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anumol

@sweetanu2314

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

nice concept........... do pm me when u update............

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Meera

@indiandoll89

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Omg Z!!! *squeals* A new SS? 😲

YAY! 😃😳

I absolutely love the concept of it! 😛 Wow one little mistake...😛 See this is why I don't wanna go clubbing for my bday *nods* Course Prem being there would change my mind 😛😳 I shud shut up 😛

Anyways I hope you continue this asap because you've left it totally on a cliff hanger! 😛

Soon Z soon! 😃😃

Love you,

Meera😳

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Zahra

@Pyari_Zahra

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Sonalicious
Brilliant, please continue soon!

Hey Fari 😃 Thank you very much, will hopefully continue soon! 😳 x

Originally posted by: Anhdara13
You started a new FF? YAY! And amazing start. I cannot wait for more.

Love,
Radz

Yes I did!! 😆 And thank you 😳😳😳 I'm happy you liked the first chapter 😃 Will try to make the future chapters just as enjoyable to read 😳 x

Originally posted by: vrinda16
Whoa.....Zahra with a new story on the block??...... Yes, I hope I will be able to handle it 😆

Haven't read it yet......but reserving my spot...............n u can surely count me to read this or whatever u write.....U know how much I love ur writing...don't u? Awww, you're too sweet to me, and that's why I love you 🤗

But why didn't u give us a clue abt this one coming from ur Creative den?Took me by surprise when I saw a new thread by you...............Not a word of its coming anytime before.......Each of ur posts taking us by surprise nowadays Zahra..... I was playing around with the idea, and just had to post it! 😆 So it was just as much as a surprise to me as it is to you 😆 Just whenever I get an idea, I have to write about it 😳

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"Whoa".....The first word that came to my mind when I saw that u had come with a new post & that too a SS & that's what I typed above as well before settling down to read it??...And what a coincidence Zahra it's also the very first word uttered by the man himself in this story in the very first part....😉😆...............& I must say I'm truly honoured to have quoted the same word😆 Hehe, I didn't realise that at first until I read your comment 😳 Yes, his very first word in the story 😍 I'm sure you are very honoured 😉

A very beautiful start Zahra..........this can proceed in either way.....1)a Short Story

2)a FanFiction

And u very well know that I wouldn't mind either of these...........😉😆.............Don't u Zahra?Itna to tum mere bare mein samaj hi gaye honge.....😉😆 Thank you Vrinda, that means a lot to me. And yes, I will try to keep it short, but I have a feeling that it will end up turning into an FF 😆 Yes, I totally understand what you're saying 😆

Don't u think it could have been long Zahra?😉.....I couldn't get enough of it....😆 It was 2 pages!! My usual length for Temptations- I just used a different font this time, so it seemed short. But I will make the next one longer I promise! 😳

So, can we expect Mr.Prem Juneja in the next update?Oh God, how's he gonna react to this?U should have given a precap, u know?For the solace of these waiting minds of ur readers....😉😆 Aah- yes, you will be introduced to a certain Mr Juneja in the next chapter 😉 Oh, I can't spoil it! You yourself can wait and see the drama unfold in the next chapter 😆

Waiting for you to continue............. Thank you, will try not to keep you waiting 😃 Love Zahra x

Love

Vrinda

Originally posted by: fungrl
So Heer got knocked up😆 what if Prem turns out to be like Seth Meyers, man that would be fun......question, why didn't Heer use birth control????

Anyhoo Z, can't wait to read whats in store for Heer Madam

Yes she did 🤣 That was such a funny movie! 😆 OMG, it would be HILARIOUS if he turned out like him 🤣 (Correction- isn't it Seth Rogan in 'Knocked Up'? 😕😆) But nope, he won't be like him, I'll assure you of that 😆 The answer to your question is because that's how I wanted it to be- If she had used birth control then how would I have formed this storyline? 😆 Thanks for your lovely comment, I had fun reading it 😆 Will continue soon 😳 x

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Zahra

@Pyari_Zahra

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: --Sarah--
Another FF Zahra..wooww that is GREAT!!!!!!!!
I loved the first update...phantabulous and awesome!!!!!!!!!!
beautifully written....
waiting for the next update

Hello Sarah 😃 Yes, another one 😆 Thank you very much, I'm glad the first chapter was a joy to read 😳 I have written most of the next chapter, so shall try to update as soon as possible 😃 x

Originally posted by: yasu09
brillant......⭐️.........can't wait 4 da next part...............😍

Thank you Yas 😳 Will be continuing very soon 😊 x

Originally posted by: Suhana Ahmed
awesome work...
cant wait for next part...
plz update asap...

regards,
Suhana.

Hiya Suhana! Hehe, thanks, hopefully you will continue to like the story as it develops further 😳 Thanks for reading and commenting 😃 x

Originally posted by: -fsn-
hi
wow its really awesome
loved it beautifully written
wait for the next upate asap
luv
Fatima

Awww you're so sweet Fatima- thank you 😳 I shall update soon 😃 Won't keep you waiting like I usually do 😆 x

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366791

Suspended

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

That was really good

Cant wait to read more

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Angie

@angel82

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

ZZzzzzzzzz *squishy hug*

you 're back with another charming, sexy charismatic Prem 😍..and a gorgeous modern Heer😍... Do i have to say i luuubbbed the first chapter and the concept..you should be knowing by now that i lub anything and everything u write....i am eagerly waiting for you to continue....

SS or FF either way me hav no probs....oh cant wait for heer to find prem...wonder how he will react....

thanks a lot Z for starting this one...i'm really excited to read ahead...Do try to update regularly...

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sia

@luv_kdmhmd

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Hi zahra.

Good concept, do continue it and add me in your pm list. Waiting to know what prem's first reaction would be, when he comes to know about heer's pregnancy. Loved it.

Sia

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Parisa

@XSilentPrayersX

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Zahra the concept is very different amd new

plzzz ad me to the Pm list and waiting for your update

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@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Only you can write these two characters in this light. :)

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Zahra

@Pyari_Zahra

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: curledup
mie

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ok I am mad but not at the FF at you!...Di you had to leave it on a cliff hanger....A blasted cliff hanger?!
plus I have a ton of coursework so gonna do that first then come back! 😳 😛 Haha, be mad at me however much you like, this is my loved technique of keeping you guys hooked 😆

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Mind-blowing, superb, amazing!...PH-antabulous!....that was really really good
I am really pleased you started another one!...but will you be able to handle it! Awww, thank you, thank you, thank you! 😳 I'm happy you liked it that much, but I have no idea how I will handle it all! 😆

Like always you blew me away with your writing Awww *blushes* thank you 😳

but hey one question can we blame prem?...I mean after all he did ask her right? and she said yes?!...sooo technically the fault is on both sides! So its all good I GUESS ! 😆 😉 Well, I don't blame one person- I blame both at the moment, they were too stupid to take precautions and just got carried away by emotions, which is not a good thing, especially since now a little baby's life is involved! 😃

I would like you to continue A.S.A.P Will continue tomorrow, pakka promise 😃

so the big question will heer find Prem? Of course Heer will find her Prem 😆 Thanks Aashifa! 😳

-aashifa-

Originally posted by: sweetanu2314
nice concept........... do pm me when u update............

Thank you very much 😳 I'm not having a PM list for this FF, but if you really really desperately want a PM when I update, then let me know and I will PM you 😃 Thanks for reading 😳 x

Originally posted by: indiandoll89
Omg Z!!! *squeals* A new SS? 😲YES!! 😲 Shocking isn't it? 😆 I was shocked myself 😆

YAY! 😃😳

I absolutely love the concept of it! 😛 Wow one little mistake...😛 See this is why I don't wanna go clubbing for my bday *nods* Course Prem being there would change my mind 😛😳 I shud shut up 😛 Thanks Meera- yes the consequences of one litttttllllleeee mistake 😆 Yes, don't do it Meera- even if there is a Prem there, you need not get tempted! 😆 I sound like my mother 🤣

Anyways I hope you continue this asap because you've left it totally on a cliff hanger! 😛 Yes I will be continueing, next part will be posted tomorrow as I have already written it

Soon Z soon! 😃😃 Yes, yes, I know- soon! 😆

Love you, I love you too 🤗 Zahra x

Meera😳