mini ff-'OUR WAYS' last part pg 16 - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
part 5
heer says prem and prem leaves from there without saying word and then chota prem asked "mama yeh kon the " heer didinot say anything and run to her bed abd locked the door and cry cry and cry where outside prem was shattered and say "kyun heer kyun mujhse itni badi baat chupai kyun"
flash back
pr:kya howa PB aise bhag kar kyun aagaye???
p:preet woh heer
b:koi baat nahi beta
p:aise kaise bauji aaj mein heer se baat kar ke hi raho ga
b:theek hai beta jaise teri marzi and prem follow the taxi

present

next morning heer wake up and come down stair and say "acha ash mein ja rahe hoon"
ash:lekin heer breakfast???
h:ash aajmera varat hai
ash:heer kyun not letting ash complete her sentence heer say chalo bacho " and then drop her children to school and then say "oh noo! late hogaye" and rushes to the office and then entered in the sujal office nad say "sor..."and see prem sitting with sujal and they both are discussing abt the project and sujal say "heer kahan thi tum"
h"woh...bacho...ko...school...chordne ....gaye .....thi..."and prem closes his eyes when she says "bacho" and agian heer says"sujal aaj mujhe half day chaiye "
s:kyun???
h:woh.......
prem thought "mein janta hoon heer ke tum ne mere liye vrat rakha hai aur tum aaj bji mujhse pyaar karti hoon lekin phir bhi mujhse itni badi baat kun chupai aur ash woh kyun tumhare saath rehte hai jabke usne tumhare saath kya kiya woh tum jante hoo"

flash back

acha preet aaj office se jaldi aa jana"say mehar in a cute voice .......

p:woh kyun mere rasgulle????
m:woh kya hai na aaj karva chaut hai aur meine tumhare liye vrat rakha hai isiliye
pr:acha theek hai mein aajao ga and kiss her on her on her cheek and say "bye "all this was saw by prem and his eyes moist and he remember heer
present
s:acha theek hai
h:thanks
s:acha chalo and drag her to the table and sit her beside prem chair and say "lets start" and they wre discussing but prem eyes were on heer and heer know that but couldnt meet prem eyes due to the night incident and after discussing heer say "mein bas abhi aaye" and leave from ther prem also go behind him and see her crying and goes naer her and put his finger around heer eyes and heer tear drop in prem finger and heer sees prem and heer say "prem" ....................
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Edited by samrocking30 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
great
thanx 4 the pm
update soon
Kamal
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
Thanks for the pm...
I liked the present and ur flashbacks...
cool idea...
cant wait sam...
Thanks... keep writing...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
flash back and presset part lovely
Heer has kept virdh for Prem. hope Prem help her to finish the virdh.
next time plz update a lengthy part.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
awesomeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap with long part asap.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
nice.....
hope heer tells prem that he didn't do anything wrong....
continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
nice update

hopes premeer comes together soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
PART 6
heer say "prem" but her phone rang
h:hello
person:hello heer mein ash
h:haan ash bolo
as heer say ash prem start leaving and heer see that and say to ash "ash mein tumhe baad mein phone karti hoon" and cut the line and run behind prem and see him walking on the road and a car coming in a full speed toward prem and prem see that car as well as heer but keep walking towards the car and when heer see the car she run and shout "prem"and pushes him and they roll and reach on the corner of the road and lost in each other eyes and after a ehile they got up and heer start shouting
h:pagal hogaye ho prem dahyan kaha hai tumhara kya soch kar road ke darmiyan chal rahe the agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh
p:toh???
h:toh......
p:toh kya heer ???kya?? acha hota mein us gardi ke neeche akar mar jata kum se aisi ghut ghut kar jene se toh acha hi hota...nahi chaiye aisi zindagi mujhe jis mein tum na ho tumahara pyar na ho vishwas na ho .........vishwas heer vishwas tum ne mujhse itni badi baat chupai ke is duniyah mein humari pyar ki nishani hai humare bache hai ajj tak meine tum se koi baat nahi chupai hata keh us raat jo mere aur ash ke beach howa eoh bhi tumhein bata diya lekin tumne mujhse itni badi baat chupai kaise heer kaisi?????
heer had no answer but was crying
p:chup kyun ho heer kyun?????akhir in 6 saalo mein aisa kya howa keh tum ne ash ko maaf kardiya par mujhe nahi kyun heer jab tum ash ko maaf karsakti ho toh mujhe kyun nahi??????(prem was also crying)
and heer start moving but prem held her hand and pull her towards him and say
p:aaj nahi heer...aaj tumhein mere har sawaal ka jawab dena hoga kal raat bhi meine tum se kuch nahi pocha lekin aab nahi jawab do heer jawab do.......
h:kya jawab do prem kya???tum sach nahi sun pao ge aur mein tumhein kuch bata bhi nahi pao gi............
p:heer aisi kon si baat hai jo tum mujhe nahi bata sakti kya woh baat humare pyaar se badi hai..............
p:hai prem bohat badi baat hai agar woh baat meine tumhe bata di to tum toot jao ge aur mein yeh sab nhai chati kyunki........
p:kyunki????asked innocently
h:kyunki....kyunki mein nahi janti
and by saying this she start moving and prem said to him self "beshak heer tum mujhe woh baat aaj na batao lekin mein janta hoon ke waqt aane par tum mujhe woh baat bata do gi lekin jo baat tumne aab adhori chordi thi woh mein tumse bulwa kar hi raho ga ke tum aaj bhi mujhse bohat pyaar karti hoo........"
i know this is short and sorry for that and if u like it plz do comment and press like button
Edited by samrocking30 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
Its AWESOME...
very passionate and loving...
thnks so much for the pm and the update...
I hope Heer tells that G3 is behind all this..
thnks...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
aww...tat was awesome...
hope tat heer tells him abt gay3 ....

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