Mera Ghar... Part 10 Pg 15 - 09/25/09

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Miketa H Patel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: purplestar22
Poor Prem and heer got married to somebody else????????? Please update soon

Maybe... yes Heer got married to someone else but her heart belongs to Prem and always him...

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Miketa H Patel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: sanyoprithviraj
love ur track.i am disgusted at gayatri.she knows how much sacrifice she did for the house and that idiot is still in saga sautela mind

ur ff shud be interesting.i hope heer at least in ur fic does not forgive prem and the junejas easily.
they made her suffer let them suffer 2.

I'm glad that you like my track I've put up... even I am disgusted at Gayatri (also I have something evil planned for her) yep... only Gayarti knows how much Heer sacrificed for their family and house.... It's up to you guys to make it interesting but I promise you that I will never disappoint you guys... I'm not sure if Heer will be able to forgive Prem or Juneja family easily.... I'm not sure who is going to suffer more....

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Miketa H Patel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: premeer928
hey
nice intro and first part. really like the track so far....continue soon. 😊

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Miketa H Patel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: luv4bb
nice update.wait 4 the next part.update soon.
lots of luv

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Miketa H Patel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: premlover411
Interesting twist you've brought to the story!!!
Can't wait to read more!

Update soon please!!!!

Well... thanks! Maybe because I watch too many Balaji Telfilms lately... thanks

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Miketa H Patel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever
oooo interesting twist and iqbal khan as vishal!😍 im dreaming already...😍 can't wait for the next part cont soon plz!!!!!!!👏

... glad that you like the twist and yes Iqbal is Vishal.... and no you aren't dreaming... thanks

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Miketa H Patel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: zaibun
hey if dis would have happened i would have understud it better

Me too... thanks

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Miketa H Patel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Thanks million for liking the twist... Enjoy this part...!

Part 2

Gayarti cries silently in her room… because none of her kids are happy… especially Prem, Kulraj and Preet.

~ Pancheshwar City ~

Entire Dasgupta family is gathered around Maa Durga's idol… Panchi begins the maata rani's aarti which is sung in Bengali language... Vishal blows on the shank conch shell… afterwards Panchi sings a mini aarti…

Panchi: Om Jai Laxmi Mata, Maiya JaiLaxmi Mata,

Tumko nis din sevat, Hari, Vishnu Data

Om Jai Laxmi Mata

Uma Rama Brahmaani, Tum ho Jag Mata,

Maiya, Tum ho Jag Mata,

Surya ChanraMa dhyaavat, Naarad Rishi gaata.

Om Jai Laxmi Mata.

Durga Roop Niranjani, Sukh Sampati Data,

Maiya Sukh Sampati Data

Jo koyee tumko dhyaataa, Ridhee Sidhee dhan paataa

Om Jai Laxmi Mata.

Jis ghar mein tu rehtee, sab sukh guna aataa,

Maiya sab sukh guna aataa,

Taap paap mit jaataa, Man naheen ghabraataa.

Om Jai Laxmi Mata

Dhoop Deep phal meva, Ma sweekaar karo,

Maiya Ma sweekaar karo,

Gyaan prakaash karo Ma, Moha agyaan haro.

Om Jai Laxmi Mata.

Maha Laxmiji ki Aarti, nis din jo gaavey

Maiya nis din jo gaavey,

Dukh jaavey, sukh aavey, Ati aananda paavey.

Om Jai Laxmi Mata.

~ Juneja House ~

Veera keeps on complaining to her mother… Gayarti keeps on worrying about Prem who hardly talks to her anymore - it's been almost two years - either Preet talked to her anymore or her elder daughter Kulraj or her son Prem.

Prem walks down the stairs… Gayarti walks toward him with aarti ki thali… Prem takes the blessing but leaves without having breakfast… Lalit comes from behind…

~ Pancheshwar City ~

Entire family gathers around the newly soon to be wedded couple… Proteek silently steals glances at his soon to be wife… Three year old girl comes running down the stairs… Panchi slowly turns around toward the stairs and shouts "Sunaina… be careful".

Vishal lifts up Sunaina in his arms… gives her a tiny kiss on her forehead… afterwards Sunaina tells her mother "Mamma… Krishna is crying" Panchi runs up the stairs toward Krishna who lies in his crib crying…

~ Prem's office ~

Prem hardly pays attention toward any business meetings… Preet can't watch his brother silently crying for his life Heer and decides to move to Simla…

"Bhaiyya, I was thinking why don't we move to Simla for a change?" Preet gathered some encourage talking with his brother… because lately Prem has hard time controlling his anger towards anyone.

"Whatever you think is right" Prem nods his head agreeing with Preet…

Veera by mistake also hears Preet's discussion with Prem… Veera quickly dials her Bhabhi's number and tells Maya every little detail…

Maya hangs up the phone and smiles devilishly… afterwards stares at entire Juneja family portrait with Heer.

"Why are you staring at me like that Prem and Heer?" Prem and Heer's eyes keep on staring at Maya from the picture "yes… I am the person responsible for Veera's separation from Nihaal and also your guys too" Heer's eyes keeps on haunting Maya badly from the picture filled with anger "but I hardly give a dam until Mummyji listen to me like my servant" Maya continues to smile while burning the portrait.

~ Pancheshwar City ~

"Kabhi kabhie soctha hoon Panchi kaun hai… (Panchi running down the stairs after putting her son back to sleep in his crib) meri patni yeh meri pyaar… woh jise ne zindagi ko milleyal (Panchi's eyes are shown) yeh phir woh jo meri zindagi ban gayi (Panchi's lips are shown smiling) woh jo meri ghar mein renthi hai… yeh phir woh jo meri dil mein renthi hai (Panchi shown running down the stairs with her payal making noise)" Vishal lifts up his wallet slowly and he looks at a picture which is someone else…

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Please do leave you're theories behind

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