FF- ETERNAL LOVE-upd part 25 on page92 10th feb

lala

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Posted: 16 years ago

#41

very nice dear and i like that u add the scence which was between preemer and kuljeet right?very good dear but the last part was a quite emotional!

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amana

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Posted: 16 years ago

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i just caught up with the rest of the part. sorry i missed it * holding ears*

uf ff is amazing. really well written.

i knew veera is a lousy creature but lallu i cant belive he dobted her!!anyways thank god preets with her. atleast someone has some brains. what bout meher??

she she doubt her too???

pls continue asap

im dying to know what happens next

amana

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Angie

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Posted: 16 years ago

#43

Hey riks

Just read your FF,its interesting...Do continue soon....I like the way you have written it...especially Heer's thoughts and emotions, Preet's support to Heer, Prem-Heer part everything....One small doubt, is Heer married to RR? why did she have the sindoor and mangalsutra...

Wow , you have daughter, cool...I had read in one of your posts that you are married...how old is your daughter...how is she now?

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Angie

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Lady_Impala

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Posted: 16 years ago

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awesome update.knew you would be able to convey the passion with decency.koi shaq nahi tha.you know it made sense and all and wouldnt mind if this happened in the show i know me getting besharam but kya karein.well looking forward to the next update so do update soon .....marica.....

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vandana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#45

very nice dear and i like that u add the scence which was between preemer and kuljeet right?very good dear but the last part was a quite emotional![

thanx a lot for your comments . plz keep replying as it really feels great. i know that the last part was pretty emotional but as you know i'm continuing from the part where the juneja's know about rr's plan and had to include these scenes

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Magpie

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Posted: 16 years ago

#46

Tnx dear. And glad to know that your little one is feeling better now.

The update was sweet. Loved the passionate scene. Like Fijiana said, you conveyed the passion with decency.

Looking forward to read the next update.

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vandana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#47

i just caught up with the rest of the part. sorry i missed it * holding ears*

uf ff is amazing. really well written.

i knew veera is a lousy creature but lallu i cant belive he dobted her!!anyways thank god preets with her. atleast someone has some brains. what bout meher??

she she doubt her too???

pls continue asap

im dying to know what happens next

hey thanx.😊 so you don't believe that lallu is a lousy creature?😲😲😲 yes if he can doubt prem (his own son) then he can doubt anyone in this world. meher will be coming later in the ff. whether she doubts her or not is yet to be seen. plzz keep reading and replying.....

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vandana

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Hey riks

Just read your FF,its interesting...Do continue soon....I like the way you have written it...especially Heer's thoughts and emotions, Preet's support to Heer, Prem-Heer part everything....One small doubt, is Heer married to RR? why did she have the sindoor and mangalsutra...

Wow , you have daughter, cool...I had read in one of your posts that you are married...how old is your daughter...how is she now?

Luv

Angie

thanx angie

whether heer is married to rr or not will be cleared in the next update.

my daughter is seven and much better now thats why i was able to update. i'm writing the next part . will update soon

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vandana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#49

awesome update.knew you would be able to convey the passion with decency.koi shaq nahi tha.you know it made sense and all and wouldnt mind if this happened in the show i know me getting besharam but kya karein.well looking forward to the next update so do update soon .....marica
thanx marica

i know this never happened in the show😭😭😭 i was looking forward to it but i guess ekta had other plans for us😭 and don't worry we all are besharm out here as far as premeer r concerned isn't it?😉😉😉

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vandana

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Tnx dear. And glad to know that your little one is feeling better now.

The update was sweet. Loved the passionate scene. Like Fijiana said, you conveyed the passion with decency.

Looking forward to read the next update.

hey thanx. will update the next part as soon as possible

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