FF- - When Love comes in....UpDt......Prem returns

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi all of u.😊 Weekends r so tough naaa?!..........Waqt guzarta hi nahiin........Isliye I thought kii weekends pe kya karein.............ki main bhi bore naa hoon aur aap sab ka bhi time kat jaaye...................

I'm starting this new FF only for weekends.😊😉

It begins from Thursdays episode. I hope u all like it and send in ur valuable comments.😊😊And tell me if u want me to continue.😊

Prem is sitting and is getting drenched to his skin in the rain?????.(My??He looked soooooooooooooooo handsome😳).

Heer is seeing him from the window. 😳She is crying😭 and is feeling terribly bad???????.. as she feared he might fall ill and guilty?????..as she was the one, for whom?????..he had left behind his whole family??????.his business???..his house??????his luxurious lifestyle?????..😕raising a war against the entire world!...............😳

How much she wanted to run downstairs upto him😳???..and say thanx to him for everything he had done for her😊?????????And also apologise for making him suffer?????first by not listening to him all the while when he was trying to tell him the truth??????for not believing him?????for hurting him each day?????.and now for making him suffer all this?????????..😭These thoughts made her feel even more terrible.............😭

But??????..something stopped her????..😕something within her told her???????it was not the right time????????.😕All of a sudden there seemed to have arisen a feeling of strange awkwardness within her??????.But Why? Heer thought.

May be because of the torturous events of the past few days????and then the intense circumstances under which they had to leave together??????.

Heer was too tired to think any further.😕

Prem looks up at her lovingly.😳 He sees her crying as she slides to sit by the window.😭 He becomes sad too.😭 (Kyunki Prem ki khushiyaan toh Heer se hi judi thi😳)

He thinks to himself?Main toh sirf tumhaari zindagi kharaab hone se bachana chahta tha Heer??????😳Main umhe khush dekhna chahta hoon??????..Tumhaare chehre par muskurahat wapas lana chahta hoon??????..😳👏

He thinks further--😳

Main jaanta hoon jo kuch pichle kuch dinon mein tumhaare saath hua hai?????..uskii buri yaadein bhoolnein mein tumhe kuch waqt lagega??????Lekin main tumhaari zindagi itni khushiyon?????..itne pyaar?????aur itne khoobsurat palon se bhar doonga ki tum, sab kuch bhool jaaogi????????.👏😳

In the background the song continues to play?(I found the lyrics for the whole song😊)

Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye shayad yahi to pyaar hai

betabiyon mein dhadkan meri chal
paye shayad yahi to pyaar hai kutch bhi kaha na

kutch bhi suna na phir bhi bechain dil hai
humara behke kadam hai mushkil main hum hai

dekho sambhle bhala kaise yaara chahe bina
bhi nazdeek hum chale aaye shayad yahi toh pyaar hai nazrein bichade pehre laga de dil
pe par dil kisiki na maane Kaaton pe chalke sholon mein jalke roke milke rahenge deewane o o
o chahat ki lau to aandhi mein bhi zilmilaye shayad yahi to pyaar hai Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko
sataye shayad yahi to pyaar hai ye mulaqatein yeh teri ankhein ek pal na main bhool
pau kitni mohabbat hai kitni chahat tumse kaise bhala main bataoo Acha lage jo toh samne
muskuraye shayad yahi to pyaar hai Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye shayad yahi to pyaar hai
kutch bhi kaha na kutch bhi suna na phir bhi bechain dil hai humara behke kadam hai mushkil
main hum hai dekho sambhle bhala kaise yaara chahe bina bhi nazdeek hum chale aaye shayad yahi
toh pyaar hai 😳

And the two continue to look at each other lekin jab ek dekhti hai toh dusra doesn?t know ki he?s being watched?????.😳(Situation samajh gaye naa?😊)

Kaisa laga?😊

Jaldi batao?😊

Edited by leothebest9 - 16 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nice bahaut khobsurat laga plss weekenda haina tuh main kal bhi aise he update kaintezaar karongi keep it up i will be waititng 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanx a lot! 😊 😊 I hope u like tomorrow's update as well. 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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its awesome too good very nice waitinggggggg for next asap with long part.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanx a lot! 😊 Next part toh kal post karoongi but it will be a long one pakka. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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dear i will be waiting yes thx if u will make it longer
kal pakka karna
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

very nice bahaut khobsurat laga plss weekenda haina tuh main kal bhi aise he update kaintezaar karongi keep it up i will be waititng 👏 👏

I agree it is very nice! take care and keep in touch. When is the weekend going to pass and Monday will come! I can't wait any longer!!!!!!!!!uggggghhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Than u. 😊 😊

And yes agli baar long update surely. 😊 😊

And sach mein...........When wil the weeken end?????????????????

Lekin kehte hain naa Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai. 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: leothebest9

Than u. 😊 😊

And yes agli baar long update surely. 😊 😊

And sach mein...........When wil the weeken end?????????????????

Lekin kehte hain naa Sabr ka phal meetha hota hai. 😊 😊

yeah true lekin main aur nahin intezar kar sakti hoon. Magar lakta hai ke aab toh Monday ke liye intezar kar na parega. Your welcome!

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Thanx to all of u once again. 😊 😊

Sorry for the delay. 😊

Here's the next part--2. Hope u like this one too. 😊 😊

The song comes to an end. The next time Prem looks up he sees that Heer has fallen asleep by the window itself.
😳

He too leans against the pillar as the rain continues to pour heavily. He closes his eyes………………….But all of a sudden he remembers the mandap wala scene…………….His dad giving option to choose between her son or husband…………..then how he asked him not to attend his last rights…………….
then when he asked him to leave…………….And then as he walked out of the house with Heer and Meher………………the one last look he gave his father………………


And Prem opens his eyes suddenly ………………..He is crying………………….. 😭 But the tears seem to have been lost somewhere in the rainfall……………….It seemed as if the skies too wanted to share his grief……………………… 😭 😭


Yes Prem had always been a family oriented person……………..uska parivaar hi uske liye sab kuch tha………………aur aaj…………….aaj unse dur rehna………………abhi se Prem ko khal raha tha………………..Lekin he knew…………………Heer ko uskii sabse zyaada zaroorat thi……………..Rano ko uski zarurat thi…………………… 😊


There in the Juneja mansion, Kulraaj is in her room. Her kids r fast asleep. While she is listening to Preet who tells her all that had happened. Harman and Prem's mom r also there. By the time Preet finishes with it all, Kulraj is crying and so is Prem's mom………………………………… 😭


Preet consoles Kulraj and Harman his mom………………… 😊


Kulraj then says—-Baujii ne yeh theek nahiin kiya……………..Prem……………….Prem toh kabhi galat ho hi nahiin sakta…………….aur…………….aur phir usse hak hai……………..apni zindagi apni marzi se jeene ka……………….Main jaaongin usske paas……………..Main laaongin use wapas………………… 👏 👏


After Harman leaves with his mom Preet and Kulrah r left back……………..and for the first time in the evening Preet begins to shed tears………………He hugs Kulraj and says-- Di………….Please……………(He sobs)……………Kuch bhi karke Prembhai k wapas le aoo……………………………. 😭

Kulraj wipes off his tears and assures him saying-- Tu mere saath hai naa Preet…………..Tu bilkul fikr mat kar main……………..hum donon milke bauji ko manaayengein………………aur Prem ko bhi………………theek hai? 😊 👏


Preet calms down a little nodding his head. Agreeing with her…………………. 😊


There Prem continues to justify his act………………….But…………………… 😕


No matter how much Prem convinced himself the fact remained……………….he was in great pain………………….not because he was sad……………..but because the thought of hurting his father made him feel even more miserable……………………………


😭 He thinks to himself-- Main jaanta hoon baujii ki aap mujhse naraaz hain……………….Mainne aapko bahot dukh diya hai………………Aapke mann ko thes pahonchayi hai………………Lekin main yeh bhi jaanta hoon………………..ki jis din aapko sachaai ka pata chalega………………Uss din aap mujhe maaf kar dengein…………………Aur mujhe uss din ka intezaar rahega…………….. 😊

And in the background plays the sad version of The train ka song Zindagi ne zindagi bhar...........plays............
😭

Apne bhi pesh aaye,
Humse ajnabi,
Waqt ki saazish, koi samjha nahiin,
Beiraada kuch khateyein,
Humse ho gayin,
Rah mein pathar meri har dum diye,

Zindagi ne........................
as we see a tired and hurt and wornout Prem on one side and an equally broken Lalit juneja on the other side……………………..(True Ekta Kapoor ishtyle😉)

Kaisa laga? 😊
Jaldi batao. 😊

Edited by leothebest9 - 17 years ago

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