Mera Ghar... Part 10 Pg 15 - 09/25/09 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: crosby

that was realli gud yu shud continue



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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you so much for the support... I hope Gayarti and Heer are putting up a fake scene so they can bring out the true colors of Maya... anyways here is the next part...

Part 1

Prem stares at the letter…
Heer walking on the street looking heart broken…
Background music: pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata
tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila
Entire night Prem stares at the letter…
Heer walks toward the station and catches a random train…
Background music: is pyaar mein hon kaise kaise imntihaan
ye pyaar likhe kaisi kaisi dastaan
Heer silently watches a newly wedded couple with their new bundle of joy in their arms. She smiles at them.
Background music: ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
Next day,
Prem keeps on staring at Heer's picture… Everyone gather around the dinning table… Preet arrives with Meher… Preet sits down but Meher runs away and Gayarti sends Veera to call Prem for dinner.
Background music: ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
Heer showed looking at the moon from the train going to Kolkata…
Prem also looks at the moon from his room…
Preet consoles Meher, but Meher keeps on staring at the moon from her room window…
Background music: pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata
tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila

Two year later

Meher hardly talks with Veera, Mummyji, Maya or Harman… her relationship with Preet is going smoothly from friends to man and wife. Meher still remembers the day, when Preet confessed his feelings on Valentines Day, but her happiness is incomplete without her sister Heer.
Meher looks at her sister's picture…
Preet captures Meher from behind and whisper "I love you" in her ears.
"I love you too" Meher whispers back.
"Were you crying?" Preet asked his daring wife.
"Nahin toh" Meher replied back
Preet takes Meher by her shoulders and makes her sit down on the bed with him afterward he wipe few escaped tears from her eyes.
"Aren't you going to tell me what's wrong?" Preet asked Meher
"Preet" Meher breaks down in his arms "I'm worried"
Preet interrupts her… "Worried for what"
"My sister" Preet looked into Meher's eyes "where could she be?" than hugged her tightly, "is she alive or dead?" Meher breaks down in Preet's arm "nothing will happen to Heer Bhabhi" while Prem stares at the full moon who separated them two years ago "where are you, Heer?"
< Pancheshwar City >
"Panchi…Panchi…Panchi" shouted an elderly lady.
Panchi's legs are shown running down the stairs "coming" shouted Panchi while her left hand holds a tray full of kumkum/sindoor.
"Mrs. Dasgupta" same elderly lady who shouted for Panchi turns around and faces her friend Mrs. Khanna.
"Panchi is my choti bahu" Mrs. Dasgupta tells Mrs. Khanna (Panchi shown running down the stairs but suddenly slips, but two strong arms catch her from falling but the tray she was carrying slips out of her hands and kumkum/sindoor gooes flying everywhere... also Prem cuts himself by picking up Heer's picture).
"Apnki choti bahu?" Mrs. Khanna asked her friend confusingly,
"Yes… meri choti bahu and my younger son Vishal's wife" Mrs. Khanna's facial expression changed after she heard about Vishal's return from America with his wife Panchi.
Vishal stares at his wife Panchi… (Panchi's face is shown and she is none other than Heer Juneja) Panchi looks a-little uncomfortable being in Vishal's arms.

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Vishal's character is played by Iqbal Khan and his mother's roll is done by Shweta Tiwari.

Please do please your thoughts behind...

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Mickey P



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Posted: 16 years ago
#14

Poor Prem and heer got married to somebody else????????? Please update soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
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love ur track.i am disgusted at gayatri.she knows how much sacrifice she did for the house and that idiot is still in saga sautela mind

ur ff shud be interesting.i hope heer at least in ur fic does not forgive prem and the junejas easily.
they made her suffer let them suffer 2.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
nice intro and first part. really like the track so far....continue soon. 😊
Edited by premeer928 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
nice update.wait 4 the next part.update soon.
lots of luv
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
Interesting twist you've brought to the story!!!
Can't wait to read more!
Update soon please!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oooo interesting twist and iqbal khan as vishal!😍 im dreaming already...😍 can't wait for the next part cont soon plz!!!!!!!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
hey if dis would have happened i would have understud it better

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