mini ff-'OUR WAYS' last part pg 16

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Strawberry-91

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

Wow !!

lovely

please update soon

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newt2007

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

wonderful

don't worry Prem t'rwo she has to come to meet you.

why Heer stayed away from Prem after knowing the truth? is she respects Gmom more that prem's love.

contiune soon.

Edited by newt2007 - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

nice

so premeer met

gud keep going

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munni_sheela

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

guys!! part 4

after heer gone in the taxi preet and bauji came to prem
pr:kya howa PB aise bhag kar kyun aagaye???
p:preet woh heer
b:koi baat nahi beta
and heer reached the house and moving toward while thinking "aaj pore 6 saal baad prem mere samne khada tha lekin mein use kuch nahi bata sakti jis gunah ki sazah woh apne aap ko de raha hai mein use nahi bata sakti ke woh gunah usne kiya hi nahi " and she reached the main door and see chota prem running towards her and say "thank god mom aap aagye wasi itni dair kaha laga di aapne
h:sorry beta woh meeting thi
jr prem:koi baat nahi mama aap jake tayar ho hojao
h:theek hai and goes from there

after 30 minutes
heer came down and say "kya howa tum sab itne udaas kyun ho "
jr preet:mom aabhi tak abhi uncle keh rahe the woh aaj nahi aa sakte unki flight delay hogaye hai
h:ash ye preet kya keh raha hai
ash:haan heer woh abhi keh raha tha ke uski flight delay ho gaye hai aur next flight morning ki hai to woh subah hi aaye ga
h:oohh!chalo koi baat nahi hum cake kathte hain
and heer brings the cake and put it on the table and say "chalo cake kaato "and they were just blowing the candles just then athey see a man standing and say "aisa ho sakta hai mere cute se bacho ka birth day aur mein na ayyo " and all three say "abhi uncle "and run toward him and hug him then he walk toward ash and also hug him and say "ash darling mein ne tumhe bohat miss kiya "
ash:meine bhi
abhi:acha piya kahan hai
piya:mein ya ho papa (say in a happy mode)
abhi:oh my sweet little heart kaise ho
piya:mein theek
and put him down and turn toward heer and say "kaisi ho heer "
h:mein theek hoon tum kaise ho
abhi:mein bhi theek...acha mera surprise kaisa laga
all say "bohat baswas" and all with abhi start laughing and abhi say "chalo cake kahte hai
h:haan chalo and they cut cake and first feed to heer then ash ad then abhi and then piya now they say "mama humara gift "
h:bacho toda sabr karo
three of them"plz mama"
h:baad mein plzz three"okay"
and then heer start singing the song

Aye dil laaya hai bahaar(heer start the song seeing toward moon)

Apnon ka pyar, kya kehna(and turn toward ash and abhi)

Milein hum chhalak utha (now ash start the song)

Khushi ka khumaar, Kya kehna(ash say while hugging heer)

Khile khile chehron se aaj (heer say turning toward her life means her children)

Ghar hai mera (now point toward her house)

Gule gulzaar, kya kehna(say while hugging them)

Hum tum yoon hi milte rahein (abhi say by hugging ash)

Mehfil yoon hi sajti rahe(and now kiss her on her cheek)

Bas pyaar ki yehi ek dhun (ash say giving side hug to abhi)

Har subah shaam bajti rahe(and also kiss him)

Gale mein mehekte rahein (heer say giving hug to chota prem)

pyaar bhari (now to chota preet)

baahon ke haar kya kehna(now to chahat)

Khile khile chehron se aaj (ash,abhi and heer sang together)

Ghar hai mera

Gule gulzaar kya kehna

Aye dil laaya hai bahaar(abhi say)

Apnon ka pyar, kya kehna(ash say)

Milein hum chhalak utha (heer say)

Khushi ka khumaar, Kya kehna(all tree plus chilrden say)

and noW group hug and when they turn toward the main door all are shock and heer say "PREM"

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Edited by samrocking30 - 15 years ago