AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GARI!!!!!!!! Main todhi dino ke liye online nahin aayi aur itna sab kuch hogaya????😲.lol
umm..i cookies n cremed the first time..but i never un-cookies n cremed..so im makin up for that..haha😆
So a new idea..a new FF..AMAZing. !!
This leap thin is goning really dont you think..both on the show and in your FF.
So ..Part one:
That was soo sad, Prem couldnt beleive that his own mother could have done this to seperate Prem and Heer. It serves Gayatri right for doing something like that..she has lost all her relationships..Good job Garima..
Prem went to the Shiv Mandir too?? how sweet is that?. but still after all that harshness, and cold attitude he gave Heer, he had asked for it. But atleast he is repenting...and i hope that all goes well soon, but i have a feeling that this isnt gonna happen sooo soon.. rite?😉
Preet is BACK!!! yay.. Yahoo!!! Ayi Hai Preet aate hi Meher ke baare mein poochne laga..hai...soo sweet!😳
Prem Bumping...Its HEER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now thats a dhamake daar Meet! 😃👏. OoOoO..Heer doesnt have the same sparkle in her eyes...im sure its there but its hidden in the grief she had gotten.
Awwww Prem's speech was soo cute.. the love, the wait the happiness all in those thre magical words..I Love You..hai mein marjava!
OoOoOoOo..Heer doesnt sound so happy. im just as heart broken as Prem rite about now..But i loved it! Heer's Disapointment and Prem's Happiness. te stern-ness Heer showed is exactly what i hopeing in the show.. it was great in your story!
Payal!! shoo shweet! *pinches her little cheeks*.Payal is a perfect name for Premeer's daughter. like the Payal is their symbol(one of their symbols😆😉) their daughter is their symbol too! thats just super!
The father side of Prem was Beautifully written! i love it when you write stories...good job Garima!!👏⭐️
Prem's determine side..I love that already!!!😳
Part 2:
Heer's Story by herself was sad, but she is a strong woman. she got thrugh it and she was successful. and because she knew no matter how mad she was she still loved Prem..her Prem. that was beautiful! ahh she didnt want to contribute to the Juneja deal..i wonder why???😆 jk i now exactly why..lol but i guess her kismet (who is written by Garima😆) wanted something else for her..lol.
and now she is in India..and i cant wait for everything you have planned.
Heer is a wonderful mother. her and Payal's relationship is so cute. the interaction between them is so sweet!
OoOoOoO she adresses herself as Heer Maan, but see no Mrs. or Ms. in front.. i wonder what that means??
Aww Prem is all 🥺..after he got the reason Heer was in his office..poor Prem.
Prem's heart flutters seeing Heer. my heart flutters seeing Prem!!☺️i loved the sudden happines he got seeing Heer their in front of him! so sweet..*sigh*
and again i love the writing style you have...magnificent!
im sure Prem will do sonething or the other to get Heer back along with payal. Garima this is super i cant wait to see where this takes them.
Part 3:
OoOoO( i have used alot of these😆) Prem and Heer's samajne aur samjhane dialouge was super! i loved that. i could see it protrayed by Harshad and Additi with the chemistry they have together!😳
Love the whol stern Heer, going all business-talk with Prem. If i was disscusing a business deal with Prem i dont think i would get very far.. becaue would have either fainted or turned into silly putty..lol😆
AHHHHHH INTENSITY!!! between Prem and Heer is the BEST! love the closeness-ness the love, the grief, the hurt, the repentness(from Prem ofcourse) it was all captivating just reading it!
Okay Gayatri desverves what happend here. she soo was asking for it! i mean who in their sane right mind would even think about seperatin Prem and Heer?? but then again Gayatri isnt sane nor right in her mind.
What did she expect?? her relationship with prem would have been the same when Prem and Heer seperated..and Prem found out it was all her planning? Go Prem you show her the cold face...she so desverves it!!
Prem and Preet!!! love the brother-brother relationship!
I love how Preet still calls Heer his bhabhi...awww and yup Prem cant hide anyhing from Preet. oh Preet saw everything at the airport?? this is awsome! and Preet comforting Prem was such a heart touching part ..again i love the brother -brother relationship!
awww Prem she doesnt hate you..she is just very angry and hurt..give her some time to sort out evrything..bechara dil ka maara😭😭...
Plan??!!! Preet and Plan??!! Then its gotta be Great..no more than great! Preet's plans are the Best! he is very creative no Gari? oh and with the plan he has a smirk.. wonderful..i cant wait till he excutes the plan!
Part 4:
Ofcourse we dont get to read the plan...😆😲...what a suprise..lol
Okay Garima...first Prem winking in Janmon ki saathi and now Preet ...hai mein marjava!! is Prem by any chance gonna wink...*hopeful smile* i'll wait thats for sure...Prem winking then Preet winking...*faints*
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Heer-Meher part !!! i love the relationship they have. even after soo many years meher and Heer have the relationship they have alwasy had since long before.
Oaky this is good really good! Preet's plan.. hats off to Preet! and hats off to you for creating the plan in Preets head.😆 This reminded me of the time in the show when Prem kicked Heer out of the house and Preet and Meher were getting them back together.. i love this!
hai rabba!! Divorce??!! This plan is soo gonna be successful.. i thought that was kinda funny since we knew it was nothing like that..😆 i loved the quick explantion Meher cooked up..before Heer could make any conculsions..😆
Emotional blackmail...it works every time..and it worked this time too! i have to say this is stupendous!
I loved the Plan!! Prem opening up the door.. i could imagine Harshad opening the door with a hopefull face...*sigh*
it was amazing i love the FF so far.. its brilliant!
so how have you been? its been like ages since we have talked! hws the family? and New jersey?
ahhh its finnaly summer hoilday's and im lovin every second of it! wat about you?
and the show.. Prem..☺️..thats all i have to say..
me n my mom were watchin the show then i saw Prem(Harshad) and i was OMG!!!! my mom was like he looks very good..i was just speechless... i couldnt comprehend anyhing..
i was talking to my aunt on the phone after the show and i was slurring my words.😆..i mean could you blame me?? i was in a trance.like all the girls on the forum..😆
hmm..this kinda turned out pretty long...im sure you wont mind right? hehehe...
well i acnt wait till you update the next part because it's killing me!!!😉 Garima tu jaan le gi meri..*sigh* actually jan tho Harshad/Prem ne le li..lekin jitni bhi jaan baki who tu le li gi..jaldi jao aur update karo...lol
till then you keep smiling, and take care..
~nikki😳 *BIG BEAR HUG*
P.s its all colorful!!! 🤣
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