Mera Ghar... Part 10 Pg 15 - 09/25/09

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Mera Ghar Ek Sapna is about the current situation in the show where Prem has to choose between his mother (Gayarti) and his wife (Heer). We don't know who Prem is going to choose, but I wanted to share my thrilling fan-fic with you guys' either if you like it or not.

Prologue

Gayarti comes into Prem's room' Prem gets up from his bed looking hurt and disappointed by life. Gayarti touches Prem's shoulders' Prem looks at his mother who wanted to say something, but she didn't have any encourage to speak' whatever she wanted to tell him'
"Mom is everything alright?" Prem asked his mother.
Gayarti looked at her son than spoke whatever she wanted' meantime Heer walked toward her room and heard what Gayarti wanted from Prem. Heer couldn't believe her ears, but silently cried her pain.
"Beta, did I say something wrong?" Gayarti asked innocently, towards her son.
Prem looked hurt, disgusted by his mother's thoughts, and heart broken deep down inside like Heer who stood their like a statue' Prem closed his eyes and remembered Heer telling him about her fear and today her fear came true. Prem disappointedly looked down because he couldn't answer his mother's question regarding who he would choose between her and his wife who he loves the most like his mother.
Heer hasn't moved from her spot' she closed her eyes and cried silently' Prem also stood in his spot and cried silently too' finally Heer wiped her tears and picked up her phone' Prem stared at Heer's picture' Heer whispered silently on the phone' Prem hugged Heer's picture silently while putting himself to bed.
Next day, Prem woke up and looked for Heer everywhere' even asked Meher if she saw Heer' even Meher herself was looking for her sister.
Prem spots his younger brother, Preet "Preet" Preet stops and looks at his brother.
Preet: Bhaiyya is there a problem?
Prem: Did you see your Bhabhi Heer anywhere?
Preet: I haven't seen her from last night.
Preet leaves Prem' Prem spots his father, but his father asked him if he saw Heer. Prem disappointedly nods his head. Prem's father asked his mother' if she saw Heer and Gayarti says, "I saw her in the morning before she left this house forever and told me to give this letter to Prem". Prem takes the letter from his mother and starts reading it'
"Prem beta, what does the letter say?" his father asked him, but Prem leaves without saying anything.

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If you guys... loved this mini thriller I wrote above than I will continue with the next part soon as possible. Also I promise it won't be worst than Ekta Ma'am and her theories of ruining a good show!

Love
Mickey P



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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh!!!!! Wow!!!!👏👏👏
I was hoping someone would write a ff about the current track!
Thanks so much!!!!
Please continue!!!!!! It sounds great so far!!!!!😉👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice storyline cont soon plz!!!!!!!!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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really awesome!! please continue!! 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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that was realli gud yu shud continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: premlover411

Oh!!!!! Wow!!!!👏👏👏

I was hoping someone would write a ff about the current track!
Thanks so much!!!!
Please continue!!!!!! It sounds great so far!!!!!😉👏



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Love
Mickey P

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

nice storyline cont soon plz!!!!!!!!👏



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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ts9787

really awesome!! please continue!! 😊



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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: iditri

hay thts really good....continue...



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