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Posted: 7 years ago
#21
Very nice update 👍🏼
Liked the interaction between heer and her cousins.
Love prem n preet scene
Looking forward to see heer interaction with prem n preet
Waiting for next part.
Please do update soon
Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: preciousrose26

Very nice update 👍🏼

Liked the interaction between heer and her cousins.
Love prem n preet scene
Looking forward to see heer interaction with prem n preet
Waiting for next part.
Please do update soon

I will try to update soon and thanks for review.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#23
This is such a nyc story new concept
I am already very fond of ur story and also
Very curious of what happend next
Please update next part
And please please dont stop in mid way
Some people stopped their stories
I really like ur story please update sooon 😊
Posted: 7 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Princex178

This is such a nyc story new concept

I am already very fond of ur story and also
Very curious of what happend next
Please update next part
And please please dont stop in mid way
Some people stopped their stories
I really like ur story please update sooon 😊

Thanks for liking the story.
I will never leave any of my ff incomplete.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: mijanur

Thanks for liking the story.

I will never leave any of my ff incomplete.

Pplease update soon eagerly waiting for ur next update
Posted: 7 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Princex178

Pplease update soon eagerly waiting for ur next update

You will get it soon.
Posted: 7 years ago
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Update Alert:
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You are my destiny Prem Heer FF

Chapter 2

"Ye Balwant mamu he? Preet asked in a weak voice.He and Prem exchanged worried looks.

"Tum dono ek dusre ko aise kyun dekh rahe ho? Daljeet asked them in a worried voice.

Prem decided to give the answer.

"Darasal baat ye hain mami, jab hum khana khane ke liye dhabve me rokhe the tab hum dono ne dekha police ek aadmi ko arrest kar raha hain, hume o aadmi jana pechana laga tha lekin hum unhe thick se pechan nahi paye. Arrest hone ko waqt wo aadmi bahut hi drunk lafg raha tha. Yaha akar ye tasveer dekh kar hume maloom para ki o aadmi or koi nahi balki aapna Balwant mamu hain. Prem completed his explanation to Maan family.

As expected Prem's explanation of event created various reactions from Maan family member.

"Kya , Geet ka papa ko police arrest kar liya, paaji aap sun rahe hain Prem ne kya kaha. Dj asked her brother in law.

"Ha sun raha ho, mujhe dar tha woska buri sangat oose jaroor koi musibat me dalega, aur wohi hua Balwant arrest ho gaya police ka hato main , aur hamara parivar ka maan samman bhi duba diya usne , upor se sharab bhi pi rakha tha ujsne arrest hone ka waqt. Balraj angrily replied to his sister in law.

Daljeet started to cry heavily and soon Ash joined her in crying.
Prem and Preet were looking helpless. If they knew about arrested man's identity before then, they would surely try something.

"Sunhiye ji, gussa bad me karlena pahele Balwant ko0 chorakar aaniye police station se. Teji tried to convince her husband to free Balwant from the police station as szhe could not see her siszter in law and nice in a crying state.

"Ha bauji , Ma sahi kahe raha hain hume sab se pahele Balwant chacu ko chorane ki bare main soach na chaiye. Iss liye main ja rahi ho police station main unhe chorane. Heer commented.

"Lekin beti tum ekle jaogi waha itni raat ko. Balraj asked his daughter in a worried voice.

"Main chalta hu didi ka saat. Nihal told his father.

"Dekha bauji Nihal jar aha hain meri saat. Samoj neki koshish kije bauji meri waha jana jaroori hain main ek lawyer hu. Main sashayed chachu ko jaldi reha kar sakonga. Heer tried to convince her father.

"Thick hain jaon tum dono, aur contact me rehena phone pe. Balraj finally gave his permission.

"Hum dono bhi chalte hain aap dono ke saat, hum woha par the shayed hamara statement ka koi jarurat pade police station pe. Prem suggested and Preet noded with him.

"Aare tum dono itne door se aye ho, aram karo, Heer aur Nihal ja raha hain na police station main. Balraj commented.

"Mamaji , koi baat nahi hum baad me aram kar lenge, Balwant mama hamara bhi to kutch hain, iss liye main aapse gujarish kar raha hu, maat rookhiye hume. Prem requested to Balraj and Bajraj could not say no to Prem.

Soon Prem , Heer, Preet, Nihal left for police station in a car.

"Kitna accha ladka hai ye dono, rishto ka kitna kadar hain ye dono ko. Teji commented on Prem and Preet.

"Ha gayetri ne aachi tara se parwarish ki hain in dono ka. Ye dono ko dekh kar mere dil ko tassali hogaya ki mera Heer ka shadi sahi ghar main ho raha hain. Balraj told them.

"Ha job juneja khandan ka chote do ladke itne acche hain, tab bada ladka bhi acchayi hoga, Bhagwan kare in dono ko bhi acche ladki mil jaye shadi ke liye. Daljeet commented and looking at Ash and Geet while saying that. She was hoping to make both or at least one her future son in law.

In police station

"Inspector saab aap inko kis jarum main andar kiya hain.Heer demanded.

"Ye jo aapka handsome chacha ji haina ye rasto main sharab pike maar pit kar raha tha aur kya hain jante bitch rasto main anjan ladki ko Daljeet kar ke pokar ke tang kar raha tha. To iss teen jarum main aapke chacha ji ko andar dala. Inspector notified Heer.

" Dekhiye unka biwi ka naam Daljeet hain, shayed iss liye wo nashe main galat bak raha tha. Aap please uska bail ka intejam kije.

" Aap kaun hain ji , in dono ko to main janta hu, lekin aap ko kabhi dekha nahi pahele yaha par. Police asked Prem .

" Main Prem Juneja aur ye Preet Juneja. Prem introduced them.

"Aap famous NRI Juneja khandan se hain, lekin aap dono ka in logo ko saat kya samandh hain. Inspector was surprised.

"Ye Balwant ji hamari maa ka chachare bhai hain. Ye hamara mama hain. Prem simply told them.

" Pata nahi itna bada khandan ka rishta aise pariwar ka saat kaise hogya. Inspector told them in a mocking tone.

"Inspector ji ye aap kaisi baat kar raha hain. Nihal protested strongly. He could not believe how anyone could say something so low about his or her family.

"Main kaha kutch kahe raha hu Nihal ji ye to aapka chacha ji ka hadkat hain jo hume aise soach ne pe majboor kata hain. Thik hain aap log bail chata hain inke liye to aap logo ko 120000 rupiya dena padega. Inspector informed them.

"Itna jyda? A shocked Heer asked inspector.

" Ha inke upar teen charges hain, har ek charge pe 40000 rupiya lagea inko bail den eke liye. Inspector told her clearly.

"Lekin hamare pass to itna cash nahi hain, aur jaldbaji main hum ne to aapna cr5edit card bhi ghar pe chor aye hain. Nihal told his sister in a panicked voice.

"Ha Nihal hamare pass to sab mila kar 60000-65000 cash hain. Heer also understood their financial problem.

"Heer ji koi baat nahi baki paise hum aur Preet de te hain. Prem offered help.

" Prem ji hum aapse ye ahesan kaise le. Heer asked Prem.

"Heer ji job hi ki je ahesan ka naam mat di je. Agar Balwant mama aplogo ka chacha hain. To wo hamari bhi to kutch hain. Badi maa sirf Balraj aur Balwant Mama ka chachre behen nahi thi , badi maa Balraj aur Balwant mama ko apne sage bhai se bhi apna samjha. Iss hisab se Balwant ji hamare mama hain. Aaj jab Balwant mama mushkil main hain tab hum dono ka faraj ban ta hain hum bhi uske liye kutch kare. Hum dono to aap logo ka padaiya nahi, hum dono to aap dono ka second cousin hain. Please, humlogo ko aapna faraj nibhane dije. Prem requested Heer.

"Prem ji agar aap iss tara kahe rahe to main kutch nahi kahe sakti , aap dono bakei hamare aapne hain . Heer told him.

After that Prem, Heer, Nihal, Preet paid the amount for Balwant mama's bail.

Heer soon arranged the bail paper for Balwant.

Soon balwant got released from prision.

"Heer puttar ye dono kaun hain. Balwant asked heer by directing his finger at Prem and Heer.

"Balwant chacha ye hamara Gayetri aur Sipra bua ka bete hain. Nihal informed him.

"Tab to ye dono mere bhanje hain, kaise ho tum dono mera bhanje. Balwant happily told them.

" Hum aache hain mama, lekin iss waqt hum logo ko ghar jana chaiye sab intejar kar raha hoga. Prem told Balwant.

Prem , Heer, Nihal and Preet soon left police station with Balwant.

However, they soon saw a mob of 15 people were waiting for them.

"Aap lok? Nihal asked the mob.

"Hum lok to aye the Iss Balwant hisab se chukna karne, lekin aab jab iss khubsurat hasina bhi ya hain apna chacha ka liye to humlogo ye bhi chaiye. Goon leader told them.

"Aap log to bahut lalchi lekne , itna lalach sehed ka liye accha nahi hota. Heer retorted back.

"Hamara sahed ka tumhe itna khayal hain.. Goon leader stopped his talking as he got a strong punch in his face from Heer.

"Heer di karate main black belt hain, inn logo ne galat ladki se panga liya hain. Nihal commented.

Prem saw how brilliantly Heer was beating goon leader. However, soon the companions of goon leader came forward to save their gang leader.

"PB wo lok 15 ra hain aur hum 4 hain phir bhi main janta hu hami jitenge. Preet commented.

Prem, Nihal, Preet soon join with Heer in beating those Goons. Goons despite having advantages in number got beaten handily by the gang of four.

Suddenly Prem saw a goon tried to hit Heer with knife from her behind, Prem moved quickly to save Heer , however in saving Heer his hand got a little cut from Knife of the goon. Nevertheless, Prem ignored his pain and gave the goon a upper cut on the jaw.

"Picche se waar karta hain, kair kahika. After saying that , Prem gave a powerful funch to the goon's face.

Heer after giving black and blue to a goon realized that , how Prem saved her . Soon Preet, Nihal also knocked down rest of the goons.

" Tum logo ko pata nahi tumne kisse panga liya hain. The goon leader warned them.

"Nahi, hume accha tara se pata hain humne kisse panga liya kairo ka fauj se, aab bag yaha se aapne kayer sathi ko lekar. Preet taunted him.

Soon goons left them.

Heer noticed Prem was bleeding from his hand from fighting .

"Aap ke haat se to khoon nikal raha hain, Nihal ja car se first aid box lekar aa. Heer told her brother.

Heer bandaged Prem's hand.

"Shukriya aap ka, hume nahi pata tha yaha goons honge. Heer told Prem in apologic voice.

"Aapne phir se hum ko padaiya kar diya Heer ji. Main aur Preet aap ki pariwar ka aapne hain, isliye apno ki bitch koi shukriya ka baat nahi hona chahiye, main aur Preet aapka aur nihal ka second cousin hain. To mujhe bataye agar gunde ne hame ya Preet ko attack kart a piche se to kya aap ya Nihal hamara madat ke liye agae nahi badte? Prem questioned her.

"Logko ko manana koi aap se sikhe, thick hain shukriya nahi bulangi, lekin aap ki second cousin hoke ki nate main chaunga ki aap rest karenge ghar jake, baliye kya aap ko ye shart manjoor hain. Heer asked Prem.

"Ha manjoor hain " Prem replied.

End of chapter.

I am very encouraged by your responses.

In next chapter we may see the entry of rest of the Juneja family into Maan house.

Edited by mijanur - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#30
Thanks for this fast update.
Very nice update 👍🏼 love all the scene
Prem Heer calling each other was very lovely.
Heer give punch to the goon leader was very fantastic.
Love how prem saved her from getting hurt and heer bandaged his hand
Waiting for more
update soon.
Edited by preciousrose26 - 7 years ago

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