a really sweet part, loved reading it, I don't think there is another ff I wait as impatiently to read, don't know how I do it, but these types of updates make it completely worthwhile!

I love Preet.☺️Just the way you described him, I mean any girl has to be paagal not to be heads over heels. Though Heer is another story, and I refuse to believe you will seperate Prem and Heer so I am dreading to see Preet's reaction when heer sadly leaves him. Ohh can I sense a poilte but heated discussion between Prem and Preet, with sarcasam being used to an extreme?? Ohhhh *rubs hands* Ab aayga maaza! But on a serious note, I am completly ready to take over Heer's place in Preet's life.😍

The sister's relationship is just amazing!! The way you described it was really well done! Oh wow, Prem has a big....bed was it? Cool. King sized? *angel face* Wanna tell me what Rash and Heer were thinking? I'm so lost.🤣

Awww Aarav my baby🤗He was only there for 5 sentences, but that's ok, he rocked it!😎

Waiting to see what will happen now!

Shabz

RESERVED- will come back to edit- pakka promise!! xx

jaz...after a long tym and a very long and superb update I really like this preet in your fic...he is such a darling... mann sisters are lovely... and our little araav is cute.....

Priyo

Hey!

hey jaz...finally got a chance to come online this week!

update after so long buyt awsome update.Please try to update at least once a week

hey great update, it is very well written... preet is very caring and sweet, like the conversation between the 3 sisters....really want to know wht happens next😊

glad to hear tht ur presentations/ finals went well

hey.great update!!! loved the conservation between three sisters.

omg meher is so freakin' funny!! haha..😆 "i bet he has a big....bed" lol