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Kamal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

awesome

cannot wait till the 1st chapter

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Swathy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

pls pm the next update

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Parisa

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Hyyyyy rabbbbaaaaaaaaaaa Triplets....😳
First ball mai sixer....🤣............continue sooon......

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anoushay khan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

awsum tooo gud....i just lovd da concept....nd i just hate gay3....i hope Prem1 will hate her too after knwng da truth....
Nd glad to knw dat chudail Ash told da truth to Heer....nd Heer wid da triplets made da story more intrestng....imagine when Prem1 will cm to knw abt hs prem2...preet2 nd Chahat....Ahhh...dyng to c wat will happen....
Anywayz update asap nd do PM me...
Nd SORRY ma like button iz nt workng...so...

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munni_sheela

@munni_sheela

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

PART 2

*guys i also want to tell that juneja have shifted to ambala just now and also heer is also leaving in ambala*

now lets see what is going in our heart rob house means PREM

"mami,mami"asked arnav
"kya howa beta"asked mehar
a:mami plz mein toys chahiya
m:are beta kal chalein ge aaj ghar mein pooja hain na plz
a:nahi mami plz humein aaj hi toys chahiya,,plz
m:acha theek hai tumhare mamu se pochte hoon
a:thank you mami...........and hugeed her
mehar goes to study room and say "preet"
pr:kya howa mehar?
m:preet kya tum bacho ko maal le ja sakte ho?
pr:sorry mehar humein abhi meeting mein jana hai
m:lekin preet aaj sunday hai aur ghar mein pooja bhi
pr:meeting jaldi khatam ho jaya gi
m:acha theek
pr:thanks
m:acha suna do gardiyan le jao aur bacho ko bhi aapne saath le jao pehle unhe toys le dena aur driver ke saath ghar bhej dena aur aap log meeting mein chale jan
pr:lekin mehar
m:plz preeeeeeeet .................making a puppy face
pr:acha theek hai
m:thx preet and hugg him
and mehar and preet go to haal and preet say "chalo bacha party gardi mein betho"
all kids go and sit in the car and meanwhile bauji asked "preet humein to meeting mein jana hai" then preet tell all conversation between him and mehar aand then bauji says "acha theek hai chal prem
p:jee bauji bye ma
g3:bye beta and kiss him on his forehead and they leave

THE MALL:

chalo bacho gardi se niklo say ash and all the children came out meanwhile juneja arrive in the same mall and bauji says "chalo bacho" ash with her daugther entered in the mall and go a shop while junior prem bumped into some and says "sorry uncle" (its bauji)
b:koi baat nahi beta and jr prem touch bauji feet and bauji says "jeete raho beta" and thought (kitna payara bhacha hai ) senior prem and preet are also standing with bauji while all other children have go into a shop and our jr preet came and says"aap uncle chand ke pau kyun choo rahe ho"
jr prem:uncle chand???????????
and senior prem and preet brust out laughing and jr preet says "haan dekho na inke baal hain hi nahi" senior prem and preet cannot control their laughter and bauji says"pehle mera beta mera dushman tha aur aab poori duniya ban gayi hai" and then jr prem says "preet uncle se maafi mango"
while all three(prem ,preet and bauji)say "preet???"
jr preet:ya my self preet
b:aaj mujhe pata chala duniya ke sare preet mere dushman hai
and then jr preet says:lekin PB mein kyun maafi mango
senior preet says:PB???
jr preet:haan PB as prem bhaiya and again says bhaiya meri means preet juneja ki reputation kharab ho jaye gi aur phir girls mujh se impress kaie hoon gi
all three are shock to listen his names and his same same attitude like senior preet and then chahat came and says "bhaiya kis se baat kar rahe ho"
and prem asked"kya tum teeno behan bhai ho"
jr preet says:haan aur woh bhi triplets
senior prem:triplets?????
jr preet:kyun koi problem hai??
senior prem:nahi koi bhi to nahi
jr preet:good and then chahat says "bhaiya jaldi karo maasi bula rahi hai"
jr preet:are haan chalo chalte hain
jr prem:haan chalo and take the blessing of bauji and says " bye uncle "
b:jeete raho
and the three children leave and preet says"mujhe nahi pata tha keh iss duniya mein koi mere jaisa bhi hai aur woh same naam ka"
b:haan wo dono bilkul tum dono ki tarah hain ek acha aur ek bigra howa and hit preet head
preet:aah!bauji aab mein ne kya kiya
prem:acha bauji in sab ko chordiye meeting ke liye dair ho rahe hai
b:haan chalo and junejas complete their shopping and get back to their cars and leave after that ash and three musketeers also completed their shopping and leave the maal and return to home.............

preview:lets see what happen in the meeting

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Edited by samrocking30 - 15 years ago

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mariam ayyaz

@Abhira_88

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

very good excellent waiting for next part

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sonia7

@sonia7

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

hey awesome update

thanks for the pm

i cant wait for their meeting

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Kamal

@Olicity_23

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

awesome

Uncle chand 🤣

thnx 4 the pm

update soon

Kamal

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anoushay khan

@anoushay_kdmhmd

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

dats wat i waz w8ng 4.....Prem nd Preet's reaction....hey cnt w8 to read da next part.....update asap

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Ayesha103

@Ayesha103

Voyager

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Posted: 15 years ago

#20

awesum!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! go ahed wiv the nxt one luki 4ward to it! just change the font and size cos my eyesight is quiete weak lol! and mye yes stiing lol 🤣 other than that its a awesum mini ff wiv a wondrful conccept!

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