FF- - When Love comes in....UpDt......Prem returns - Page 26

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AmanaR thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
great job !!!!!!!! pls continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
great update yaar waise love the blossoming between preet and meher great.i keep on writing prem and heer lol.waise agle update mein prem aur heer ka scene .please please please
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Posted: 17 years ago

leo, that was a good part...Prem wants them to be together....looking forward to the next part

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Posted: 17 years ago
very nice too good
cont soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
hello dear..
very nice update....
preet and mehar.........hmmm....kuch kuch ho rha hai dil mein..
and ice-cream...i love it.....mera bhi dil kar rha hai ice-cream khane ka....
kaash mehar ki jagah pe main hoti........
ice-cream wid PReEt...wow..wat a combination.....hai na??
mehar is so lucky.....m jealous...hahaha
neways, yes dear..hum aapke har dialoge ko bahut dhyan se padte hain...afterall its ur creativity....
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanx sweta dear..........next part I'll be posting very soon and I hope u like that one too.
Thanx amanrankan..............I'll be soon posting the next part so do watch out for it and I hope u will like this scene as well.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanx fijiana I'm glad u r enjoying Preet and Meher's love track........and aapka hukm sar aankhon par...........next update mein its going to be PH............and yaar itna please mat karo u have every right to order me........after all its for u guys that the FFs r written...............so please be free to say whatever u feel whatever u want.

Thanx angel82...........Update thi Meher aur Preet kii and u still zeroed it down to Prem in ur comment...........just like me................chache kuch bhi ho it should be Prem all together..........kyun sahi kaha naa?

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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanx pooji............I'm glad u enjoyed this part as well..............I'll be soon posting the next part.

Thanx zenia..........a very big hellllllllllllo to u too dear.............haan abb toh mera bhi mann kar raha hai icecream khaaney kaa.............my fav flavour s chocolate.......what's urs?............Anyways thanx dear for appreceating my creativiy by being such a careful reader so thatnx once again and I'll be soon pposting the next part................

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Posted: 17 years ago

Alright here's the next part-- 29 (PH special..........I'm sure u all r going to blush red so be ready dear)

Prem then walks out of the room to find Heer cleaning the house…..she is doing dusting of the some scenery on the wall staning on a stool…………………and suddenly she loses her balance…………..and well……………..Prem catches her right on time…………….and she falls into the right hands…………….but her eyes r still closed……………….

She slowly her opens her eyes only to find smiling at her…………..He notices Heer's long hairscovering her face slightly………………and he removes them with his hands and continues to stare down at her…………………and she too keeps looking at him……………..(jadoo jo chal jaata hai …………………..yaar samjha karo?)

In the background bwgins to play the song from the movie Jaane tu ya jaane na-----

Kahiin toh hogi vo………………

Dinyaa jahaan tu mere saath hai………………

Jahaan main………………..

Jahaan tuu…………..

Aur jahaan……………….

Bas tere mere jasbaat hain……………..

Hogi jahaan subah teri……………….

Palkon kii kirnon mein………………..

Dori jahaan chaand kii…………….

Jhooley teri baahon mein………………………

And u see Prem helping Heer with the work inspite of her n number of protests from her side……………while on the other hand u see Preet and Meher who r enjoying themselves havng icecream and chatting with each other…….laughing and smilingtheir ways to glory…………..

Prem asks Heer for the broom who was busy fiddling with he duppatta which she had tied around her waist……………….seeing which Prem steps forward to help her (dekhaa he is such a helping hand………….always ready for Heer…………) And he takes the broom fkrom her hand and getting close to her he unlocks her dupatta also which wastied to Heer's waist………………..

Heer fumbles and then getting a little away by stepping back a few steps……………….. shyly she says stammering-- Yeh…………….Yeh Meher pata nahiin kahaan reh gayi?................Bahot……………..bahot taang karti hai yeh ladki…………….Itna kaam hai…………..Preet…………..Preet bhi pata nahiin ghar pahonchaa yaa nahiin?...................Phone karke pooch toh Prem……………Waise bhi baahar mausam kitnaa kharaab hai……………….Tab………….Tabb takk main neechey SHanno chachi ke paas hoke aati hoon……………….

But humaara Prem is in no such mood………………….and he holds Heer's hand as she makes her way to the door…………………..Heer is taken aback and she slowly turns around to face Prem who looks at her with a serious and intense look on his face. He brings her closer to himself and Heer just looks at him confused and questioningly………………..(Stop blushing guys.........aaspaas baithey log kya kahengey?)

Prem says in his usual husky voice and a low tone-- Poorey jahaan kaa bojh apne kandhon par lekar ghoomti ho………………..sabki fikr karti rehti ho……………..Kabhi iss nacheez ke bare mein bhi soch liya karo………….jskii subah tumhaarey iss haseen chehere ko dekhkar hoti hai………………aur jiski shaam………..tumhaare saath uss har dinn bitaaye lamhon ko yaad kar dhalti hai…………………..

Heer sharmaa jaati hai and usski aankhein bhi jhukk jaati hain…………..and she smiles……blushing her cheeks go red……………seeing which Prem too is extremely elated…………………

Heer looks up at him and asks him-- Itnaa pyaar kartey ho mujse Prem?

Prem nods and says-- Kyun?............Koi shak?.............

And this time holding Heer by her wrist……………he brings her even more close to him………………….while Heer tries to free herself saying-- Chodo Prem…………..koi…………………koi dekh lega…………………Prem with all sincerity in his eyes and that naughty grin on his face he says-- Pyaar kiya toh darnaa kya……………………

Heer smiles ………blushing……..and her face lightens up suddenly……………….as an idea strikes her…........and looking away from Prem………….over his shoulder and right towards the entrance gate…………….her expression changes…………….and she says shocked as if her eyes would fall out of their sockets………….and she almost screams-- Shannon chachi app?!

Kaisa laga?

Jaldi batao.
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome update.PH scenes were great .pls continue soon

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