FF: Thaam Le Mera Haath: Chapter 7:Page 28: Mar 7

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FF: Thaam Le Mera Haath

Hello! 😃 I know what you're thinking 😆 Three FFs on the loose, and I'm already starting a new one! 😆 I couldn't help myself, once I get a story in my head, I just have to pen it down! 😳 Well, here is my new story, hopefully it will not be a full-fledged Fanfic, and will be more of a short story. It deals with quite a mature, yet realistic matter, so I request people to read with an open mind, and if you don not like the story, simply do not read it 😃 I hope this story is liked by all, and I look forward to seeing what kind of response I get from it. Thank you for all your support with all my other FFs! 😃 And, I am not going to be having a PM list for this SS- they stress me out most of the time 😆(EDIT ADD: After loads of requests for PMs to be sent, I am making a PM list, so let me know if you want to be in it 😛)
~* Chapters *~

Chapter One: Page 1
Chapter Two: Page 4
Chapter Three: Page 9
Chapter Four: Page 13
Chapter Five: Page 16
Chapter Six: Page 22
Chapter Seven: Page 28
~* PM List *~

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Chapter One

A lone tear fell down to caress her cheek as she struggled to comprehend the news that was staring her in the face. This could not be happening. This was not how her life was meant to turn out- she had so many plans, so many aspirations. How could she have been so foolish? How could she have let this happen? She had a successful career ahead of her, the prospect of travelling around the world. Yet, in an instant, one reckless act of hers had washed it all away. She stared down at the pregnancy test, clinging to it tightly as she scanned it once more, the thin blue line flashing at her. After taking four tests, each showing the same thing, there was no doubt that Heer Maan was pregnant.

~*~ Flashback ~*~

It was her twenty-first birthday- her friends had argued that going out was a must, almost dragging her out of her apartment and grabbing a taxi to a well-known club scene. As she entered the club, her initial hesitation to go out died down and she felt herself really enjoying getting loose. It was not everyday that she was able to escape her hectic work life and find herself having fun and fully taking pleasure out of her life. The drinks kept coming in, and she did not refuse. Why would she? It was her birthday and she was there to have fun. As she danced to her heart's content, she raised her glass to her lips and frowned. She stared at her empty glass and childishly giggled, hopping over to the bar carelessly.

'A Cape Cod, please,' she requested to the bartender, taking a seat on a swivel stool as she waited for her drink. She nonchalantly hummed to the music that drummed across each corner of the room. She felt herself turning ten shades of red when the bartender bestowed her with a wink as well as her drink. It was when she turned to return to the dance floor that she felt herself crashing into something hard but strangely warm. The impact of the crash had her spinning around, and almost falling as her head began to spin with light-headedness. It took her a moment to register the feel of two arms holding her up steadily.

'Whoa there,' a voice said. It was a male voice- a voice which was such a velvety rumble to her ears that it had her closing her eyes in response. As she opened her eyes in a state of dreamy languor she became conscious of a pair of large, striking, brown eyes gazing down at her.

'Are you okay?' he asked as she regained control of her balance as well as her senses. She gave him a small smile and nodded.

'Can I get you a drink?' he asked unexpectedly and she giggled, pointing to her brim filled glass. As she noticed his face fall, she felt something twinge inside of her. She suddenly gulped down her drink right to the very last drop and took a seat at the bar once more, waiting for him to join her. He smirked at her act, clearly impressed and slid in the seat next to her. She remembered him telling her his name, and remembered revelling in how beautiful it had sounded to her ears. She couldn't remember the last time she had enjoyed someone's company as she did his. He was charming, sexy, and oozed charisma. She was hopelessly drawn to him, drawn to everything about him. When she left him to join her friends and dance the night away, she could feel his eyes on her all night, and it was driving her insane. So insane that she felt herself walking up to him, taking his hand and taking him to the dance floor with her. Of course, he had obliged, for she could see the same attraction that she felt for him reflected in his eyes for her. She twirled around him, manoeuvring her body to the beat of the music, and he did the same. It was her turn to oblige when he had bent down to cover her lips with his, for it was a feeling unlike no other. It sent blissful chills down her spine. And thus, one thing had led to another.

'Come home with me,' he had whispered seductively in her ear. She knew he was not taking advantage, for he was just as drunk as she was. In fact, many could blame her for taking advantage of him. Without thinking, she had silently slipped her hand in his, following him and leaving her friends behind. She clung to him desperately, loving the passion that he had rained upon her.

When they had entered his home and he had lowered her on to his bed he had asked, 'Are you sure you want to do this?' and she had replied with a simple nod, letting his soft kisses caress her face and his hands caress her body. She had trembled, overcome with excitement. She loved the way his muscles felt underneath his shirt, she loved the way he whispered her name. Most of all, she had felt complete when he had lowered himself on to the bed and joined her.

~*~*~

And here she was, two months onwards, facing the consequences. This was not how she had imagined getting pregnant. She had pictured being married, sitting together with her husband in their warm and cosy house, both waiting anxiously for the test to reveal that she was pregnant, both desperately wanting there to be a tiny baby growing inside of her. Today, she was all alone and unhappy. She felt nauseated and clammy, unable to believe that she had gotten herself into such a mess.

She needed to find him- she needed to find the father of her child. Though she was not willing to tell him about her pregnancy, she had a nagging urge to know what he felt about the whole situation. But how was she going tell him? She knew nothing about him. A face and a name that linked to that face was all that lingered in her memory of that night. Where was she going to find him? Where was she going to find Prem Juneja?

Is Heer going to find Prem Juneja? 😆 Can't wait to read what you thought of the first part! 😳
Love Zahra x
Edited by Pyari_Zahra - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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You started a new FF? YAY! And amazing start. I cannot wait for more.

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Whoa.....Zahra with a new story on the block??......
Haven't read it yet......but reserving my spot...............n u can surely count me to read this or whatever u write.....U know how much I love ur writing...don't u?
But why didn't u give us a clue abt this one coming from ur Creative den?Took me by surprise when I saw a new thread by you...............Not a word of its coming anytime before.......Each of ur posts taking us by surprise nowadays Zahra.....
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"Whoa".....The first word that came to my mind when I saw that u had come with a new post & that too a SS & that's what I typed above as well before settling down to read it??...And what a coincidence Zahra it's also the very first word uttered by the man himself in this story in the very first part....😉😆...............& I must say I'm truly honoured to have quoted the same word😆
A very beautiful start Zahra..........this can proceed in either way.....1)a Short Story
2)a FanFiction
And u very well know that I wouldn't mind either of these...........😉😆.............Don't u Zahra?Itna to tum mere bare mein samaj hi gaye honge.....😉😆
Don't u think it could have been long Zahra?😉.....I couldn't get enough of it....😆
So, can we expect Mr.Prem Juneja in the next update?Oh God, how's he gonna react to this?U should have given a precap, u know?For the solace of these waiting minds of ur readers....😉😆
Waiting for you to continue.............
Love
Vrinda
Edited by vrinda16 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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So Heer got knocked up😆 what if Prem turns out to be like Seth Meyers, man that would be fun......question, why didn't Heer use birth control????
Anyhoo Z, can't wait to read whats in store for Heer Madam
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Another FF Zahra..wooww that is GREAT!!!!!!!!
I loved the first update...phantabulous and awesome!!!!!!!!!!
beautifully written....
waiting for the next update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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brillant......⭐️.........can't wait 4 da next part...............😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome work...
cant wait for next part...
plz update asap...

regards,
Suhana.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi
wow its really awesome
loved it beautifully written
wait for the next upate asap
luv
Fatima
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Posted: 15 years ago
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mie

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ok I am mad but not at the FF at you!...Di you had to leave it on a cliff hanger....A blasted cliff hanger?!
plus I have a ton of coursework so gonna do that first then come back! 😳 😛

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Mind-blowing, superb, amazing!...PH-antabulous!....that was really really good
I am really pleased you started another one!...but will you be able to handle it!

Like always you blew me away with your writing

but hey one question can we blame prem?...I mean after all he did ask her right? and she said yes?!...sooo technically the fault is on both sides! So its all good I GUESS ! 😆 😉

I would like you to continue A.S.A.P

so the big question will heer find Prem?

-aashifa-
Edited by curledup - 15 years ago

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