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Posted: 16 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.


Thank you Sweta!! 😃

Originally posted by: shabo24

Meet are so sneaky. *giggles* Teehee...yes they are! 😆

Excellent part Gari, I'm leaving now, hence the short comment, but I loved it, so its going to be like them falling in love all over again! *claps* Can't wait! Thanks Shabzie! Aww its okay, Im glad u commented! *hugs*

--shabz



Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Garima, first of all, I don't think you need to call me Di. *grin* I doubt I'm that much older than you, if I am at all. LOL! Well, I thought if Shabo calls you Di, then I should too cuz me and shabz are nearly the same age...😆 So can I still call you di? hehe. 😳

I love the relationship you have portrayed between Preet and Prem, so much like the PremPreet we used to see on the show. It's so cute, and realistic. I know me too, I missed how in the serial they had the brotherly love, so I decided to add it in here! 😳 But thankfully they're putting it back in the serial now!

And Heer and Meher, how cute of a relationship do they have? The younger sister emotionally blackmailing the elder, happens all the time! I'm usually on Heer's end of it though. Heh. But I love how Meher made up that story, she'd better tell Preet all the details, nahin toh they'll get caught! Oh trust me! Younger sisters are always the clever ones and tend to blackmail you ALL the time! I have experience too! 😆 Dont worry, she'll definitely tell Preet, and he wouldn't mind cuz its part of their plan! 😉

And Preet's plan seems pretty smart actually. Like what they showed on the show no? Yupp, just like the show..well similar to it! hehe 😆

Cannot wait for more! I'll definitely update soon! Thanks for the wonderful comment Radz di! Luv ya! 😳

Love,
Radz



Originally posted by: 9rpatel

awesome part
continue soon
thanks for the PM
left us with suspence anyway please don't mak us wait continue soon
PM ME


Thank you so much!!! and no problem for the PM! I'll update soon! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: eternal.beauty

hey garima Hey Aqsa! 😃

very nyc part both meher-preet r such a sweethearts can do anythng to mend their siblings relationship, Yes, thats very true, they can do just about anything to convince their older siblings! 😆
prem is very sad n helpless nut i guess he deserved tht*adamant* but ofcourse fr his i fault heer can't punish him through out the lyf n to separate him frm his daughter. Yeah, I agree with you.
i m really glad tht again preet came out wth a solution n atlast heer is back at home but really wanna see her attitude wth him n their relationship will undergo whch phase n wht bout both in same room...............Preet can do anything to bring back his Bhaiya and Bhabhi together! Just wait and watch what happens! 😉 Thanks for the comment Aqsa, it was really sweet of you! 😳
aqsa



Originally posted by: resham12345

Loved it
Continue soon Please
Thanks for the pm
Resham


Thank you! and No problem for the PM Resham! 😃

Originally posted by: happybrar

awesomeeeeeeeeeeee

can't wait for next part
update soon


Thank you so much! Will update soon! 😃

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

Hey
wow that was awesum
eaglelry waiting for next update


Thank you so much Poonam! Will udpate soon! 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: angel82

beautiful update....the plan was superb...short and easy one - emotional blackmail...lol.....now cant wait to see what happens when prem and heer have to live in the same house, same room...

plz update soon
luv
Angie


Thanks Angie! LOL! Emotional Blackmail works everywhere!😉😆 Yupps there are lots of surprises coming to you guys! Wait and Watch! 😃


Can't wait to see what you thought Meeru! 😃

Originally posted by: **Rekha**

Heyyy
it was awersome as usuallll ⭐️
super duber part :)))))
can't wait 4 da next partttt
thx 4 da pm:))))


Thanks Rekha! It means alot to me! Will update soon! 😳


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Heyy Guys! I am sooo sorry for the major delay in posting this part! But I have legible reasons...dont worry! 😆 Okay so last week I went on vacation, and came back late saturday night, and this week I was so out of shape that I didn't feel like updating even though I wanted to, so finally today I had the courage to write it up and post it! Oh and one more thing, I have replied back to some of the comments...but some I haven't, I didn't do that intentionally, I just don't have the time right now, sorry! And so I won't be sending PM's either *kaan pakading* I would've done all that but Im going to go watch Harry Potter 6 after this! That's why I cant reply to Comments or send out PMs...but I'll definitely do that tonight or tomorrow! Promise! So here goes the update! Hope you all like it! 😳

Part 5

"Heer'" Prem was more than delighted to see his beloved standing right there in front of him, he was craving to hold her in his arms and never let go, but he had to control, now was not the right time because he could tell Heer was not at all happy to be back'he just had to give her some time.

"Heer! Tum aagayi?...Aao andar aao!" Prem said happily.

Heer didn't respond, she just walked in with a blunt face while holding on to Payal's hand.

"Mamma, hum yahaan kyun aaye hain?" Payal asked Heer'but to that Prem responded.

"Beta, ab tum apne Papa ke saath rahogi'aao mein apni Payal ko uska kamra dikhaata hoon!" He excitedly picked Payal up in his arms and lead her to her newly decorated room which was adjacent to Prem and Heer's bedroom, while Heer just stood there in the living room observing how happy Payal was in Prem's arms. She couldn't help but smile'

"WOW! Papa! Yeh toh kitna bada kamra hai! I love Papa! Thank you so much! I love you!" Payal exclaimed when she saw her beautiful room painted in pink, decorated with stuffed animals, Barbie dolls, posters of Cinderella, Snow White, Winnie The Pooh and what not! She quickly hugged Prem and gave a kiss on his cheek, and ran to her dolls to play with them.

That little gesture of hers made Prem's day! It brought tears of joy to his eyes'this had to be the best day of his life, when he finally had his little daughter and Heer back in his life! Speaking of Heer, he went to go check out on her'she was still in living room meeting with Bauji, Maa, Preet, Harman, Kul Di, and Maya, everyone was extremely happy to have her back, so was Prem.

"Di! Aap jaake araam kijiye aap bhaut thak gayi hongi haina?" Meher said from behind.

"Haan Heer chalo, mein tumhe apne kamre main le jaata hoon'" Prem said and quickly escorted Heer to their room.

As they came inside, Heer let go of Prem's hand.

"Tum mujhe choone ki bhi koshish mat karna Prem, tum shayad bhool rahe ho ke maine abhi tak tumhe maaf nahin kiya hai'aur yeh bhi dhyaan rakh lo ki main sirf aur sirf Meher aur Preet keh rishte ke liye yahaan aayi hoon varna main nahin aati'do you get that?" Heer stated.

"Mujhe pata hai Heer'lekin tum mujhe ek mauka do de sakhti ho'bas ek baar mujhe apne aap ko saabit karne ka mauka do Heer, and I promise that I'll stay with you forever'" Prem said.

"Payal ko bhook lagi hogi, mein usse kuch khilaake aati hoon'" Heer left while changing the subject. Prem let out a big sigh...convincing Heer wasn't easy at it seemed, it was more like rocket science to Prem. At this moment only one person could help him'his life savor, his Lakshman, his younger brother'PREET!

Preet and Meher's room.

"Meher! Tumne Heer Bhabhi ko yeh bola ki main tumhe DIVORCE dena chaahta hoon?!?!!" Preet yelled in shock.

"I'm sorry Preet'lekin Heer didi ko manaane ka aur koi raasta hi nahin tha'" Meher explained. "Please mujhe maaf kardo'maine yeh sirf Heer di ke liye kiya'kya abhi tum mujhe nahin maaf karoge?" Meher asked while holding her ears and made a cute face.

Preet couldn't take it anymore'he had to forgive Meher, especially after her making that cute face!

"Acha chalo theek hai'as long as it helps Heer bhabhi and Prem bhaiya to get back together!"

"Aww! Thanks Preet, I knew you'd understand! I love you!" and she embraced Preet into a hug.

"Arre wah itne dino baad meri biwi mujhko ek acha sa hug deri hai'not bad!"

"Preet tum bhi naa!"

"Ahem ahem! Kya mein andar aa sakta hoon?" Prem asked as he knocked on their door.

"Preet! Prem Jiju, chodo mujhe!"

"Uff yeh Prem bhaiya bhi naa! Unko yahi waqt mila tha humein disturb karne ka?!" Preet smacked his head.

"Aaiye Prem Jiju'" Meher said.

"Woh'sorry maine tum dono ko disturb kiya'" Prem said hesitantly while entering the room.

"Arre'its alright PB! Koi baat nahin'aap bataao kya hua?"

"Preet, mujhe jald se jald Heer ko manaana hai'toh abh tu bata hamein kya karna hai aage'."

"PB aap fikar mat karo'I have it all planned out! So listen up!...Toh ab aapko Bhabhi ke saath aise behave karna hoga jaisi ki aap unko jaante naa ho!"

"WHAT?! Aisa kaise ho sakta Preet'tu paagal hogaya kya?!"

"Haan Preet'Jiju aisa kaise kar sakte hain?" Meher intruded.

"PB! Just listen to me, maine apni baat bhi nahin finish ki'so anyways, you have spend more time with Payal than her, if you do that, she'll slowly realize that you're not spending time with her at all'then she'll come to you herself and confront you about ignoring her! Isn't that a great idea?" Preet finished.

"Yeah'you're right! Dude! You are brilliant! I love you man!" Prem exclaimed and gave his little brother a big hug.

"Anything for you PB!"

"Chalo abh tum dono so jao'main jaata hoon, okay! Bye! Good night!" and he left the room.

Prem went into the room and noticed Heer looking out the window at the full moon, she looked gorgeous in the moonlight! Prem kept on staring at her for the next five minutes non-stop, until he realized what he was doing.

"Woh'umm'Heer'.maine socha ki main Payal ke saath so jaoonga uske kamre main, aur tum yahaan aaram se bed pe so sakti ho'so'good night'"

"Ek minute Prem!...tumhe doosre kamre main sone ki zarurat nahin hai'varna sab log sochenge ki humaare beech mein abhi tak dooriyaan hain'toh tum yahaan bed pe so sakte ho, main sofa pe so jaaungi'Good Night."

Heer quietly took a blanket and a pillow and laid down on the sofa, without letting Prem say anything. Prem was pretty amazed'the plan was working!


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Luv,

Garima😳



Edited by Garima93 - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
#85
YAY! You updated! 😃

Best part, hands down, Meet scene, with Preet disgusted that he has to pretend he want's a divorce from Meher! Aww poor baby! Ohh and Heer's kinda opening up to him! Loved it Gari - DUDE! Finish this before school starts k?

--shabz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I have to edit for the last two parts here! 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey awesome update
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lovely part....i'm looking forward to how preet's plan is going to work
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Pepsi!!!
im back!!!!!!!!!!😆
awsome update as usual..😉!!!
awww Prem needs to control his actions..only for a while..i hope.😃, and if Heer cant hug Prem, well id be more than happy to Hug Prem...*blushing*😆..u know that rite Garima??😆
Aww see even heer cant help but smile at the interaction between Prem and Payal..awww..i dnt blame her though na?
Payal is a sweetheart! kisi ki bhi nazar na lage!!
Gayatri was also happy to have Heer back?? ooOooO shocker😲!!! i wonder will heer be able to mend Gayarti and Prem's relationship?? or will Gayatri have to suffer more cold shoulders from Prem first??
hmmmm..Prem kafi ishmart hai na? Heer ko jaldi se kamre mein lekar chale gaye...😉...awww i hope they sort out their problems soon!!!
convincing Heer is rocket science to Prem?? oh and his saviour can only help him in this rocket science...PREET!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i shouldnt have..but i did..i giggled at Preet's first line.. i thought it was kinda cute..in the sense that i could see Sushant as Preet, with a shocked expression..Preet is awsome!! ofcourse he cant be mad at Meher for too long..that scene was cute!
the MEET scene reminded me of the Premeer Scenes in the show in which Preet disturbs Prem n Heer..😆.
Haila!!! Preet ko tho main A+ doongi! kya idea hai?? thats soooooo Preet! and Prem's Reaction was super!!
ooOOooOOoo... Preet's plan working already. Prem dont be suprised Preet's plan will not fail..naa Garima?? *hopeful face*
i cant wait to see more effects of the plan happening...gosh cant wait!!
hopefully Prem might =..just maybe..he might wink???* extremely hopeful face*..hey i can wish..😆😉
otherwise from the upate i gotta say that i probably wont be able to read ur updates anymore for 5 weeks.. im going to Fiji Islands..for the rest of the holidays..so definately gonna miss the FF.. and The forum!!😭😭
u take care , and keep smiling ..have a wonderful remaining summer holiday!!
~nikki😳😃😆(idk y im gigling..lol)
P.s
*GINORMUS HUG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*🤗
Edited by ~nikki1992~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey Garima!!
i just caught up with ur ff.....
i must say it is sooooo amazing i just loved reading all 5 parts
dey were written so beautiful......so round of applause for dat.......
i cant tell u how much i loved it.......u r a awesome writer.....so big 3 claps for u 👏 👏 👏
plz update next part soon......n plz add me to ur PM list.......


with lots of love
Deeksha

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