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Angie

@angel82

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#31

OMG Z that was an awesome update...you started it with PRem...*deep sigh* the way he remembers Heer and their night together was soo beautifuly written....Heer already disturbs and refuses to leave his mind...

the whole part was very well written and I cant wait to read ahead...I am kinda sure Prem will want to be a part pf his baby's life and that way he and heer will get close..By Heer's talks , it seems though she is attracted to his looks , she isnt inclined towards him...so may be the baby will help Prem into Heer's heart...

oh i love this and its nice that you are moving it on a fast pace...

eagerly waiting

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#32

my spot. Remind me to come back to this.

*edited*

I'm in shock that I remembered. You should be too! 😆

I love the fact that Prem cannot get Heer off of his mind, despite the fact that he only met her that once, and that too two months ago. He's completely enamoured by a girl he knows next to nothing about, and that is so utterly Prem-ish that I overlooked that. 😆

Heer's apprehension was written so well. To be in that position must be hard, and you wrote her nerves, and her conviction that what she was doing was the right thing to do, so well, that it's hard not to empathise with her. Hats off!

The whole conversation was written very well. The emotions on both sides weer portrayed very realisticly I should think. His confusion and shock, her pain and determination, and her apprehenstion, and him trying to digest the news. I am assuming, because of the connection he already feels with Heer, he's not going to let her walk (or run) out of his life so easily. I cannot wait for more!

Oh, and I love the fact that Prem's secretary's name is Meera. 😆

Love,
Radz

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Nitty

@Nitty2910

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#33

very interesting. waiting to read wat is gonna be prem's next reaction.. and heer too... eagerly waiting for the next update...

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441240

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#34

awesomeeeeeee update............👏
loved it...........⭐️
rely hope that prem will want be apart of the baby and heer's life.........
something tells me that he will........😉
waiting patiently for the next update.............
and for lots of romantic premeer moments..............
coz u do a phabulous job writing them...............👍🏼

Yaz

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bd670816

@bd670816

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#35

hey zahra, i read ur ff now. it was awesome.
plz continue soon.

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...Nikhita...

@...Nikhita...

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#36

fabulous ss!
very well written.....
loved the first two parts.....continue soon!

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fungrl

@fungrl

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#37

awesome update Zahra.................Can't wait to read what Prem will do next...behari Heer her hormones are taking over already.....

oh don't forget to PM me the next update

adios

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Zahra

@Pyari_Zahra

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Suhana Ahmed
i am the first one yay...

awesome update...

i am loving this FF....

very well done..

plz continue soon... really soon...

regards,
Suhana.

Thank you so much Suhana 😳 Will try to continue as soon as possible 😃 x

Originally posted by: Additi...
Kya baat hai Zahra i didnt expected the next update so sooon I know, I had the idea in my head already so writing it came easily 😳

just kidding it was very beautiful i loved it Awww thank you, I'm gald you liked reading it 😃

plzzz contiue your both FF I'm going through a bit of a confusion with the other two FFs, I mean, I know how I want the story to shape out, but it's writing everything down that is becoming difficult 😕

the only song i remembered reading this part was Bhikri bhikri se hai zulfi hai kyon? from whats your rasheee? Haven't heard that song- did it make you think of that song because of Prem running his hands through his hair? 😆

Originally posted by: --Sarah--
Phantabulous update Zahra 👏
loved it and enjoyed reading it.... beautifully written..premeer expressions and feelings very well described 👏 👏 👏
waiting for the next update

😳 Thank you so much Sarah 😳 I'm really glad you enjoyed reading it. I shall hopefully update soon 😃 x

Originally posted by: Nitty2910
very interesting. waiting to read wat is gonna be prem's next reaction.. and heer too... eagerly waiting for the next update...

Hey! 😃 Thank you. Prem's reactions shall be good, he knows how to do the right thing 😳 And of course, Heer's never going to stop him from being part of his child's life. 😃 x

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MrsCrosby87

@MrsCrosby87

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#39

awesome concept pls put me on the pm list :D

and do contuine soon!!!!

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Meera

@indiandoll89

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#40

Omg Z! *claps*

You updated? 😲 As you can tell I'm still KINDA in shock 😛

Oh and I get to be Prem's receptionist? *giggles* That's nice too 😛😳

But I love that Heer found him, and ohhh he couldn't stop thinking about her? 😳 That's good then! 😃

I can't wait to see what happens now! 😃

Continue soon,

Meera😳

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