mini ff-'OUR WAYS' last part pg 16

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munni_sheela

@munni_sheela

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

hi everyone this is my first ff and im going to write it on my favorite couple prem heer
so here is the concept this story starts from prem heer separation before leap reason is the same but when heer go in the train and reached ambala she met ash there and ask for her forgiveness and tell her the truth heer was so happy that prem was innocent and again come back to Ludhiana but g3 saw her and tell her to go away bcoz she didn't like her so the heart broken heer went back and now the leap of 6 years but heer not have one daughter but also have two sons means triplets she named them prem,preet and chahat and she live with ash and ash is married to a person named abhishek and have 2 years daughter name piya and three of them call ash "massi".................................

so how do u like my concept if u want me to continue just comment and press the like button

INDEX
CONCEPT -PG 1
PART 1 -PG 2

PART 2 -PG 3
PART 3 -PG 4
PART 4 -PG 5

PART 5 -PG 7

PART 6 -PG 8

PART 7 -PG 9
PART 8 -PG 11

PART 9 -PG 13

PART 10-PG 15
last part -pg 16

Edited by samrocking30 - 15 years ago

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Ayesha103

@Ayesha103

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

its gud pm me it carry on wiv it im sure people will luv it! ; )

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zohakhan7

@zohakhan7

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+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

plzz do continue.would love to read ur ff and add me to ur pm list and pm me whenever u update. 😊

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munni_sheela

@munni_sheela

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

sorry i forgot to mention that abhishek knows every thing about ash past because when he propose ash she refused and then he asked for the reason she tell him the truth and everything is same at prem place but bauji ,preet and Harman talk to prem but didn't forget heer..................... and now about heer children
no1:prem likes his father in attitude and also by face
no2:preet like his chachu by attitude
no3:chahat same as in the serial

Edited by samrocking30 - 15 years ago

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swati

@sweta2005

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

update soon with long part asap.

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mariam ayyaz

@Abhira_88

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

i am waiting for your post

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newt2007

@newt2007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

its wonderfull that stroy line.

WOW triplets.

Heer is not angry on Prem. waiting how Prem going to find his children?

waiting for the update.

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munni_sheela

@munni_sheela

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

so guys here is the part one

we see a house not too large nor small and then a girl doing arti and then we see girl face (ofcourse) HEER...and she goes to a person room and waking him up by saying

"prem,prem beta uth jao"

prem:mein to utha howa hoon mama

heer:are wah.......acha chal jaldi se fresh ho kar neeche aaja

prem:theek hai ma

then premm goes to washroom and heer go to another room and says

"preet uth ja"

preet:plz ma thodi derr sone do na waise bhi pb bhi to soye hoe hai

heer:nahi ji woh kab ka uth chuka hai aur ab t bhi uth ja

preet:theek hai ma

then preet goes to washroom and heer goes to another room and says

"chahat subha ho gaye hai chalo jaldi se uth jao"

chahat:plz ma thoda sa sone do na

heer:tum dono se acha to prem ko uthana hai

chahat:ha ha appka laadla jo hai

heer:ha hai to chal ab baat chord aur fresh hone ja

and chahat goes to washroom and heer goes to the kitchen for making break fast and ash is sitting on dinning table eating an apple and the three muskeeters came and says

"good morning massi"

ash:good morning beta aagaye uth kar

prem:haan massi

preet:aur waise bhi jab aap jaisi cute girl ghar mein ho to neend kaha se aaue gi

ash:badmash...kitni besharm hogaya hai aik dum apne...................

not letting complete ash sentence heer come and says "HAPPY BIRTHDAY"then they say"thank you mama"and hug her and then ash says"happy birthday"and agian they say"thank ypu massi"and then preet says

mama humara gift???????????

heer:woh aaj shaam ki party mein milen ga

preet says:party??????????

heer:haan tum logo ki birthday party..acha aab in sab ko chordo aur breakfast karlo

by saying this they all started to eat breakfast and after that heer days"acha ash mein hotel ja rahi hoon in sab ka khayal rakhna"

ash:lekin heer aaj to sunday hai

heer:woh aaj meeting hai hai na isi liye

ash:lekin party??

heer:tab tak meeting khatam ho jaye gi

ash:acha theek ha

and saying this heer left and then ash says"to bacha party shopping par chale"

chahat:ha massi chalte hain