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Syed Shuridh Rahman Khan Mijan/Shuridh.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: sana.harshiti

Awasoem
Love all d scenes
Wow Heer give punch to the goon and love how prem saved her from getting hurt and loved heer bandaged his hand
Plz update soon

Thanks for commenting.

I will update after 3-4 days.

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AASUS

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Posted: 7 years ago

#42

wow really double double in other story - hv to chk

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Syed Shuridh Rahman Khan Mijan/Shuridh.

@mijanur

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: AASUS
wow really double double in other story - hv to chk

I will wait to know your reaction.

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tarannum6

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

hey sorry abhi mein ne 1 part read kiya first part is awosome :) second part abhi read karna hai thanks for the PM Loving your ss and ff :D

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Syed Shuridh Rahman Khan Mijan/Shuridh.

@mijanur

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Posted: 7 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: preciousrose26
Waiting

May be tomorrow.

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Fatima

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Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Shuridh, I've managed to read the prologue only...but my curiosity is piqued!

What an unusual and interesting concept! 👏

Look forward to catching up on the other parts you have posted really soon. 😛

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Syed Shuridh Rahman Khan Mijan/Shuridh.

@mijanur

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Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Fatima_Q
Shuridh, I've managed to read the prologue only...but my curiosity is piqued!
What an unusual and interesting concept! 👏

Look forward to catching up on the other parts you have posted really soon. 😛

Thanks for liking the prologue. I will wait for your comments on other parts of this ff.

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Fatima

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Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Read chapter 1:

So the you've laid down the ground work for an interesting story. Hmm..Herman is the eldest Juneja ...Oh no! he's paired up with Heer...😲

But never fear...Prem has arrived...okay so now I see where this is going...😆

It will be interesting to see what happens to break up Herman-Heer wedding. Oh my...the man Preet and Prem get arrested was Balwant 😲...there has to be more to this than just him getting arrested for being drunk...let's see what happens.

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Fatima

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Posted: 7 years ago

#49

Read chapter 2:

Aww...Prem and Preet were so sweet to get Balwant bailed from jail.

And they fought off goons too 👏

So I have do have a bit of constructive criticism...I like the concept of the story...older wife...younger husband...how will they handle their marriage as well as people's reaction...but in reading over your character sketch again, I realized you've made Heer only 2 years older than Prem. I wouldn't really characterize that as an "older woman". Five, seven or even 10 years...that would have made a greater impact...but that's just my point of view 😳

Are you also going to show some childhood connection or understanding between Heer and Prem? Or will you establish this connection now? I mean, there has to be a reason for him to step in and marry her when the situation warrants it. Or will he just be the noble son to do as his parents wish?

I'm very much interested to see how the story proceeds from this point...so do update soon. I'm not really a Premeer fan...so...good job of getting me involved in the story. 👍🏼

Edited by Fatima_Q - 7 years ago

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Syed Shuridh Rahman Khan Mijan/Shuridh.

@mijanur

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Posted: 7 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Fatima_Q
Read chapter 1:
So the you've laid down the ground work for an interesting story. Hmm..Herman is the eldest Juneja ...Oh no! he's paired up with Heer...😲

But never fear...Prem has arrived...okay so now I see where this is going...😆

It will be interesting to see what happens to break up Herman-Heer wedding. Oh my...the man Preet and Prem get arrested was Balwant 😲...there has to be more to this than just him getting arrested for being drunk...let's see what happens.

Thanks for liking the chapter.

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