FF- ETERNAL LOVE-upd part 25 on page92 10th feb - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx a lot for all your comments 😊😊 i'm very happy that u all r finding it different and liking it. next part will be updated tonight
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Posted: 16 years ago
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part 3
RR had told heer that if she wanted him to give back all that he had taken away from the juneja's then she would have to agree to get married to him. it was as if heer was struck by a hurricane. she could not get married to anyone---- she was prem's right from the day she was born--- she was a symbol of him thats why she was named Heer --- how could she think of anyone else other than prem.But then it struck her that agreeing to RR's proposal was the only way by which she could fulfilled the incomplete dreams of prem. she had agreed.........
RR was very happy for his revenge was about to be completed. it was not that he was mesmerised by heer's beauty or loved her but it was his way of taking revenge from prem-------- yes the same prem who had made his sister Sanjana insane because he had refused her love. that very day he had made up his mind to take revenge from him. he had given prem the false ashes of sanjana so that he would never be able to come out of the guilt that a girl had committed suicide beacause of him and he was responsible for her death. he had been right . Prem was actually suffering from the guilt but on the sangeet night when he saw the way heer made prem overcome this guilt he decided to change plans. earlier he had thought that prem's actual strength was his family and if he hurt them then prem would be shattered.thats why he had decided to ruin the life of veera but on that day he realised that hurting prem's family would not serve him the right purpose. if he wanted he could have hurt prem physically and killed him but he wanted prem to die a slow daeth----- give him a life where every breath he took would be burden for him----- a life where he would be incomplete-- incomplete because there would be no heer in it. RR had seen the way prem loved heer and thats why he decided to take away the love from prem's life.i.e heer. This was the last injury which he was going to inflict upon prem. by marrying heer he would take away prem's soul and he knew that after that Prem would break apart in a million pieces which he himself would never be able to gather. Prem would die a slow --- very slow death under the gult that heer was paying for the mistakes that he had made. and yes RR would make sure that Heer paid dearly for Prem's mistakes.
Heer had agreed. her only concern had been taking care of gayatri mom.When she had broken the news to the juneja's that she was marrying RR , she had faced a lot of controversies. Everyone had accused her of marrying RR for money. Veer had even accused her of planning everything with RR . what had hurt her the most was everyone's suspicion about her love for prem---- they thought that she had loved prem for his wealth. She had silently accepted all the allegations and had no regrets becoz she knew that her Prem knew the truth and was aware of her true love for him.
she was really caught by surprise when preet had come to her and said"bhabhi i don't know why u are doing this.the only thing i know is that u were, u are and will always be right just like my pb. i just want you to know that whatever you do wherever you are this brother of yours will always be by your side and will always be there for you"
these words had bought tears to her eyes.how bauji misunderstood him and held him responsible for prem's death.Prem was right about his little bro. he was right that no matter what preet was always there for his pb and now when his pb was not there for heer coz preet knew that prem considered heer a part of himself.she gently wiped the tears off his face and told him"mere jaane ke baad mera ek kaam karega? maa ka khayal rakhega? dekho prem ne yeh zimmedaari mujhe di thi par RR se shaadi ke baad shayad mein is ghar mein vaapas na aa paaoon isiliye tu meri taraf se maa ka khayal rakhna. unhe Prem ki kami kabhie mehsoos mat hone dena?
Heer had made sure that RR finished all the formalities of returning everything to the juneja's before the wedding took place.
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Heer looked around the hall-------- no familiar faces---- only unknown ones--- but one face caught her eyes--- yes Preet was there--- to be with her through one of the toughest moments of his Heer bhabhi's life praying silently that some miracle happens and the marriage never takes place. Unable to bear the pain in his bhabhi's eyes he silently left the place.
The wedding rituals had just started.As the priest told them to get up for the pheras Heer silently spoke to Prem in her mind"prem you had asked me to become a bride-------- see i'm becoming one---- i'm doing all the things you had told me to do.............. the only difference is that i'm not going to spend my life with someone whom i can call my own.... tell him about you as a tale .... no.... i'll spend my life with you .............. be it in this world or the other world..............now you are a part of that heaven and i'm a part of this earth....... but very soon heaven and earth are going to meet....... for i can see the horizon where they unite........as soon as this wedding takes place i'm going to end my life and join you in the other world..............
With this thought she got up started doing the pheras with RR .No sooner had she completed the second phera that the whole world just went blank before her eyes and she passes out right in the middle of the mandap!!!!!!!!!
Edited by riks1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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plz update very soon i just caught ur ff its super!no words i m speachless but still saying!lol!loved it n plz continue very soon or i will pinch u!lol!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey..i just checked out your ff..
its very nice..
heer faints??so the marriage wont take place?great!!
waiting for prem to come back..
update asap
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey thanx a lot for your comments. i'm very happy that u all r liking the ff. next update will be on monday morning ist . i just wanted to ask whether u all r comfortable with an update which has er... a well detailed passionate scene between premeer. plzzzzzz let me know then only i will put it up otherwise i'll write another scene. i had already mentioned this before writing as there r a lot of kids in this forum
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: riks1

hey thanx a lot for your comments. i'm very happy that u all r liking the ff. next update will be on monday morning ist . i just wanted to ask whether u all r comfortable with an update which has er... a well detailed passionate scene between premeer. plzzzzzz let me know then only i will put it up otherwise i'll write another scene. i had already mentioned this before writing as there r a lot of kids in this forum

😆let me suggest like u said when rampal n heer was gona get second phere u may say veera kulraaj n juneja girls bring heer down stair rampal with his weired smile thinking blach blach blach😆u can discribe the situation more detailed😆n about preemer u can write it cause most ff have romentic scence so dont worry about it😳n i dont think u r gona make a scence that child cant read?😆this is my though may also wait for other ppls opinion!😳And u can also edit he title enternal love-imp note😉
Edited by heer hann - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey riks just read the ff from the begining and must say it is good and different.hopefully marriage wont take place.and prem comes back in time to stop the wedding.and about your update on monday regarding premeer paassionate well as heerhannsaid,other ff's in this forum also has some passionate scenes between the characters so chill.looking forward to the next update on monday.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: riks1

hey thanx a lot for your comments. i'm very happy that u all r liking the ff. next update will be on monday morning ist . i just wanted to ask whether u all r comfortable with an update which has er... a well detailed passionate scene between premeer. plzzzzzz let me know then only i will put it up otherwise i'll write another scene. i had already mentioned this before writing as there r a lot of kids in this forum

you can rate that part for those concerned but i am pretty sure as long as it does not turn into MA or XX and it doesnt feature RR and Heer.... again thats my personal opinion and i am well past the age limit...
liked the update :)
Edited by fj08 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey,
I just read all the 3 parts. It's very good. Looks like RR has captured Prem and he's in his custody and not dead. And Heer fainting....glad the wedding will be cancelled. Waiting for Prem to be back.

Go ahead and post the passionate scene...wud love to read it. As you're concerned, maybe you can just write a note/disclaimer on top.

Pls continue.



Edited by Magpie_07 - 16 years ago

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