FF: Bittersweet Allusions [Pt 13 pg.57]

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mimi0295

@mimi0295

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Posted: 16 years ago

#301

OMG NO WAY

Wait, let me unshock myself. RESERVED

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NO WAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cookie DONT BE SHOCKED? Macaroni, COOKIE IS DAMN SHOCKED 😲 The Macaroni updated her FF IN A WEEK 😲😲😲 *dies* WHERE IS MY MACARONI AND WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH HER -Ravjot-? 😡😆 I know my macaroni is lazy, but I like her the way she is (although the fast updates are something I would not change 😃) I IS SO OVER KHUSHI-FIED ATM 🤣 and dont go all "wtf is khushi-fied because fyi, I dont know

ANYWAYS @ the part-

HE DIED 😲 How can he DIE? 😭 OMG poooooor Heeer!!!! You described her feelings perfectly...in just a paragraph or 2 😳 If I tried that, it'd take me the whole FF to get one feelign across 😆 But it was SO sad, the way the lively, bubbly Heer distanced herself from all the people she loved

I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEED the Premeer lake scene...BY GOD 😍 OMG he wrapped his arms around her, and they sat like that ☺️

And when the "look @ the stars" part came up, I had lion king/Kuch kuch hota hai flashbacks running through my head 😭

I LOVED IT!! And no, sorry, haven't watched the movie ur talking about ... but u know what they say..when in vain, GOOGLE IT 🤣

Edited by mimi0295 - 16 years ago

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Riya

@PrincessPatel77

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Posted: 16 years ago

#302

great update
very sad but great
continue ASAP
pm me

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@shabo24

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Posted: 16 years ago

#303

You weren't kidding. 😲

So this is what happens when you update so fast? You kill people? Gosh, I really should stop talking to everyone on this forum, it really is bad for you guys.

Ouch. You just BROKE Heer's heart. That was so sad, I still can't believe he died. Lake side scenes rock! :D

As for the movie, it's something about woman rights and how Madhuri is abused I think?

*sings* Kehte hain mujhjo....*dramatic pause*.....hawa hawaii!

--shabz

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

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Posted: 16 years ago

#304

heer's bauji died??whatt?? but thats bringing prem-heer together..:D:D
no fight!that was beautiful even tho i like them cuz their cutee..lol
continue soon!!!

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aaminaman

@aaminaman

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Posted: 16 years ago

#305

hi your ff was really nice i read it for the 1st time and it was really nice it is a differewnt till now wat i read so congrats and pls update the next part as soon as possible

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420366

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Posted: 16 years ago

#306

Hey again!

My Spot!

Be back in the morning!

Editing time:
I just loved the way you wrote this Ravjot. The emotions, the helplessness, the anguish, you have expressed Heer's feelings so beautifully, it touched my heart. Above all, the way you described it was so natural, so free from drama but so unbearably wrenching! I could feel Heer's pain and that's a salute to you as a writer....

I simply love your Heer. The way you've written her is amazing. Throughout this fic.

This sentence just stays in my mind. 'Many people from the village came by to offer their condolences but Heer ignored them. She didn't want their sympathy. It wasn't going to bring her Bauji back.' Makes me want to weep!

And it was so wonderful that Heer could grieve in front of Prem. He was able to reach behind her shield of grief and pull her out. That surely established a bond between them, one I hope Heer will remember later....

Really, well written Ravjot. I loved this part.

Will you please pm me when you update next. Add me to the list. Thanks.
Love:-Nonee

Edited by noneeM - 16 years ago

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Captain_Pari

@Captain_Pari

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Posted: 16 years ago

#307

hey......

lolzzz that really is a surprise!! :P:D..hehehe

awwwwwwwww Balraj passed away nd now Heer's alone......

the premeer moments was really cuteeeee.....waiting for next update!...nd plzz make it a teensy-weensy bit longer...thnkz!

-Luv Pari

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isomers

@isomers

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Posted: 16 years ago

#308

Is it that big of a shock that you updated early?!... going by what everyone wrote..apparently it is! 😆

aww..poor heer!..her bauji died..feel so sorry for her! 😭 it's like now she stopped living or something. and you protrayed her emotions very well! kudos to you! :)

the lake scene was very touching!..for the first time..prem and heer didn't fight! :D

I was just as shocked as prem when she opened up to him!...aww...they watched the stars together!..shooo shweet!

well...I'm going to say update soon..but I don't know if it's going to happen! lol

Edited by nityatarlapally - 16 years ago

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@lovearshi01

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Posted: 16 years ago

#309

hey

add me to your pm list

thanks

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Ravjot

@rainydays.

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#310

Originally posted by: Anhdara13
mine!

*edited*

I was first! *dances* Yay😃

And I enjoy being shocked. I mean, a week! A week Ravzie! That's like, a record for you! *shocked muh* Not really😆 If you check out Dosti, I used to update frequently. Same with this except then I got lazy😆

But, but, but, such a sad part this was. You killed Bauji offf? *wails* How could you Ravzie, how could you?? *throws self on the floor and sobs* I was typing and he just somehow died? Well he had to ok! At least I didn't have him get murdered.

Poor Heer, she's so broken inside. I love that Prem's the one she confides too. It's so sweet. Though I have a feeling they're going back to fighting soon. Yup. Heer feels a bit better though now that she confided in someone. Even if it is Prem😆

Update within a month kay? I'll see😆

*edit add*

See if I ever help you again Ravzie. *pouts* I love you too😊😆

*edit end*

Love,
Radz

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