FF: Thaam Le Mera Haath: Chapter 7:Page 28: Mar 7

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Fari

@MimiLulu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

Awesome update, Zahra! Can't wait for the next part!

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366791

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

That was a great update

Aww poor Heer and Prem

Both didnt think things would turn out this way

Cant wait to read the next part

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vrinda16

@vrinda16

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

Zahra.............U updated?😲.....I didn't know.......Just saw now................

My spot...........

Rushing off to read it.....will be back after it.............I'm already late.........Oh I hate university works.......They keep me off from everything .....

****Edited****

Zahra, I'm telling u this SS has every scope of being a FF😆😉......So, u know, .........why not...........?...I know I'm hopeless........ am I not?😆

Awwwwwwwwww............he hasn't stopped thinking about her even once?How chweeeeet........An architect ........Handling his business for 10 years?.....Sigh......What abt family Zahra?Any close knit family coming up or is it noone in this world except Heer now?

Meera....😲..........u his receptionist? Zahra, sab kuch jante hue bhi tumne Meera ko ek receptionist bana diya especially in this PH story?😆......Meera, don't be heartbroken........consider urself lucky to have such close association with Mr.Juneja😉😆....

But wait......Zahra, Meera has quite an important role in this story right? warna tum sirf receptionist keh sakti thi.....par nahi...tumne Receptionist ka naam bata diya..........woh bhi signified her name plate "Meera" to Heer as well....😉.......I'm right?...Is it that a friendship is gonna brew between Meera-Heer or Prem-Meera?Meera, I feel u've quite a big role to play....Only Zahra, can clarify...............

Well, Zahra, um......uh....um..any other posts available in Mr.Prem Juneja's firm?u know.....I love to work?.....that's it.....sacchi muchhi...........nothing else.......

Oh, they met again......that prevailing silence, that hesitancy on both sides, that revealation by Heer, that moistness in both eyes........thinking of the other's pain on the news......Sigh.........

I know Zahra,my Mr.Prem Juneja will be with Heer through this......he will.....won't he?And amidst that, U'll spread your flavours of love to rekindle their hidden love for each other to the surface & help them reach its culmination .......right Zahra?.......Now, am I being a little too positive.....bcos u usually take me by surprise u know?Afterall, u can be ebil😉😆

But I'm happy Zahra, this update was indeed long...........Thank u......***hugs***

Do keep up with this pace always.......ok.....took me by surprise that u updated so fast.....

HAPPY DIWALI !!

U know what Zahra? The title of this SS has me humming those lines u know of that song "Soniyo" in Raaz 2:-(the red line)😆

"tu de de mera saath tham le haath, chaahe jo bhi ho baat
tu bas de de mera saath..............................................."

So are we to see Mr.Juneja behind Heer singing this?😉😆Just kidding...............

Love

Vrinda

Edited by vrinda16 - 15 years ago

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Riya

@PrincessPatel77

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

awesome update
continue asap
can u please pm me when u update???

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-Ritz-

@-Ritz-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

awesome update. could you plz add me to your list. thanx for the update.

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sia

@luv_kdmhmd

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

Hi zahra, Happy Diwali

Interesting that heer still has not left prem's thoughts. You know I was wondering what happened when they woke next day after their lovemaking. What would be their reactions after realizing what they did. You answered that in this update. cant believe that he kept her locket so safely with himself for so long, well that's our prem. Loved his confidence. The way she told him about his child was good. I feel that he will like to take part in her and his child's life, and prove it to her that she holds special place in his life. Awesome update. Looking forward to the next.

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kanika

@kank_dah

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

hi...both d chapters are amazing......lukng 4ward to d nxt update.....

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kanika

@kank_dah

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#48

hey.....both d updates r amazing........luking 4ward to d nxt update.

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cute_1790

@cute_1790

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#49

wow ur ff is dam good...
i just read both the parts n they r superb👏
i just love the way u write..
amazing story line..m loving it a lot.....
plz add me to ur PM list...
n plz update next part ASAP...as i cant wait anymore to see wht Prem will do now..........loved it
superb..........

Deeksha

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Magpie

@Magpie

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#50

Oooh...someone is on a writing spree !!
But pls don't abandon 'T' girl :((

Hmm....so Ms Maan has got a bun in the oven :) Eager to read how this story proceeds.

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