FF:You and Me are Inseperable [Part 6 Pg. 17] 8/3 - Page 7

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

mine! 😛

*edited*

I loved this Gari! 😃 This was the Prem and Heer I wanna see after the leap...and I want it to be like this...I know ultimately you'll keep it happy *or else* but then the way she's so hard with him makes me happy! 😳😃 Thanks Meeru! Yeah, I wanted Premeer to be like this too...lol dont worry Meeru, aapka hukum sar aankhon pe! 😆 This FF will not go on the bad side! I promise! Yeah, Heer has to be kinda hard with him for right now. 😉

I can't wait for Preet's plan! 😃😳I hope you'll like it! 😳

Love you, Luv you too Meeru!!! Thanks for commenting! 🤗

Meera😳

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

Hey Garima
wow that was super fantastic
hmm wonder what the plan is

Originally posted by: shabo24

YAY! You updated! *claps*LOL! Yes I did! 😆

There is so much the show can do with the leap ahead of them; but what you are doing is awesome! So glad Heer is shown as an independent character (kinda cold though no? It's AWESOME) but why do I have hte feeling she if going to melt soon? Aww! Thanks Shabo! Sho Shweet! *pinches shabo's cheek*😆 Yeah, Heer's in the mode of her toughness...but yeah you got that right, she will melt soon...but not THAT soon!😉😆

And Preet! As always the only sane person in the house. Wonder how he is going to play matchmaker. :) True that, he is the only sane person...haha, you'll see his wonderful plans in the future updates! Thank you so much for commenting Shabz! 😳

---shabz

Originally posted by: zaibun

hey just read ur ff was great preet and his plans cant w8 do keep on updating

Originally posted by: **Rekha**

HII , THX 4 DA PM
ONCE AGGAIN DA FF WAS JUT AWERSOME AND SUPERBBBB 👏⭐️
K33P ON UPDATING PLZZZZ CAN'T WAIT 4 DA NEXT PARTT

Originally posted by: d@niy@

wow.... that really superb...... 😃 plz aupdate soon....

Originally posted by: resham12345

hurry and update please
Love your story
Resham

Originally posted by: munam_13

Aww my Premu looks so sad and broken without Heer.... she changed herself so much unbelievable... and that G3 deserves that... I am so happy he ignored that lady...lovely part.... 😊

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Garima! Here I thought it was just a oneshot, then today I see there's a third part?? Hey Radz Di! LOL! yeah, everyone had encouraged me to make it an FF, so here I am with the third part..but if you want I can PM you whenever I update! 😃

Oh, and what a brilliant story this is. I love Heer's stubborness, I don't blame her a bit for not wanting to go back with Prem. He needs to work for her forgiveness, because his lack of faith in her, his blind trust in his mother lost him his love, and he needs to show her that he knows the truth. Mere words will not work here.
Thanks Radz Di! Yeah Heer is definitely going to hold on to her stubborness, but Prem on the other hand is going work REAL hard to win her trust back, yeah his mother won't have much of a role anymore, she doesnt deserve it...Don't worry throughout the updates, he will definitely find ways to get Heer back, do keep reading to find out! 😉

Oh, and just what is Preet's plan? And will Meher be making an appearance anytime soon? You'll find out about Preet's plan in the next update...and yes you got that right, Meher will be making an entry too, next update! 😃

And I love the name Payal. (Any chance referring to the payal that connected PremHeer?) Aww! Yeah, I like that name too! that's one reason why I chose it, and also because of Premeers payal, and because I wanted her name to start with a "P" just like Prem's! 😆 Thank you so much for the wonderful comment Radz Di! It means alot to me! 😳😳

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: 9rpatel

awesome continue soon andplease PM me whn u update!!!!

Originally posted by: amu142

mera hero,......preetu......has a plan 2 help his PB....gr8...i can understand heer's pain....awww....premu kitna roya .......gripping n wonderful pace....do continue soon......amazing dialogues tooo.......gr8 job

Originally posted by: happybrar

awesomeeeeeeeeeeee

Originally posted by: fungrl

Preet and Plan😉😉😉................I bet its awesome................I wonder how Gundi mom'll react when she realizes prem has a daughter..............By the way I loved it when Heer refuses to go with Prem.............I wanna see Prem grovel a bit more............but thats just me😆Yes, Preet's plan is definitely aweosme! Her reaction is gonna be priceless! 😆 yeah...dont worry, Heer is pretty sturbborn she wont give up soo soon! 😃


Can you also add me to your PM list I surely will! Thanks for the comment! 😳

Originally posted by: punjabi0926

please add me to your pm list also. I would love to be notified when the next part is written.

Originally posted by: abhikidiwani

great

update soon please😉

Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~

Cookies n Creme!!!

i'll be back....

Hey everyone! I'm really sorry for the delay, it was supposed to be updated yesterday, but I couldn't..but hope you all like this part! 😳

Part 4

"What?" Prem looked up at Preet "You have a plan?"

"Yeah PB! And it's just perfect! Here let me tell you!" Preet quickly told Prem his excellent plan leaving a happy Prem.

"Yaar Preet, tu toh ek dum smart nikla! This is a wonderful plan…but you're sure that Heer will definitely come back, right?" Prem asked.

"Don't worry PB…as long as everything goes smoothly nothing will go wrong, aur main vaada karta hoon ki Heer Bhabhi iss ghar mein vaapus aajayengi do dino mein!" Preet promised.

"Thanks Preet! You're the best brother I ever had! Love you bro!" Prem told Preet and embraced him into a hug.

"Heyy! No probs PB! It's my job to keep you happy…so from tomorrow our mission starts!...Good night PB! Sweet dreams!" Preet winked and left the room leaving an overwhelmed Prem. He hoped everything goes right with this plan, because this was the only way he could get his Heer back!

It was 7 in the morning the next day, while Heer and Payal were sleeping peacefully in their hotel suite. Suddenly someone knocked on their door.

"Kaun ho sakta hai itni subha subha?" Heer thought..."Oh it's probably room service."

Heer groggly got up from her bed and went to the door to open it…not knowing what surprise was waiting for her behind it.

"MEHER…TU?!?!" She couldn't believe her eyes! Was it really Meher? Her younger sister…or was she hallucinating from the lack of sleep? No…it was true…Meher really had come to meet her!

"DIDI! Oh my God! Its really you! I missed you sooo much Di!!" Meher exclaimed and quickly squeezed Heer in her bear hug.

"I missed you too Meher!" Heer responded, while getting tears in her eyes.

"Di, look at you…aap kitni badal gayi hain!"

"Aur tu bhi toh kitni badal gayi hai…kya weight lose kiya tune?" Heer teased her little sister and both started laughing.

"Di aap bhi naa!"

"Acha chal! Andar aa…kya vahin khari khari baat karegi?" Heer pulled Meher inside seating her down on the sofa.

"Di…whose that girl sleeping on your bed?"

"Oh, that's Payal, my five year old daughter…"Heer said happily.

"Matlab ki…"

"Haan woh meri aur Prem ki beti hai…" Heer shuddered when she said his name.

"Didi aap itne saal kahaan thi? Kaisi thi? Aur kabhi vaapus kyun nahin aayi? Kya aapko apni choti behen ki chinta nahin hoti thi? Didn't you ever miss me Di?" Meher asked, as she got a little emotional.

"Nahin aisa nahin hai Meher…main toh aana chaahati thi tere paas, lekin haalat hi aise the jiske vaje se main nahin aa paye…kya tu apni badi behen ko maaf karegi Meher?" Heer asked while holding both her ears.

"Arre didi…aap mujhe sharminda mat karo, aapko maafi mangne ki koi zarurat nahin hai…main aapka haal samaj sakti hoon, lekin aapko abh meri bhi baat maanni paregi…" requested Meher.

"Kaisi baat?"

"Didi…Please come back! Please Di! Without you the house so empty, none of us like it there! Please Didi…?"

"No Meher…I can't do that, its impossible, I'm definitely not going back to that house, no…never!"

"Alright then, if its that way, then I won't go back either, I'll stay with you, I don't need Preet anyway, he's a good for nothing jerk!" It hurt Meher to say these things about her own husband, but this was part of the plan.

"Meher! How could you say this about your husband?! No Meher, you have to go back!"

"I already told you, I won't go back until you come back WITH me" Meher emphasized.

"Lekin Meher…"Heer interrupted.

"Lekin-vekin kuch nahin Di…aapko mere kasam! You have to come back! Varna, varna main…main Preet se divorce le loongi!" Meher exclaimed, cursing herself for saying such nonsense!

"Meher! Have you lost your mind…just because I don't want to go back doesn't mean you have to get a divorce! And by the way…where did this divorce thing even come in between?!" Heer asked suspiciously.

Now Meher had to think of a good excuse before Heer found out about the truth.

"Woh Di…well…umm….Preet and I had a fuss too after you had left the house five years aga, and Preet decided he needed some time to think about our relationship, and went to America for 5 years too…and now that he's come back, he gave me a choice to break off our relationship because if Prem bhaiya has to live his life like this, the so will he…then I heard that you were in town, and I came straight to you, only you can fix this Di…if you come back mine and Preet's relationship will be saved…aap apni choti behen ke liye itna bhi nahin kar sakti hain Di?" Meher finished off with "fake" tears in her eyes…emotionally blackmailing her sister was a technique that Meher was good at since they were little kids, and now that technique was coming in handy. Till now everything was going according to the plan…now she just needed to wait for Heer to say yes.

"Meher…this is all because of me! I know it…and of course I can do anything for my little sister! You're the only family I have after Ma and Papa ji!....So yes, I'll come with you, but only to patch up your relationship with Preet, and that's all, nothing else!" Heer agreed.

"Aww! I knew it Di! I knew you would come back for me! I love you!"

"I love you too Meher!" and they both embraced each other.

"Ab chalo Di…aap aur Payal tayaar ho jao aur apna samaan rakh lo theek hai?"

"Theek hai…just give me half an hour!" Heer said and went to go wake up Payal.

Heer was definitely feeling very nervous as she, Meher, and Payal, drove back to the Juneja Mansion, how was she going to face everyone? Even worse…how was she going to live with Prem in the same room? As the house neared by, her pulse rate became faster. By the time they got there, she thought she was going to have a heart attack, but obviously she was exaggerating.

"Chaliye Didi…aapka ghar agaya hai…"Meher said softly as they were about to climb out of the car.

Meher quickly texted Preet to tell him that Heer Di was here, so he could send Prem Jiju down to open the door…that was the next part of their plan.

"Uhh Didi…woh aap chaliye main abhi thodi der main aati hoon, mera koi phone aa raha hai, theek hai?"

"Theek hai Meher…lekin tu jaldi aana…"Heer said hesitantly, not willing to go into the house alone. She took her steps forward slowly, holding Payal's hand, she wringed the door bell and waited a few seconds…and to her surprise, the person to open the door was none other than her Prem…

So how was it? Did you guys like that plan?? Please do leave your comments! 😳

~Garima