It's my Bet - SS (24/07) 25 COMPLETED!!

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It's my Bet

Shot 1

Heer 'Dad it's a bet.' Balraj looked at his daughter. Heer lost her mother when she was only three years old. Since then Balraj took care of her as father and mother. He is so strict and didn't allow her to be indiscipline. He thinks 100 times before he accept her any demand. Heer is a very naughty girl. She always has the habit of betting. She request something to her father when he refuses to get that thing she simply find a way to bet and buy that hing.

Heer few days back asked her father to get a mobile. Balraj refused because she in her final year of college. He felt its not a right time for her to use mobile. So he refused. Now Heer searched for a option to get a mobile for her. Balraj and Heer were watching cricket match between England and India. Balraj 'WOW what a fantastic match. Sachin is a wonderful batsman.' Heer 'Dad, do you think India will win this match?' she sat next to him with a cup of tea.

Balraj took the cup from her hand 'no doubt. See the little master. He is simply making fielders run around the ground.' Heer 'nope. India won't win.' Balraj 'India is going to win this match without doubt.' Heer 'Dad, I can bet.' Balraj got angry 'Heer I told you not to bet like this for simple things.' Heer 'just its between me and you dad.' Balraj 'no Heer, I'm not agreeing for this.' Heer 'dad you are scared.' Balraj shook his head with anger 'no. its final. I know what is your plan. I have done a mistake of accepting it all these years.' He got up. Heer 'dad, only this time.' Balraj 'no Heer. stop this habbit. Oneday this will put you in big trouble. I'm warning you Heer.' Barlaj walked out of the house in anger. He tried his level best to correct his daughter. But Heer never obeyed to him in this matter.

Heer sitting in the college ground and thinking her father's words 'You earn for your things that is the punishment I'm giving you for betting.' Heer looked around to find someone with whom she can bet to get some money. she saw Sanjan coming towards her. she has money but not easy to bet with her. She bets when she gets some benefits for her. She doesn't cares about money bit she cares more about working out her plans. But Heer is not bothered about that. Heer wants money now to buy a mobile. Later she can tell some story to her father.

Sanjana came to her. 'Hi Heer, why are you sitting here alone?' Heer 'hi waiting for our friends.' Sanjana 'where are they?' Heer 'they went to library.' Sanjana sat next to her 'Heer, come we'll go to the mall.' Heer 'okay.' Internally she thought 'I'll surely get a chance. but the amount is bigger.' She got up 'lets try my luck.' Just then their friends came out of library. Sanjana took them to mall in her car.

Heer and friends got out of the car. Heer always excited to comeout with Sanjana. Snajana spends lot of money for her friends. Sanjana got out of the car. All headed towards their favourite Pizza shop. They sat in a table and started chatting. Sanjana placed the order.

As they were chatting about beauty Jeni 'in our gang Heer is beautiful.' Sanjana quickly 'beautiful? No way.' Geet 'Sanjana you are jealous. Heer is beautiful.' Sanjana 'then let her prove it.' Jeni 'prove what?' Sanjana 'she should prove that she is beautiful' Geet 'are you joking Sanjana 'it can't be proved. It is only seen.' Sanjana 'can prove.' Heer is now got in the waves of proud thoughts of being beautiful 'how?' Sanjana looked around then she pointed a couple coming into pizza shop holding hands. 'see they looks to be in love. you have to make him fall for you.' Heer 'you are telling me to separate a lovers.' Sanjana 'later we can tell them that we just played.' Heer 'no I won't. I don't like separating lovers.'

Sanjana teasingly 'so you are not beautiful.' Heer got angry 'sanjana that is different.' Sanjana 'no. see he thinks that girl is beautiful. Of course she is beautiful than you.' Heer didn't like her comment. 'I look beautiful than her.' Sanjana 'prove it.' Heer is confused. Sanjana sipped her coke 'you can't. its my bet.' As soon as Heer heard bet she got charged up 'what is the bet?' Sanjana 'you make him fall for you dumping that girl then I'll get you new model mobile.' She smiled 'you can't because she is more beautiful than you.' Heer 'I can.' She leaned forward 'because I'm beautiful.' Sanjana 'let see. you can take more than one day. But before our last day of college.' She leaned back comfortably 'you have one month time.'


Couple settled opposite to them. Guy is facing Heer and the girl is showing back to Heer. Sanjana is watching Heer. Guy looked at the girl before ordering. His eyes fell on Heer over girl's shoulder. He gave brief look at Heer before turning to the girl. Heer happily whispered 'he looked at me.' Sanjana took one bite 'he has to fall for you.' Heer 'he will.' She happily started eating her pizza giving stare to him. Even that guy is giving occasional look to Heer while talking to his girl.

Heer whispered to Jeni 'I think he is attracted towards me.' Jeni 'you can prove Heer. I'm with you.' Jeni and Geet are Heer's close friends. Even though they all stick to Sanjana, these three shared a different friendship bonding. Jeni and Geet always wants Heer to win her bet when it comes with Sanjana.

Heer got up 'okay guys I'm leaving.' Sanjana gave a smile 'take care.' Heer know the meaning of her smile. Heer whispered back 'don't under estimate me.' she walked out of the shop. Sanjana looked back at the couple who are also getting up to leave. Sanjana 'Geet, do you think Heer can win that guy's heart.' Geet 'no doubt. He already started getting some infatuation.' Jeni 'Heer will do anything when it comes for bet.' Sanjana 'you both never let her down. Let see how she wins this time.' They also got up.

Guy opens the door for girl. Heer got into the back seat. Girl is surprised 'hi who are you?' guy got into the car without knowing that got shock to see Heer in the back seat. Guy 'hi what do you want?' Heer quickly 'I love you.' couple are shocked 'what?' girl 'Prem, who is she?' Heer thought 'oh your name is Prem.' Heer 'Prem I love you. all these days I was.' Prem interrupted 'stop stop. Who are you? I'm seeing you for first time.' Heer 'Prem I'm following for past few days. you too look at me several times.' Prem 'when? I didn't remember looking at you.' Heer 'even now in Pizza' Prem 'listen you misunderstood. I didn't look at you. and' he pointed the girl next to him 'she is Ashlesha. My fiance. My parents fixed her for me. We are going to marry soon.' Heer 'what?' Ash 'halo. I think you became mad. Get out of the car first.' Heer 'no I love you Prem.' Prem thought his girl is immature and looked at her 'listen. In the road so many people looks at you. you can't think all are loving you.' Ash 'what is your name?' Heer 'Heer.' Ash 'Heer, Its just a infatuation. It happens to every human. So I'm not taking it wrong. You better get out of the car.' Heer 'Prem please I love you.' Prem got angry 'you get out of the car otherwise I'll call the police.' Heer with a sad face got out of the car. Prem started the car 'mad girl.' Ash 'poor girl. She got attracted towards you.'

Sanjana looked at Heer with a teasing smile. Heer with head down walked to them. Sanjana 'so he chased you out.' Heer silent. Jeni put her hands around Heer shoulder to comfort her 'lets go.' Sanajan 'accept the defeat. You are not beautiful.' Heer 'I have one month.' Sanjana 'you will get same result. He is so much attached to that girl. Come we'll go.' Heer 'you go. I'm not coming. I need to think.' Sanjana 'as you wish.' Sanjana looked at Jeni and Geet. They are also no mood to go with Sanjana. Sanjana walked away from them.

Geet looked at Heer with concern 'Heer, what is your plan. We don't know about him.' Heer took a pen from her bag and scribbled a number in her note book. Jeni 'what is this?' Heer 'his car number. With that we can get details.' Geet 'how?' Heer 'I know his name is Prem. with this number we'll find out his whereabouts from traffic office.' Jeni 'nice idea. But did he showed any signal of distraction.' Heer 'he is really concerned for me. both didn't scold me. they advised and told me to get out of the car.' Geet 'this shows they are really soft hearted people.' Heer 'yes. that is my strength now. come first we'll get details.'

After few hours Jeni came to Heer with full detail of Prem. 'Heer, he is owner of Juneja group of companies. His parents are in Canada. He came to India last month only. Ashlesha is her fiance. Fixed by their parents who are business partners. Her parents are in UK. Their marriage is not yet announced to the world. But almost finalised by their parents.' Geet 'wow how did you got all these deails.' Jeni 'its my character. Everywhere there will be a person whose weakness is money. okay that is not important. Now Heer how are you going to succeed.'

Heer whispered something to Jeni and Geet. Geet exclaimed 'what an idea?' Jeni showed thumbs up 'wonderful.' She handed her mobile to Heer 'here fast.'

Prem and Ash are sitting in the house chatting some random things. Their fathers became parters few years back. So Prem and Ash doesn't know each other much. Parents send them together to India so that they will share some quality time. Prem mobile rings.

Prem looked at the unknown number 'who is this?' Ash 'attended the call then only we know.' Prem answered the call. 'halo' Heer 'Prem I love you.' she almost in tears 'please Prem I love you.' Prem face changed 'are you mad? Why are you disturbing me like this?' Ash 'Prem who is that?' Prem 'same stupid girl.' Ash 'give the mobile to me.' Prem handed the phone to Ash. Ash 'what is your name ha Heer. why are you disturbing us?' Heer 'mam please I love him. please tell him.' Ash 'you are asking my recommendation to love my fiance.' Heer 'mam please.' Ash 'you are stupid.' She is about to cut the line. Heer shouted 'I'll die.' Ash 'do it.' She disconnected the line.

Prem 'what she told?' Ash 'suicide what these girls will do?' Prem shocked 'what?' Ash 'why are you so shocked. She is trying to blackmail you.' Prem 'if she dies' Ash 'no she won't. you will receive another call after 5 minutes. better switch off the mobile.' Prem pulled the mobile out of her hand 'no. we should stop her.' Ash 'you can't because these girls won't do like that in reality.' Again Prem mobile rings.

Ash is about to pull the mobile but Prem didn't give it to her. he answered the call. 'are you mad? Why are behaving like stupid?' Heer 'because I love you. I'll jump from the near by hills. If you didn't come within an hour then you won't' Prem shouted angrily 'listen don't do this stupid thing.' Heer shouted 'I love you. I love you.' she disconnected the line.

Prem angrily 'halo halo.' Ash 'what happened?' Prem 'she is threatening me.' Ash 'I know these girls are like that.' Prem is tensed 'I have to stop her.' Ash stopped him. Prem 'otherwise she will commit suicide.' Ash 'let her do what she want.' Prem 'that will bring bad name for us. Our names will be in TV and newspaper t'row.' Ash 'she is just threatening. She won't do.' Prem 'no she is very adamant.' Ash 'how do you know?' Prem 'we can judge from her face. She bodly announced her love. she will go to any extend to get her things done.' Ash 'Prem, I feel you are having soft corner for her.' Prem 'it just a humanity.' Ash 'Prem' Prem 'I'll stop her first. then we'll try to put some sense.' Ash 'I don't think its possible.' Prem looked at his watch. 'don't have much time.' He ran out of the house ignoring Ash shouting him not to go.

Heer is climbing to reach the top of the hill. She is confused 'whether her plan will work out. Will he come to save me? will he accept her love?' with several thoughts she reached the top of the hill. She looked around. She closed her eyes in fear. she thought 'why I decided this way? I should have choose some other option to threaten him. now I'm in danger. If he ignores my words.' she found hard to digest that she has to accept her failure to Sanjana.

She looked at her watch. Only few minutes left for her drama. Her heart started beating fast as the seconds reduced. Jeni and Geet were hiding in the bush to signal to Heer when Prem comes there.

Prem stopped the car infront of the hill at a distance. He looked around. He didn't find anyone. He rushed towards the hill and found Heer standing in the top of the hill. Prem shouted 'Heeer no.' Heer looked down and saw Prem with fear trying to reach the top. Heer stood as if she didn't hear his shound. Prem 'Heer listen.' Heer didn't respond. As he stepped towards the top he tried to keep the conversation so that she won't take any stupid action.' Prem 'Heer, come down. We'll talk.' Heer shouted 'say yes or no. that is the answer I want.' Prem 'first you come down.' Heer shouted 'say I love you.' Prem 'listen.' Heer 'I love you.' she is about to jump when Prem shouted 'Heer I love you.'. by that time he reached the top. He pulled her back. She landed on his chest and hugged him tight. Inside she was thanking him for coming at the right time at the same time her heart processing what should she do.

Prem pulled her gently away from his chest and slapped her hard on her cheek. Heer didn't expect this action from him. She is about to express her anger but managed 'I don't have any other choice to show my love for you.' Prem 'is this love. stupid.' Heer 'you love me that is enough. I'm happy.' Prem is shocked. He tried to clear her 'listen. I didn't come here because of my love for you.' Heer stepped back 'then'. Prem 'I came to tell you the truth.' Heer turned to jump down.

Prem pulled her back 'are you mad?' Heer shouted 'ha I'm mad on you. I love you.' Prem 'don't you know any other line than this.' Heer put her hands around his neck 'because I love you.' she smiled. Prem removed her hands from his neck 'but I didn't'.' Heer is shocked stepped 'then why you stopped me. atleast allow me to die.' Prem shouted 'ha go and die. Then all the news paper will put my name and yours in the front page. ' Heer stood silent with a sad face. 'because of that only I didn't leave any suicide note.' Prem 'so' Heer 'no one can link us in my suicide. I love you.' Prem ran his fingers throw his hair 'how will I explain?'

Prem 'listen Heer. I'm fixed for someone else.' Heer 'then why you came to save me?' Prem no answer for that. he cursed for coming here. 'that' Heer 'that shows you have feelings for me.' Prem 'I don't know anything about you.' Heer 'that is not a issue. I'll tell you.' Prem interrupted 'come we'll go from here.' Heer 'firs tyou tell me you love me.' Prem took a deep breath. he don't have anyother way to take her away from here. Prem 'ha I love you.' Heer happily 'pakka.' Prem 'ha pakka.' Heer 'promise' Prem 'ha promise', Heer 'on your mother.' Prem is shocked. 'why should I promise on my mother?' Heer 'so you are telling lie.' Prem 'no' Heer 'then promise on your mother.' Prem hesitated. Heer threatened to walk back to jump. Prem confused. when he saw her stepping back she shouted 'ha on my mother I promise. I love you.' Heer ran to him and hugged him tight. She cried. Prem who is standing like statue don't know how to respond to her. he slowly hugged her. One side he felt happy for saving a life but another side how to keep the promise.

Holding her closely with him he walked to the car. Jeni and Geet happily watched them. Jeni dialled Sanjana's number as Prem car moved away from there with Heer.

Jeni announced 'Sanjana, Heer won the bet. Prem accepted her love.' Sanjana on the other end shocked 'what?' Jeni 'yes. he is taking her home now.' Sanjana 'didn he cancelled his marriage with Ash?' Jeni 'we don't know anything about that. we saw Prem taking Heer holding her tightly with him.' Sanjana 'how is it possible.' Jeni 'with Heer everything is possible.' She disconnected the line.


Ash is jumping up and down in anger when she heard about Prem promise. Ash 'how can you do this Prem?' Prem 'I don't have any other option.' Ash 'you didn't think about me once.' Prem 'Ash I thought only about saving her.' Ash 'who is she? Does you know her before?' Prem shook his head negatively. Ash 'then you are worried for her. ignored me for that unknown girl.' Prem 'Ash, I didn't think she will end up asking promise.' Ash 'you are so stupid Prem. now what about me?' Prem 'we'll explain her.' Ash 'what you will explain? She is very clever and you are a stupid.' Prem 'Ash, I didn't like the way you are blaming me. I saved a girl that's all.' he sat in the couch without any regret.

Ash 'oh. You are not ashamed of your behaviour.' Prem 'I didn't do any murder. I saved one life.' Ash 'you are such a idiotic.' Prem 'shut up Ash. You are talking too much.' Ash 'you are an unsteady man. T'row some one else will come and you will chase me out. I'm not ready to live with you.' Ash walked to her room 'I hate you.' Prem 'Ash' he ran behind her.

Ash 'Prem stay away from me. I'm going.' Prem 'where?' Ash 'to my parents. I can't marry you.' Prem 'why?' Ash 'Prem do you have any memory problem. Just now you did big blunder in our life. even after this do you want me to marry you?' Prem 't'row I'll talk' Ash interrupted 'she will keep another trap in front of you. you will just accept it to save her. you are unsteady man. I can't risk my life with you.' She closed her suitcase. Prem 'Ash, listen to me.' Ash dragged her suitcase and walked out of the room.

Ash turned and looked at him 'I can't trust you anymore.' She walked out of the room calling the driver. Prem stood silently with confusion. Now his feared increased. His father won't spare him for what he has done. He went to his room with confusion. He got angry when he thought about Heer 'this girl spoiled my happy life.'


Shot 1, 2 & 3 (1) Shot 4 (8) Shot 5 (15) Shot 6(21) Shot 7(23) Shot 8(25)


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Shot 2

Prem is busy in his office. He is trying to concentrate on his work. He couldn't. He is tensed about father's reaction. Luckily his father didn't call him for past two days. He acted as if he is very busy in the office. So that if his father contacts the office his secretary will say he is busy. To make his confusion more Heer is continuously calling him for every half-an hour. He didn't attend single call except the first one which flashed a new number. He thought that will make Heer move out of his life.

Sanjana sarcastically smiled 'he lied to save you.' Heer strongly 'no'. Sanjana 'why he is not attending your call? I think you lost the bet. Give back the mobile.' Heer 'give me one more day I'll prove his love for me.' Sanjana 'are you planning to jump down again.' Heer 'not necessary. He loves me.' Sanjana 'then why he is avoiding you?' Heer 'may be he is busy.' Sanjana 'I think he left the country fearing for you.' Heer gave a angry look to Sanjana and walked away.

Prem looked up from the file when he saw Heer coming pushing the door in anger. Behind her an office boy is shouting 'madam' Prem looked at the man 'you go.' Man went closing the door. Prem looked at Heer who is standing with anger. Prem 'what is this Heer?' Heer 'you are liar.' Prem got fed up. he don't even come out fully from the shock he is receiving for past two days. First Ash blamed him as unsteady man. Now she is blaming him as liar. Prem 'Heer 'what is your problem?'

He sat in the couch. Heer sat nearly close to him. 'that day you left me in my house after that you don't bother to call me once.' Prem 'I'm busy Heer.' Heer 'busy with whom?' Prem shouted in anger 'listen you spoiled my life. Ash left me. Now you are doubting me. give me some time.' Heer put circle on his upper arm and like child 'I'm sorry Prem.' Prem looked at her face. Her childish face dissolved his anger. He closed his eyes once and open with a deep breath. Prem 'Heer, I'm really busy with a project. For the next one month I don't have single second to spare for me.'

Heer understood his work load. 'Okay Prem. I'll not diturb you for next three months. I too have exams and other things. But' she paused. Prem 'what?' Heer 'I'll call you exactly after a month.' Prem nodded. Heer 'okay. I'm leaving now.' Prem 'take care.' Heer put his hands around his neck 'I love you.' she placed a kiss on his cheek. Prem smiled 'I love you too.' She showed her cheek. Prem kissed her cheek without any hesitation. Heer quickly got up and ran out of the room 'bye Prem.' Prem 'Bye.'

When the door closed behind Heer, Prem took a deep breath 'thank God. I have three more months. I have to do something before that.' he sat in his chair 'I have to do something.' He tapped restlessly on the table. 'how do you I escape from this girl?' His mobile rings. His heart started beating fast when he saw Canada number flashing on his mobile screen.

He fearfully attended the call. Lalit shouted on the other side 'Prem, I thought you are a clever boy but how can you be so careless.' Prem didn't understand anything. Prem 'dad'. Lalit 'Ash feels you are not a perfect guy for her.' Prem 'dad, I' Lalit 'why are you so unsteady? You should know how to balance business and life.' Prem is still confused 'why his father is beating around the bush? Did Ash told about Heer or not?' As Lalit continued the conversation he understood that Ash didn't say anything about Heer. He felt lucky but sad on the otherside. He thought 'I have to escape from Heer soon to go back to Ash.'

10 months passed. Prem didn't think once about Heer. He totally involved in the work. His parents also didn't ask about his interest on Ash when they came to know about Ash is adamant in her decisions. Her parents decided to drop Prem's proposal and fixed her marriage with another guy. Prem parents also thought of leaving him alone for another one year so that he will learn how to balance personal life and business.

Heer too busy in her exams didn't think about Prem. She finished her exams. Balraj suggested him to study further but she said she wants to be teacher. She joint in Teacher's training college. She totally forgot about Prem.

Edited by newt2007 - 14 years ago
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Shot 3

One year later,

Prem opened his car door which is parked in road side. His mobile rings. His heart skipped a beat when he saw the number flashing in the screen. Smile appeared in his face. He is about to attend the call when he heard some boys teasing someone. He looked at the direction as he felt someone is caught in between that useless guys.

Heer came out of a school after placing an application for a job. The road seems to be less crowded. Few cars are moving fast in the road. She quickly decided to catch an auto rickshaw to reach her home. But in the hot mid day there is any sign of Auto rickshaw. She started walking towards the bus stop.

Suddenly she thought something and took out her mobile from her bag.


After the day she met Prem, Balraj saw new mobile in Heer's hand. Balraj 'where did you got money get this mobile?' angrily 'you won a bet.' Heer balbbered 'ha dad. no dad. its sanajan's gift.' Balraj interrupted angrily 'don't lie.' Heer is about to say something. Balraj stopped her 'do you love your father?' Heer 'dad. I love you more than anything in this world.' Tearfully 'you never gave me feeling that I didn't have mother. You always showered love on me.' Balraj became emotional and hugged his daughter 'now can you do one thing.' Heer leaned on her father's chest and shook her head.

Balraj 'first return this mobile to Sanjana.' Heer agreed. Balraj 'then.' Heer confusinlgy looked at her father. Barlaj 'promise me.' Heer 'what promise?' Barlaj 'first promise me.' Heer confusingly kept her plam on his father's. He kept that on his head 'on me.' Heer 'ha dad.' Balraja 'Till you finish your teachers course you should not talk to any of your friends.' Heer agreed. Prem came to her mind 'dad, only college friends?' Balraj shook his head negatively 'even outside college. All the person you know now. includes all.' Heer don't have any other option now. she agreed. Balraj even took the SIM card from her.

Oneside she thought Prem is not her love. otherside she felt little uncomfortable about not meeting Prem. But she decided to stay according to her promise because she can't risk her father's life now. When she returned the mobile Sanjana teased her of losing the bet. But for her father Heer tolerated it.

Heer finished her exams and joined the course for teaching. Y'day evening she finished her exams. Balraj came to her with a new mobile. 'Heer, its for you.' Heer 'dad. thanks. But what is the use?' Balraj smiled 'now you became ready to go to job. So you need this. You can talk to all of your friends but one condition.' Heer smiled 'I know. I won't bet.' Balraj stroked her hair 'I believe you dear.' He kissed her forehead.

Heer is so happy to get. She checked the mobile and found her father has inserted SIM card too. She decided to call Prem immediately but se found morning is a perfect time to give surprise to him. She is confused whether he will remember her or not.

She smiled 'I'll give you surprise.' She called Prem.

A man in 20's 'oye teacher.' Another 'hi, give respect to teacher.' He saluted 'good morning miss.' Another 'hi. This is afternoon. Good afternoon miss. He is a fool.' Heer started stepping fast. One 'miss I'm not fool in everything. He scratched his head 'only in English'. Another 'she is Maths teacher.' They all laughed. Heer got tensed and started walking fast forgetting her mobile is calling someone.

One fellow tried to keep his hand on her shoulder 'I'm talking to you only'. She moved fast and her dupatta struck in his hand. another side another person blocked the way. Heer fearfully looked around for help. But passerby didn't give any help to her. Heer held her dupatta tight so that it won't go into his hand.

Suddenly she felt someone nearby with concerned. She turned and looked at the person who gave a punch on the one holding her dupatta. Others ran away when they saw blood bleeding from that fellow face.

Heer whispered 'Prem.' she buried herself in his chest. Prem put his hand around her gently. He warned that fellows before taking her to car to avoid creating the scene. He opened the car and made her sit in the front passenger seat. He closed the door and came to other side. When he got into the car Heer put her hand around him and kissed him 'I love you.' Prem gently pushed him back 'is it?' He started the car.

Heer looked at him. Prem 'why are you telling lie Heer?' Heer seriously 'I'm not lying Prem.' Prem 'then where are you all these days?' Heer 'oh. That is my father pulled my mobile and took promise that I should not call or meet any of my friends.' Sadly 'you came in that category. So I'm scared to call you. y'day only dad gave my phone back because my exams got over y'day.' Excitingly 'do you know I'm a teacher now.' Prem didn't believe her and gave a look. Heer 'you didn't believe me na. wait.' She leaned forward 'look into my eyes. You will find the truth.' Prem looked into her eyes. Her eyes expressed that she is telling the truth. Heer 'promisely on my dad. I'm telling truth only.' Prem smiled 'I believe you.' Heer 'but I thought about you everyday.' Prem 'so sweet.'

Heer seriously 'what about you?' Prem rolled his eyes like a thief. 'do you want me to tell the truth?' Heer shook her head like a kid 'yes of course.' Prem 'then don't get angry on me.' Heer shook her head negatively 'no I won't.' Prem 'I didn't think about you.' Heer face became sad. Prem looked at her sad face 'except once.' Heer face brightened 'when?' Prem 'today morning.' Heer 'today morning? Why?' Prem 'because today my birthday. Don't know why I wanted to meet you.' Heer leaned forward and pressed her lips deep on his cheek 'Happy birthday.' Prem smiled 'thanks.' She shouted 'stop stop.' Prem 'why?' Heer 'stop.' Prem stopped the car in the side.

She took her purse and got out of the car and ran towards a flower shop ignoring Prem calling her name. Prem's eyes fell on the mobile she left in her seat along with her file. He looked at Heer who is searching for flower in the shop. He quickly took her mobile and checked dialled numbers. He found his number is the only dialled number in the call registry. He checked the contact list where he saw apart from a name 'Dad', only male number was his number. He believed what Heer said was true. He kept the phone in her seat and looked outside and saw Heer coming towards car with a red rose.


Edited by newt2007 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hmmm...I see there are some reserves for this SS...I'm assuming you will come back and post up the rest of the story...

Okay I'm just going to reserve this spot and come back and comment on it later 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Selvy thts really good ...plz post all parts soon i cnt wait to read so long so post it soon 😳
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yaa it seems interestingg...unreserve the post soon...i ll be waitin
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey...
so its ur new ss...
wonderfull...
pm me ok...
waiting..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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me..!!! OMG..!! Ash left prem n prem is angry??
wht if he cums 2 noe dis bet????
Luved heer's actin..!!! prem has sum feelin for her..!!
update d nxt part soon..! plz..!
Edited by shahrukh_divya - 14 years ago
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another ss,i m waiting ur ss for so long.
heer has a habit of betting,and he is punished by his father.
and that sanjana😡she is just jelous of heer.her intenton is not good towards heer.
is prem that boy who is with another girl?
please countinue so soon.
and add me in ur pm list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i am in add mee lolz tht boy is prem right ahhaahh

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