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hello everyone
here's comes the next chapter
i don know when am i going to update next
till then enjoy this

CHAPTER-41

Ishita joins them. All of them chat on random topics. After few hours the train stops at a station. Preet and prem get down. Preet goes to get water while prem stands on the platform near the window where heer was there.

He silently signals heer to come out of there. She nods understandingly and making an excuse goes to the door. By then prem also comes to the door.

HEER: Kya hua?

PREM: Kuch nahin.

HEER: Phir mujhe kyun bulaya?

PREM: Kunal aur ishita ke chehre dekhe? Bichare ek doosre se baat karne ke liye kitne taras rahe hain, pat tum toh apni bak bak kiye jaa rahi thi.

HEER: Acha toh mein bak bak karti hoon?

PREM: Nahin heer mere kehne ka matlab woh nahin tha..

They were standing near the door. As the engine whistles people start getting in and they move aside a bit. At last preet enters and was walking towards his berth when he feels someone pulling him back. He turns to see prem and heer. Prem leaves his collar.

PREM: Itne mushkil se unhe akela mein baat karne ka mauka diya ab tu kahaan jaa raha hai.. rukh

PREET: Matlab hume yahaan kada hona hoga? Isse acha hota ki aap undono ke liya aur hum logon ke liye alag alag ticket liye hote.

HEER: Preet ab har koi tumhare jitna intelligent nahin ho sakta hain na

PREET: You're right.

PREM: Haan preet bilkul har koi tumhara jitna intelligent nahin hota agar hote na toh har choti baat pe jagda nahin karte..

PREET: Prem Bhai aap kya bol rahe hain.

HEER: Preet intelligent log kuch bhi aise hi nahin bol dete..

PREET: Kya?

PREM: Preet kabhi kabhi intelligent logon se bhi galti ho jaati hain

PREET: Bassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss (covering his ears)

Premeer turn away form each other.

PREET: Koi mujhe batayega yeh kya ho raha hai?

HEER: Apne PB se poocho

PREET: PB

PREM: Mein kyun bataoun jisne ladayi shuru ki hai usse poocho..

HEER: Tumhare kehne ka matlab mein ne

PREM: Mein ne aisa kab kaha?

PREET: Enough mujhe nahin jaana kyun lad rahe ho. Shaanti rako.

Prem turns away again.

HEER: Mujhe bohut bhook lag rahi hai chalo kuch khaane ko laate hain

Heer walks away. Preet was about to follow her when prem stops him.

PREM: Tu kahaan jaa raha hai? Rukh yaheen pe

He goes behind heer.

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After heer makes an excuse and leave kunal and ishita become silent. They were stealing secret glances of each other. After few minutes of silence,

KUNAL: Tum delhi mein rehthi ho yeh baat mujhe bataya kyun nahin?

ISHITA: Mauka hi nahin mila.

KUNAL: Oh.. Mein toh poochna hi bhool gaya tum kal raat mujhse kuch kehna chahthi thi na'

ISHITA: Mein' mein kehna chahthi thi?

KUNAL: Haan

ISHITA: Woh mujhe laga tum mujhse kuch kehna chahthe the wahi poochne aayi thi..

KUNAL: Mein???

ISHITA: Haan. Agar aisi koi baat nahin hai toh phir teek hai..

KUNAL: Mera matlab woh nahin tha.. Actually mere samaj mein nahin aaraha hai ki mein tumhe kaise bataoun?

ISHITA: It's ok kunal tumhe jab batane ka mann kare tab hi batao.

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Heer comes to the connection between two bogies and her face frowns. Prem smiles on seeing her. He comes closer to her and whispers in her ears.

PREM: Agar darr lag raha hai toh haath pakad sakti ho.

HEER: Mujhe.. mujhe darr nahin lag raha hai.

PREM: Acha toh rukh kyun gayi ho chalo

HEER: Chalo..

But she doesn't move

PREM: Heer kum se kum mere samne toh jhoot bolne ki koshish mat kiya karo.

HEER: Jab tumhe pata hai toh intezaar kis baat ka kar rahe ho chalo.

She places her hand in his and they go. They order for noodles and soft drink. They find an empty berth and settle down there.

PREM: Tumhara gussa kum hua?

HEER: Mein ne gussa hi kab kiya?

PREM: Heer tum bhi na..

HEER: Preet ka chehra dekhne layak tha..

PREM: Haan chalo ek tarah se acha hi hua.. ab woh hum dono ke baare mein sochega nahin..

They spend the rest of the time feeding each other and joking.

HEER: Prem chalo ab chalte hain pata nahin dono ne ab tak kuch kaha bhi hoga ya nahin.

PREM: Nahin..

HEER: Kya nahin?

He gets hold of her hand pulls her close.

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KUNAL: Ishita I love you. Mein ne kabhi socha bhi nahin tha ki mein yeh kehne mein itna time loonga.. I Love you Ishita.

He gets up and holds out his hand for her. She puts her hand into his and hugs him replying "I Love you too"

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PREM: Heer "I Love You"

HEER: I Love you too prem..

They hug each other and they are brought back into reality due to halting of the train. They walk back to their bogie. They see preet still at the door.

PREM: Preet tu abhi tak yaheen kada hai?

PREET: Haan

PREM: Arre ja sakta tha na

PREET: Aap hi ne toh kaha tha undono ko akela chod do

PREM: Haan par bohut time hogaya hai na, chalo chalte hain.

They go to their berth and gave a knock on the door causing kunal and ishita to pull out. They quickly sit down. Three of them take their seats and see kunal and ishita's faces who were blushing.

PREM: Lagta hai kaam hogaya.

The rest of the journey passes joking and playing games. They finally reach delhi the next evening. Ishita gives her address and invites them all for dinner to her place.

PREET: I'm so sorry. Mujhe nahin lagta mein aa paounga. Mein toh ghar jaake sone wala hoon. Kal subah hi utpaounga. Phir kabhi aa jaounga. Ab toh aana jaana laga hi rahega. He leaves from there.

ISHITA: Its' ok preet. Tum sab toh aa rahe hona?

PREM: Agar tumhari dost time se ready ho jayegi toh hum jaroor aayenge. Ghar jaake yeh bhi sone wali hain, phir pata nahin utane ke liye kya karna hoga?

HEER: Mein nahin sone wali. Don't worry ishita mein toh aaungi baaki logon ka pata nahin.

PREM: Arre kunal hi taraf kya dekh rahi ho? usse poochne ki jaroorat hai woh toh intezaar kar raha hoga kab raat ho jaye.

KUNAL: Prem..

ISHITA: Ok phir raat ko milte hain bye.

She leaves waving them goodbye. Prem sees kunal still waving out to ishita even after she's out of sight.

PREM: Kunal woh chali gayi hai, hum bhi chale.

Kunal gets embarrassed. Heer laughs and they leave.

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Preet walks out of the station and finds their car parked in a corner. He gets into the car and finds pratham there,

PREET: Pratham bhai aap?

PRATHAM: Haan mein. Office se aaraha toh mom ne call karke bataya ki tum log aane wale ho, socha pick karne aajaoun.

PREET: Great. Yeh log itna time kyun laga rahe hain? Mujhe toh ghar jaana hai jald se jald.

PRATHAM: Ghar pe ek surprise he tum logon ke liye.

PREET: Surprise kaisa surprise? Kahin bauji ka sir eid ka chand se cricket ka pitch toh nahin ban gaaya?

PRATHAM: Preeeet mar khayega..

PREET: Sorry bataye surprise kya hai?

Just then all others get into the car in the back seat.

PREM: Surprise??

PRATHAM: Haan surprise.. Kaisa tha tumhara trip?

PREM: Acha tha bhaiya. Bohut masti kiya aur kuch logon ki toh life set hogayi. Kunal glares at prem

PRATHAM: Life set hogayi?

HEER: Bhaiya prem toh aise hi kehraha hai, aap batiye yahaan sab kaise hain?

PRATHAM: Ab ghar jaa hi rahe hain toh khud hi dekhlena

They reach home. As soon as they enter they were welcomed by Gauri.

HEER: Acha toh yeh hai surprise!!! She quickly runs to gauri and hugs her.

HEER: Bhabhi kaise hain aap?

GAURI: Mein bilkul teek hoon tum kaise ho?

HEER: Mein bhi teek hoon.

PREET: Heer di agar aap mil chuki hain toh hume bhi mauka do apni bhabhi se milne ka

GAURI: Tujhe se toh mein baat hi nahin karoongi

PREET: Kyun??? Mein ne kya kiya?

GAURI: (pulling his ear) Ek baar bhi phone kiya?

PREET: Mein ne kiya tha par bhai ne aap ko nahin diya

PRATHAM: Preet jhoot mat bol tune kab call kiya tha mujhe? Sirf prem kartha tha

PREET: Acha aap roz ghar pe call karte the aur jab mein poochtha that oh baad mein kehke taal dete the

PREM: Preet woh actually'

GAURI: Teek hai teek hai tumhe maaf kardeti hoon

PREET: Mom dad kahaan hain dikhayi nahin de rahe hain?

GAURI: Bahar gaaye hain bas aate hi honge tum log jaake fresh ho jao.

Prem gives a hug to gauri and then all of them leave to their rooms. Heer goes to her room and feels happy that she's back home again. Prem walks in with her bag.

PREM: Kya baat hai bohut kush ho rahi ho?

HEER: Kushi toh hogi hi wapas ghar jo aagaye.

Prem falls on her bed and she sits beside him.

HEER: Prem yeh kya kar rahe ho? Agar koi aagay toh' chalo ab jao.

PREM: Mein ne tumhara bag laya aur tum mujhe daant rahi ho na thank you na..

HEER: Oh (touching his cheek) I'm so sorry. Thank you so much. Ab jao'

PREM: Heeeer

HEER: Kya heer jaooo.

PREM: Nahin

He pulls her towards him. She falls on the top of him.

HEER: Prem chodo

PREM: Nahin pehle mujhe mera kissy dedo.

HEER: Prem tum pagal ho gaye ho. She gives up knowing he's not gonna let her go.

They hear someone shouting "prem ..prem"

PREM: (yells) Bhaiyaa'

PRATHAM: Tu kahaan hai?

PREM: Mein heer ke kamre mein hoon.

Heer was shocked and so was prem after he realized what he just said. She gets up and so did he.

PRATHAM: Mein yaheen aata hoon.

Pratham comes in.

PREM: Bhaiya aap ko kuch kaam tha?

PRATHAM: Nahin bas tum dono ko baatana tha naya contract mila hai, kal se office aa jao.

PREM: Sure bhaiya.

PRATHAM: Teek hai toh mein chalta hoon. He leaves from there.

Prem and heer let away a sigh of relief.

PREM: Acha mein chalta hoon.

HEER: Prem ek minute rukho.

PREM: Kya hua?

HEER: Prem mujhe bohut neend aarahi hai. Please mujhe todhi der baad uta dona.

PREM: Mujhe pata tha.

Heer makes a cute childish face

PREM: Teek hai.


Ok i've written whatever came into my mind. so bear with me for this one...

hoping to see you all soon again

byeee


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Posted: 15 years ago
Awsome update yaaaaaaaaaar Pm me when you next part =)
Keep rocking <3
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice and cute update
i like last 7 lines aloy
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey!!!
awsome!!!
cnt wait 4 da next part.....
pls update soon.......... :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Kavya Di
Awesome update
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Posted: 15 years ago
great

cant wait 2 see wat happen next

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