FF: Bittersweet Allusions [Pt 13 pg.57]

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amazingneira

@amazingneira

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#321

OH crap... what is this daljeet upto now!!

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

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Posted: 16 years ago

#322

waddyo mean ji bua ji... umm i think bua did something to heer even before kaki got home.. that lil rascal..lol

continue soonn!!!

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420366

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Posted: 16 years ago

#323

Thanks Ravjot!

My Spot!

I'll be back to comment.

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A beautifully written update...
I especially loved the first paragraph and am glad Heer realises that prem did help...when no one else had been able to get through to her...

OMG, the wicked witch Daljeet's here...Didn't see that coming!!!! She's here for good, I guess! And here to create trouble, looks like it...

Balwant must be dancing with happiness....he now knows what freedom tastes like😆 Lucky Balwant...but unlucky rest of us, we have to tolerate her now!!!!!

And she is here to create trouble....Oh! poor Heer. But Prem will come to the rescue....will he not????? *makes a wish*

Lovely update Ravjot. Looking forward to the rest of this fic.

Love:-Nonee

Edited by noneeM - 16 years ago

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#324

*falls*

Oh.My.God.

This too?

my spot.

*edited*

I hate Daljeet. You just had to bring her in didn't you. 😕 And I still cannot believe you updated so soon.

I love the juxtaposition of this part. You have the beginnings of a recovery in the beginning for Heer, her becoming happy and stuff, and then the entry of DJ, and Heer's become subdued and scared. Prem's going to do something I hope?

Love,
Radz

Edited by Anhdara13 - 16 years ago

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#325

*eyes fill with tears due to the emotion* .......................... *stranggled gasp*............... *dramatic wail*................ I'm so PROUD of you Ducky!!! You have been updating!!! *gets tissue and blows nose hard* Here, have a cookie...... no, have the whole box!! *hands box over* 🤣

I love the story!! Now i finally know why it is called Bittersweet allusions!! 😆 So many twists and turns!! It's awesome!! Really liking how you have a new shock in every chapter! *thumbs up*

Hope to see Prem come to the rescue soon!! 😃 Can't wait for the next update! Thanks for the PM!

Love you! *hug*

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Meera

@indiandoll89

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#326

I feel immensely loved Ravs! 😲 I'm saving a spot on ALL three! *squeals in delight*

*edited*

Thank you soooo much for updating Ravs! 😃 I'm sooo touched, you have no idea! 😳 I know you told me not to read it when I'm so bleh...but *shrugs* oh well! 😛

I'm so glad Heer felt better after talking to Prem, but come on Ravs! 😔 You could've let her be happy for at least a full update before bringing Daljeet! 😔

Anyways update again soon! 😃😳

Love you,

Meera😳

Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago

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Komal

@Momana

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#327

awasome updated👏
pm me when u update the next part... XD

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Madiha

@Dark Love

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#328

Yo Ravzie! You can't just leave it here 😳

Why oh why did Heer say yes?

PREMM save her...from...this DJ lady.

Great update though!

- Madiha

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mimi0295

@mimi0295

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#329

Edited 🤣 *runs to read Aadat* 🤣

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And I should tell you because...?

@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#330

I remember once telling someone the day you update all of your FF's in a go, pigs would be able to fly. 😆

BUT WOMAN! YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE IT THERE! I DEMAND YOU CONTINUE!

Stupid daljeet.

--shabz

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