Mera Ghar... Part 10 Pg 15 - 09/25/09 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
hey
that was fantastic. 👏 cant wait until premeer meet...I feel so bad for prem. hope maya and veera are caught soon and they should be punished really bad for what they have done. continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!👏



Thank you so much...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaibun

ok new tgwist whos dis vishal is sunaina heers kid is heer remarried wt happened plzzzzzzzzzzzz answer my qs cant w8 4 da next part



Just bare with me for few parts and all your questions will be answered soon... thanks a lot

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: premeer928

hey
that was fantastic. 👏 cant wait until premeer meet...I feel so bad for prem. hope maya and veera are caught soon and they should be punished really bad for what they have done. continue soon. 😊



Thank you so much and you will have to see how much Prem suffers before he gets his life back for someone else crime...

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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
There is many question weather Heer got married again or not... well you will have to wait and read...

Enjoy these part...

Part 3

~ Pancheshwar City ~

"Kabhi kabhie soctha hoon Panchi kaun hai… (Panchi running down the stairs after putting her son back to sleep in his crib) meri patni yeh meri pyaar… woh jise ne zindagi ko milleyal (Panchi's eyes are shown) yeh phir woh jo meri zindagi ban gayi (Panchi's lips are shown smiling) woh jo meri ghar mein renthi hai… yeh phir woh jo meri dil mein renthi hai (Panchi shown running down the stairs with her payal making noise)" Vishal lifts up his wallet slowly and he looks at a picture which is someone else… Panchi comes in front of the wallet… Vishal looks at the picture in his wallet than slowly lifts his eyes toward Panchi who smiles at him… Panchi stares at Vishal and Vishal stares at Panchi which keeps on going back and forth.
~ Maya walks into Gayarti's room ~
"Come inside" Gayarti calls Maya inside after seeing her…
Maya touches Gayarti's feet and pretends to massage them with a shy smile…
"Beta you want to say something" Gayarti asked her.
"Mummyji I heard that Preet is planning to move to Simla with Prem Bhaiyya" Maya told Gayarti who looked horrified.
~ Pancheshwar City ~
Vishal puts his wallet away than cross his arms against his chest and smiles at Panchi who is standing right across him… he continues with the poem "Panchi ko dekha toh aisa laga… jaise morjan hue gulab (everyone's facial expression changes) {dead rose} toote hue kawab {broken dreams} (Panchi stares at Vishal with a fainted smile) jaise kaantie hue pantaga {broken kite} (Panchi bends down her head and Vishal keeps on smiling) aur jaise mandir mein purana diya {old candle in a temple}" Vishal continues to smile.
Vishal's mother shouts at him "Vishal" but Vishal keeps on smiling while Panchi's smile fades away.
Vishal's mother continues to speak "what are you speaking? Have you gone nuts?" Proteek goes and stands beside Panchi who looks like she is about to cry any moment remembering someone close to her heart. "Panchi… Vishal thinks he is very smart but he isn't" Proteek told Panchi… Vishal gave a smirk to Panchi… "Come' on Panchi - it's you're turn to answer back at Vishal Dada" Proteek told Panchi.
Panchi nods her head…
~ Maya leaves Gayarti ~
Gayarti stares at the family portrait of her sons and daughters together, but slowly Preet walks away with Meher and Prem. Kulraj also follows them with her kids. Harman stood their like a statue with Veera and Maya…
Gayarti keeps on shouting for Prem, Preet and Kulraj, but they don't listen to her and slowly they disappear. Gayarti keeps on screaming, but Preet pulls Prem away from her leaving Gayarti heart broke.
"Why are you shouting, Gayarti?" Lalit asked her.
Gayarti looks around and realizes she was having a bad dream during day time… she smile at her husband.
Lalit just stares at her confusingly…
~ Pancheshwar City ~
"Are you scared?" Vishal asked Panchi who looked irritated by him.
"come' on" Proteek encourages Panchi
Panchi walks toward Vishal… looking straight into his eyes… giving him a fainted smile…
"Iss morjan hue gulab ko jaise ne zindagi di… woh hai aap,
Iss unglowing diya ko jaise ne roshini di… woh hai aap, (Vishal folds his arms cross his chest and continues to smirk at Panchi)
Iss kaantie hue pantaga ko jise thama {hold}… woh hai aap, (Vishal continues to smile at Panchi)
Shikaya {several complain} toh kani hai zindagi se… lekin narazgi phir bhi nahin hai… kyun ki zindagi main hai app, (Vishal still has the same smile and continues to stare at Panchi)" Panchi gives a shy smile while staring at Vishal…
"What is this, Panchi? He had made fun of you and you are complementing him. This is not fair." Proteek interrupts Panchi who is replaying back to Vishal's poem.
"Proteek, king can not be criticize" Vishal points at himself "yes… what where you saying about me in your life" Panchi interrupts him "meri zindagi main aap jaise dal main kankar (Vishal's facial expression change from a smirk to confused. Everyone are confused and surprise) phool main kaanta aur barish main marcher {bugs} (Vishal's mother covers herself from bursting into laughter)" Panchi smile spread across her face…
"What did you say?" Vishal asked Panchi "barish main marcher" Panchi nods her head "Panchi" Vishal sounded upset and surprised "I'm not going to spare you".
Panchi runs away from Vishal… "Panchi" Vishal follows her… "Vishal" Panchi continues running up the stairs… Vishal also runs up the stairs behind her…
Prerna smiles at her son and her daughter-in-law…
"They are the most; cutest couple in our house and nobody can take their place" Proteek spoke after they ran up the stairs….
Panchi ran into their room… Vishal traps her on the opposite side of the sofa…
Vishal: What happened now? Why are you running? Are you scared?
Panchi: Scared of you! Vishal you should have seen your facial expression through out my poem.
Panchi throws a pillow at Vishal… but Vishal catches the pillow with both of his hands….
They keep on running clockwise around the sofas… Panchi trips on the same pillow she threw at Vishal… Panchi falls backward on the bed… Panchi tries to get up but Vishal captures her on the bed by holding both of her hands on the bed (basically Panchi is underneath Vishal on the bed)
Panchi: Vishal
Vishal: Yes
Panchi: Vishal
Vishal: Now try to say a poem…!
Panchi struggling to get free from Vishal's hold…
Panchi: Vishal… please let go off me! Krishna will wake up again…
Vishal repeats some of her lines from the poem while ticking her on the wrist with his fingers… Panchi keeps on laughing her lungs out…
Suddenly, Panchi stops laughing… stares into Vishal's eyes… also ask him "what are you doing?" Vishal doesn't say anything, but slowly closing in the gap between him and Panchi (during this scene… sad version of Devdas song is playing in the background).

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Please do leave your replies behind... either good or bad because I won't mind them...

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Mickey P

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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
don't get me wrong but isn't this the same scene that was in kayamat after the 5 year leap

waise a nice update but slightly confused as to whether gayatri has come to know about veera's truth in ur ff atleast?

and make that nihaal married some1 else and who is sensible.and veera now repents that
Edited by sanyoprithviraj - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
hey im rlly confused rite know but ill bare wiv u and hope to get my answers soon
hdo continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: sanyoprithviraj

don't get me wrong but isn't this the same scene that was in kayamat after the 5 year leap

waise a nice update but slightly confused as to whether gayatri has come to know about veera's truth in ur ff atleast?

and make that nihaal married some1 else and who is sensible.and veera now repents that



Nope... I haven't took you wrong because this scene is same as Kayamath after five year leap but I promise you are few parts it will be different from Kayamath, but if I upseted you than I'm sorry from bottom of my heart....

Glad that you liked the part... recently Gayarti doesn't know anything but soon she will... and about Nihaal than you will have to wait and watch.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: zaibun

hey im rlly confused rite know but ill bare wiv u and hope to get my answers soon

hdo continue



Just give me some time and I promise to clear all your misunderstanding....

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Mickey P

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweta2005

update plzzzzzzzzzz asap waitinggggggggggg



Thank you so much...

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