FF- - When Love comes in....UpDt......Prem returns - Page 24

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Posted: 17 years ago
man oh man..u created such a suspense at the end yaar..hmm..but it was really nice..hopefully Gaya3 does a good homework and expose DJ..
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Posted: 17 years ago

Thanx pooji…………..Cool yaar I'm glad u found their hug cute and u went awwwwwwwwwwww………Chalo atleast I can make u imagine the situation and the scene……………And yaa u know my fav colour…..what's urs?……………..I like light blue and baby pink colours too………….😊

Thanx tanyaa………..Chalo u found it good and yes dear I'll be soon posting the next part………..so watch out for it.😊

Thanx amanranjan………….yaa agree with u………….but u see their love is so true…………kisi aur kii zaroorat hii nahiin padhti😳…………They manage everything on their gutfeel itself…………Baaki dekhtey jao abb kya hota hai………….😊

Thanx sweta dear……..kya yaar itna saa bhi sabr nahiin hota…………..well I certainly take it as a complement………matlab u enjoy my ff so much?!................Thanx once again dear and I'll be soon posting the enxt part hope u r online dear…………..😊

Thanx rani (ranrags)………….atleast u enjoyed the suspense…afterall story mein suspense naa ho th phir vo toh kisi bhi fairytale kii tarah lagi…………..and they lived happily everafter types……………Anyways thanx once again dear…………and Prem's mom doing her homework on DJ chachi…………..that was good…………😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
Alright guys here's the next long part-- 27. I hope u all enjoy this on as well.
Its night and PH along with Preet and Meher have reached the house……………….where they all r greeted by Shanno chachi.

Prem bends to touch her feet and so does Heer and she blesses both of them saying-- ----Khush raho (to Prem)…………….Sada suhaagan raho (to Heer)………………

At this Preet is taken aback and he looks at Meher confused…………..and her expression changes as she understands Preet's confusion and tells him softly…….coming close to him and saying in his ear……………….Hairaan matt ho………….Yeh ghar hummein isi condition par mila hai………….Preet understands and nods his head indiacating that he got it.

And he smiles at her gratefully as it was hard for him to believe his bro would be so fast...........as it was very unlike him...........and Meher smiled back wondering kitnaa bevakoof hai Preet........bhala Prem itni jaldi shaadi kaise kar saakta hai..............

Prem then introduces Preet to her and they all sit and talk wile Prem lies down and watches them all happily spending time with each other…………..talking……………..smiling………laughing…………….and all……………..

After dinner its time for Preet to leave………………Meher, Heer and Shanno chachi r in the kitchen busy with clearing up things……………….and Preet is sitting with Prem by his bedside.

He says-- Bhai aapko chod ke jaane ka mann bilkul nahiin hai…………………(he pauses……….and then all of a sudden………….the pain of the past so many days…………..which Preet had hidden from all…………………the pain he had refused to show………..to share……………with anyone and even with himself……………….came out in the open as tears……………which rolled down his face……….and he sobs holding both of Prem's hands in his)…………Waapas laut aao BB……………ghar waapas laut aao………main aapko bahot miss karta hoon…………………….

Prem too has tears in his eyes seeing his little brother…………….jiskii khushi ke liye he can do anything………………so miserable…………..thet too because of him……………………..and he embraces Preet by holding him by his shoulders and says in a determined manner-- Nahiin Preet…………..tu………tu iss tarah kamzor nahiin padh sakta………………Abb ghar pe sab kuch tujhe hii sambhaalna hai………………meri har zimedaari ko tujhe hii nibhanaa hai…………dekh meri taraf…………..

And Pret looks up at Prem tearfully as his elder brother continued-----------aaj main tujhse kuch maangna chahta hoon Preet…………….dega mujhe?
Preet wipes off his tears and nods…………..desperately wanting to know what his brother…….who had always given him everything and anything he wanted…………….fulfilled his every whim and fancy………….wanted something from him today?...........And so he says-- Anything foru Prem bhaiya……..aap maang kart oh dekhiye…………….

Prem begins-- Main ajj tujhse ek waada chahta hoon Preet…………yeh waada kii tu kal se hii baujii ka business mein haath bataayega……………………..Bauji ke saath milkar rahega…………….Meri kami ghar mein kisi ko bhi mehsoos nahiin hone dega………….Maa aur Kulraaj dii ka khayaal rakhega………unhein meri kami kabhi nahiin khalnee dega……………aur Veera kii har…………..har wish ko poora karega……………..usse wahi laad aur pyaar dega jo main deta hoon………ek bada bhai aur dost donon bannkar…………………

Preet replies back-- Yeh kaisa waada maang rahe ho BB?..............yeh sab toh aap kartey ho……………aur iss duniya mein………….Prem toh ek hii hai………………aapki jagah lene kaa toh khayaal bhi ganvaara nahiin hai mujhe……………aur aap mujhe aapki har zimedaari ko nibhaane ka waada maang rahe ho…………….aapki kami kisi ko mehsooos naa hone du………..yeh chahatey ho mujhse……………..yeh kaise mumkin hai Prem bhaiya………kaise……………..Lekin haan yeh Preet aapse yeh waada zaroor karta hai……………….kii jab tak aap ghar nahiin lautte…………..tab main aapki har zimedaari ko…………..poori koshish karke……………poori imaandaari se nibhaane kii koshish karoongaa…………aur yeh bhi kii dad meri koi galti naa nikaal sakey……………lekin sach toh yeh hai bhai…………..kii naa toh main Kulraaj dii kii har khushi kaa…………….maa k dil kii har baat kaa…………….aur Veera kii har khushi ka khayaal aapki tarah nahiin rakh sakta…………..aapki kami toh har pal……………har din hum sabko mehsoos hogi………………

(Prem and Preet both agree and the two cry their hearts out to each other………………)

While Preet also rpomises himself saying-- Aur ek waada main aapse aur karta hoon Prem bhaiya………………kii apko aur Heer bhabhi ko baujii khud…………..apnaakar ghar laayeingey…………….

With that Preet gets up to leave reluctantly ofcourse......... after bidding a good bye to everyone……………..

Kaisa laga?

Jaldi batao.

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Posted: 17 years ago
very nice bahaut acha laga chalo last part of the wekend anyways i will be waiting for the next weekend till then goodbye
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanx tanyaa..............Kya speed hai yaar.............Haan its weenend kaa end now...............aur abb as usual Prem kii baari hai..............Yaa dear even I'll be waiting for all u guys here...............and yes till then enjoy urself and take care..................😊
Hey by the way where r u all?

Fijiana

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Indianpari

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Waiting for all of u...............

And yess waiting for zenia u too dear............How r ur classes going on?

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Posted: 17 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waiting for next asap.
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice excellent
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my fav color white ,red
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Posted: 17 years ago

nice update pls continue soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
sorry i was away for the week!
I loved that part, it was so sweet!
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Sunayna
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Posted: 17 years ago
Sorry for the delay in commenting...I was away over the weekend and soo couldnt read your updates...well,
All the three parts -25 to 27 were awesome....I like the way your story progresses...Loved the Prem-Heer scene in the hospital and the Preet -Prem at Prem's place... Eagerly wai9ting for the next parts....

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