FF- ETERNAL LOVE-upd part 25 on page92 10th feb

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vandana

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey guys i've been a silent reader of all ff's. since the present track in the serial has become very boring i thought why not start a new ff which will continue from the present track. but i promise you it will have prem in it and the concept will be based on their being one. another thing it might contain a lot of adult matter in it so plz reply whether u want me to continue with it or not

okay here goes the first part. plz excuse my mistakes as my english is not that good

part 1

Heer was dressed in a full bridal attire.She was looking the prettiest bride that one had ever seen. it was suppose to be her dream wedding----- the wedding she had dreamt since her childhood------ the wedding which would unite her with Prem --------------- yes her Prem ---- whom she knew would love her from the bottom of his heart-------- who would never allow a tear to roll down her eyes-------- who would keep her close to his heart and safe in the warmth of his hug.

She looked around the hall . A full fledged party was on and a lot of people had come to attend her wedding. she smiled to herself but the moment she looked up at the groom sitting beside her--------- all her dreams were shattered.

He was sitting beside her. the person who was hell bent on giving her all the miseries in this world---- who would leave no stone unturned to bring tears in her eyes-------- who would hate her from the inner core of his heart and who would nevewr leave an opportunity to inflict an injury to her. Yes the groom could not be Prem-------- but he was Risabh Rampal!!!!!!

She had come to terms with reality.. This was not suppose to be her fate had her fate not played a dirty trick on her.

thats all . plz comment and if you like it then i'll continue. next update tomorrow

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Edited by riks1 - 16 years ago

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vandana

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey no replies .😭😭 seems no one liked it. i know it's not something which we all wish but the story will actually continue with premeer and rr as the villain

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Posted: 16 years ago

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do update soon asap with long part.

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Posted: 16 years ago

great start...i liked it!!! continue soon!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: riks1
hey no replies .😭😭 seems no one liked it. i know it's not something which we all wish but the story will actually continue with premeer and rr as the villain

honey eik ghantay mein kitne replies ho saktay hain, give ppl a chance to read it, looks different, do continue

i ll be looking forward to it

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vandana

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Posted: 16 years ago

part 2

flashback:

she still remembered the day when RR had called off his wedding with veera and had informed them about how he had destroyed the Juneja's. At that time her only concern had been to keep Prem's words---- to see that his darling sister was married on that day so she had suggested Veera's alliance with Nihaal-- her long lost brother. So two weddings had actually taken place on that day i.e maher-harman's and veera-nihaal's.She had felt as if a stone had been lifted from her heart. She knew that wherever Prem was he was happy for his sister was in safe hands. She was married to a person who loved her .She had fulfilled Prem's wishes and the responsibilities given to her by prem had been taken care of.

She had cried her heart out on that night for she had suppressed her emotions only for veera's wedding.the day she had seen the cd she had felt as if a part of her had died.She was alive physically, but had no emotions left in her.Her soul had gone with him. She was not able to come to terms with reality----- she had no clue why her heart was still beating when his heart had stopped. He had told her that if he was the heart then she was his heartbeat. She could not understand how one had survived without the other.Her mind was telling her that he was no more but her heart was not ready to accept this truth even after seeing his body lying lifeless in front of her.She had tried to convince herself by accepting the fact that since she was a part of him -------- that's why she felt that he was alive for if he was dead then she would have died too and Prem would have never wanted thatso he always made her feel that he was still there-------- very near to her------ feeling her heartbeats---- and loving her always.

Prem had told her to take care of their parentsand family but RR was making their lives miserable.Not being able to tolerate any further she had gone to meet RR at his home--- to make clear what his actual problem was and why he was after the lives if the Juneja's. It was then that he had made the proposal to her . A propoal which meant her life on one hand and prem's wishes on the other. She had made up her mind at that very moment for there was no question of making a choice. She would fulfill the wishes of prem even if it meant destroying her life for ever.

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