Heyy Guys! I am sooo sorry for the major delay in posting this part! But I have legible reasons...dont worry! 😆 Okay so last week I went on vacation, and came back late saturday night, and this week I was so out of shape that I didn't feel like updating even though I wanted to, so finally today I had the courage to write it up and post it! Oh and one more thing, I have replied back to some of the comments...but some I haven't, I didn't do that intentionally, I just don't have the time right now, sorry! And so I won't be sending PM's either *kaan pakading* I would've done all that but Im going to go watch Harry Potter 6 after this! That's why I cant reply to Comments or send out PMs...but I'll definitely do that tonight or tomorrow! Promise! So here goes the update! Hope you all like it! 😳
Part 5
"Heer'" Prem was more than delighted to see his beloved standing right there in front of him, he was craving to hold her in his arms and never let go, but he had to control, now was not the right time because he could tell Heer was not at all happy to be back'he just had to give her some time.
"Heer! Tum aagayi?...Aao andar aao!" Prem said happily.
Heer didn't respond, she just walked in with a blunt face while holding on to Payal's hand.
"Mamma, hum yahaan kyun aaye hain?" Payal asked Heer'but to that Prem responded.
"Beta, ab tum apne Papa ke saath rahogi'aao mein apni Payal ko uska kamra dikhaata hoon!" He excitedly picked Payal up in his arms and lead her to her newly decorated room which was adjacent to Prem and Heer's bedroom, while Heer just stood there in the living room observing how happy Payal was in Prem's arms. She couldn't help but smile'
"WOW! Papa! Yeh toh kitna bada kamra hai! I love Papa! Thank you so much! I love you!" Payal exclaimed when she saw her beautiful room painted in pink, decorated with stuffed animals, Barbie dolls, posters of Cinderella, Snow White, Winnie The Pooh and what not! She quickly hugged Prem and gave a kiss on his cheek, and ran to her dolls to play with them.
That little gesture of hers made Prem's day! It brought tears of joy to his eyes'this had to be the best day of his life, when he finally had his little daughter and Heer back in his life! Speaking of Heer, he went to go check out on her'she was still in living room meeting with Bauji, Maa, Preet, Harman, Kul Di, and Maya, everyone was extremely happy to have her back, so was Prem.
"Di! Aap jaake araam kijiye aap bhaut thak gayi hongi haina?" Meher said from behind.
"Haan Heer chalo, mein tumhe apne kamre main le jaata hoon'" Prem said and quickly escorted Heer to their room.
As they came inside, Heer let go of Prem's hand.
"Tum mujhe choone ki bhi koshish mat karna Prem, tum shayad bhool rahe ho ke maine abhi tak tumhe maaf nahin kiya hai'aur yeh bhi dhyaan rakh lo ki main sirf aur sirf Meher aur Preet keh rishte ke liye yahaan aayi hoon varna main nahin aati'do you get that?" Heer stated.
"Mujhe pata hai Heer'lekin tum mujhe ek mauka do de sakhti ho'bas ek baar mujhe apne aap ko saabit karne ka mauka do Heer, and I promise that I'll stay with you forever'" Prem said.
"Payal ko bhook lagi hogi, mein usse kuch khilaake aati hoon'" Heer left while changing the subject. Prem let out a big sigh...convincing Heer wasn't easy at it seemed, it was more like rocket science to Prem. At this moment only one person could help him'his life savor, his Lakshman, his younger brother'PREET!
Preet and Meher's room.
"Meher! Tumne Heer Bhabhi ko yeh bola ki main tumhe DIVORCE dena chaahta hoon?!?!!" Preet yelled in shock.
"I'm sorry Preet'lekin Heer didi ko manaane ka aur koi raasta hi nahin tha'" Meher explained. "Please mujhe maaf kardo'maine yeh sirf Heer di ke liye kiya'kya abhi tum mujhe nahin maaf karoge?" Meher asked while holding her ears and made a cute face.
Preet couldn't take it anymore'he had to forgive Meher, especially after her making that cute face!
"Acha chalo theek hai'as long as it helps Heer bhabhi and Prem bhaiya to get back together!"
"Aww! Thanks Preet, I knew you'd understand! I love you!" and she embraced Preet into a hug.
"Arre wah itne dino baad meri biwi mujhko ek acha sa hug deri hai'not bad!"
"Preet tum bhi naa!"
"Ahem ahem! Kya mein andar aa sakta hoon?" Prem asked as he knocked on their door.
"Preet! Prem Jiju, chodo mujhe!"
"Uff yeh Prem bhaiya bhi naa! Unko yahi waqt mila tha humein disturb karne ka?!" Preet smacked his head.
"Aaiye Prem Jiju'" Meher said.
"Woh'sorry maine tum dono ko disturb kiya'" Prem said hesitantly while entering the room.
"Arre'its alright PB! Koi baat nahin'aap bataao kya hua?"
"Preet, mujhe jald se jald Heer ko manaana hai'toh abh tu bata hamein kya karna hai aage'."
"PB aap fikar mat karo'I have it all planned out! So listen up!...Toh ab aapko Bhabhi ke saath aise behave karna hoga jaisi ki aap unko jaante naa ho!"
"WHAT?! Aisa kaise ho sakta Preet'tu paagal hogaya kya?!"
"Haan Preet'Jiju aisa kaise kar sakte hain?" Meher intruded.
"PB! Just listen to me, maine apni baat bhi nahin finish ki'so anyways, you have spend more time with Payal than her, if you do that, she'll slowly realize that you're not spending time with her at all'then she'll come to you herself and confront you about ignoring her! Isn't that a great idea?" Preet finished.
"Yeah'you're right! Dude! You are brilliant! I love you man!" Prem exclaimed and gave his little brother a big hug.
"Anything for you PB!"
"Chalo abh tum dono so jao'main jaata hoon, okay! Bye! Good night!" and he left the room.
Prem went into the room and noticed Heer looking out the window at the full moon, she looked gorgeous in the moonlight! Prem kept on staring at her for the next five minutes non-stop, until he realized what he was doing.
"Woh'umm'Heer'.maine socha ki main Payal ke saath so jaoonga uske kamre main, aur tum yahaan aaram se bed pe so sakti ho'so'good night'"
"Ek minute Prem!...tumhe doosre kamre main sone ki zarurat nahin hai'varna sab log sochenge ki humaare beech mein abhi tak dooriyaan hain'toh tum yahaan bed pe so sakte ho, main sofa pe so jaaungi'Good Night."
Heer quietly took a blanket and a pillow and laid down on the sofa, without letting Prem say anything. Prem was pretty amazed'the plan was working!
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Edited by Garima93 - 16 years ago