It's my Bet - SS (24/07) 25 COMPLETED!! - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
loved it...ash left prem...good...n prem heer...they forgot each other ???
unreserve d post soon...cant wait...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
Sevly waiting for the other parts...hope you'll post them up soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great SS Selvy.
Thank you for updating it.
It looks Prem is happy that is engagement to Ash has ended. I can't believe Prem and Heer forgot about each other. I wonder what will happen when they see each other again.
Please do update it soon. Really enjoying this SS.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesomeee lovelyyy part too good waitinggg for next asap.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the little update Selvy...can't wait to read more.

So it seems like Heer and Prem missed each other wondering how their love story is going to go.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sorry friends.
i know you all are waiting for the update. I started this thinking i can post the stroy in one go but some work came. i'm not able to post it continuously. That is why i'm posting short updates.


thank you all for liking this stroy line.
Here is another shor update.

Edited by newt2007 - 14 years ago
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Shot 4

Heer got into the car with a red rose. She settled in her seat. He expected that rose to be handed over to him. But she looked at him 'ha start the car.' Prem confusingly 'you bought this for me right?' Heer 'ha' Prem 'then give it to me. why are you holding it?' Heer 'not so easily.' Prem 'what do you mean?' Heer 'I'll tell you. you first start the car.' He started the car 'where do you want me to drop?' Heer like a kid 'no treat for your birthday.' Prem 'okay. Lets go to my hotel.' Heer smiled in acceptance.

Prem opened his private room in the hotel and entered with Heer. Heer looked around the room 'nice.' Prem walked to the middle of the room. She followed him and kept her file and purse in the tea table. She looked at him with rose. She stepped closer to him. Prem is little nervous by her closeness even then he stayed calm hiding his feelings. Heer gave the flower to him 'its symbol of our love. I love you.' Prem with a smile too the flower from her hand 'thanks.' Prem looked at the flower and kept it on the tea table 'you should have done this in the car'. He turned stood facing Heer with his hands inside his trouser pockets.

Heer inched closer and put her hands around his neck. Prem is surprised by her move. He took few seconds but Heer didn't seems to be removing her hands from his neck. Instead she rested her face on his chest and stayed quiet. Prem doesn't know how to react to her bold move.

He slowly put his hand around her waist to hug her. When she felt his hands around her, she increased her tightens around him pressing herself more on him. He liked her closeness but confused about how can a girl can be so close to a person who is not know much. Heer hugged her one hand around him. her another hand fingers circled on his chest 'Premm' Prem came out of his thought 'ummm'. Heer 'don't you love me?' Prem shocked by this sudden question. He felt she is going to ask him to love her once again. he cursed himself for bringing her back into his life.

Heer 'Premmm'. Prem pushed his thought away thinking 'its not the time to think about that. unconsciously I thought about her and now she is in front of me.' he looked at her face who is waiting for his words 'not like that.' Heer 'do you think I'm not beautiful like your fiance?' Prem confused 'fiance? Who?' Heer 'what is her name? I forgot.' Prem 'she is not my fianc anymore. She is married now.'

Heer pushed him back and stepped back. Prem is shocked. He felt pain in his heart when she pushed him back shouting 'you married her?' Prem stepped forward and pulled her into his hand 'I said she is married. I didn't mean I married her.' Heer looked at him with some relief still confusion is in her eyes. Prem pushed her hair which is falling on her face 'she married someone else.' He leaned forward a inch away from their nose 'I'm still single.' She shyly smiled 'I'm sorry.' Prem still closer 'possesive.' Heer placed a kiss on his cheek and hugged him.

Keeping her face on his chest 'but you are not loving me.' Prem 'why are you saying like that?' Heer 'I was the one who always announcing my love and kissing.' She playfully hit his chest 'your action never reflects your love for me.' he gently pulled her away from his chest. he cupped her face 'nothing like that. actually I like you but.' Heer 'but what?' Prem 'I doesn't know about you na that is why?' Heer 'what do you want to know about me?' Prem 'woh woh' he turned to otherside thinking what to say. Heer walked to his front and stood in front of him 'its your right.' Prem looked at her face. Heer smiled 'I'm only daughter to my parents. my dad is working in private company. Mother left this world soon. So my dad is my mom too. Maths graduate and did B.Ed. now waiting for results. Is it enough?' Prem smiled. Quicky he became nervous 'not that.' Heer 'then' Prem 'how do you know about me? why did you decided to' Heer interrupted 'I saw you. love at first sight. I couldn't tolerate you with another girl. So I decided to announce my love but you ignored.' Sadly 'so I threaten you like that.' holding her ears 'sorry'. He removed her hands from her ears 'no need to ask sorry. I didn't lose anything.' he pulled her closed 'I only gained.' He leaned forwards and nuzzled his nose on hers 'you. your love.' he kissed her cheek 'I love you.' Heer felt as if she is flying in air. For the first time Prem voluntarily moved closer to her. She is happy that he believed her story. Heer hugged her as he rested his chin on her head.

Prem is really surprised by the way he is reacting to Heer. He thought she has some force of attraction. Heer too felt some attraction towards him. For the past one year she didn't try to meet him keeping her father's promise in mind. But she developed some liking for him inside her heart. Everyday she spoke to herself as if she is talking to Prem. that made her to fall for him as soon as she saw him again.

Whenever Prem is free he called her to hotel and they spend time chatting. All the time Heer will be holding his hand and leaning on him. Even if he is busy he never missed to call her before going to bed. They started know each others taste and loved each others company.


Month passed,

Heer happily walked in announcing 'passed. I got result. I got 90%' she jumped into his hand and hugged him tightly. Prem kissed her cheek 'congrats.' She loves his kisses more than anything. 'just one kiss.' She pouted. Prem 'want more.' he kissed her forehead and moved down her face placin sweet kisses. He gently rubbed his lips on hers. His hands pressed her more closer on him. Heer felt some difference in his touch today. her finger ran into his dense soft hair as he captured her lips passionately.

Giving a satisfy passionate kiss on her lips he moved to her shoulder. his hand removed her duppata. He started kissing her shoulder bone pushing her tops away. Heer didn't protest. She responded to his move. He guided her to bed undressing her without breaking his kiss on her. Within few minutes they became naked and started kissing each other passionately. Fire caught up and totally loved lost in each others love. They cuddled into one making sweet love.

When the became one Heer breathed happily with a smile. Prem got up. Heer pulled him back to hug. Prem pushed her away and dressed. Heer is shocked to see Prem turning otherside with hate. Heer lovingly called 'Premm'. Prem dressed. H e opened a cabinet and pulled out a box and a cover.

Heer stretched her hands 'Premmm' she expected him to come back to her. Prem walked back to the bed and threw the box and a cover on her face. He didn't look at her face 'you did everything for this only right.' Heer is confused. Prem 'here. Latest mobile and money. get last from here.' Heer covered her body with the blanket and sat on the bed. 'Prem' Prem 'I don't want to hear anything. I know you put this drama to win your bet. don't show your face to me again. get last. I hate you.' He walked to the balcony shutting the door. Heer is shocked and didn't has strength to stand. She got out of the bed and dressed quickly. She ran to balcony to explain. She saw him talking over phone. His last words rings in her ears. She stood silently with tears. She walked out of the room.

Prem after an hour came to the room and saw Heer is not there. He thought 'she don't even tried to explain. It means what I heard is right. She didn't love me.' he looked at the bed. The box and cover still on the bed. he doubted may be she is in the washroom. he checked the washroom but she is not there. He is confused 'why she didn't take this with her?' he let out a smile 'may be she has decided to get that from some one else. I didn't lose anything.' he collected everything and packed his things. He called the reception 'book a ticket for me. I want to leave India immediately.'

Balraj saw Heer coming into the house with sad face. She straight away went to her room and sat in the bed. she started crying. She held her tears until reach home. She don't want to create a scene to spoil Prem's name in the hotel. Balraj came into the room and saw her daughter crying. As soon as she saw the result she informed it to Balraj. So he know she passed with good marks. He is confused 'then why is crying now?' Fear gripped him. Balraj sat next to her 'why are you crying Heer?'

Heer hugged him tight started crying very badly. Balraj insisted her to say the reason as he became more tensed seeing her tears. Heer told about her bet to Sanjana and meeting Prem. She told about how they met after a year and fall in love. Balraj 'its okay. Now he understood your love.' Heer shook her head negatively 'no dad. he acted. He knows about my bet and cheated me now. he he.' Unable to continue further she cried 'I'm not worth to live' she covered her mouth and cried.

Balraj shocked and slapped her hard 'what are you saying?' Heer shook her head 'I lost everything.' She cover her face. Balraj started beating on her shoulder 'I told you to stop betting. You never listened to me. now.' he started crying and beating her.

Suddenly holding his chest he fell down. Heer screamed 'daaaddd'. Next few minutes Heer became lonely. Balraj breathed his last unable to bear the pain of his daughter.

Only thing continuously ringing in her ears 'One day your life will get spoiled because of this bet.' She cried inconsolably for ignoring his dad's advice. Today she lost her father. The pain of her father loss is more than anything.
Edited by newt2007 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
wow...great update plz update soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
hai!i think i m 2nd one to comment.
premeer met and heer told him about her luv.😊
premeer met regularly and they both r falling for eachother.😃
heer is passed in her exam.that's so goog.😃
they r become one.☺️omg!omg!omg!prem know everything about the bet and he is taking reveng from her.😲💔noo.this can't happen.😭😭😭😭😭
is sanjana😡told prem about the bet?
omg!omg!omg!balraj is dead😭and prem leaves india.💔now my heer is alone😭😭😭
i think geet and jeeni help her now.
but is he really taking reveng or he lost his control in luv?
r u planning to meet them by their chahat?
hope they met soon.
please update soon.😊
Edited by deshdeewani - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowww! update soon and add me to your pm list!!

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