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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Hey all! I'm Radz, as some of you may know. Having exams, and I probably shouldn't even be posting this, but I'd written it out some time ago, and finally got down to typing it out.

hey! ms. "hey-all! i'm radz"!! you have exams and you shouldn't be posting ffics! *now where did i put that phone number of those-who-try-to-keep-radz-glued-to-her-books??? 😆*

as it is, i have too many reasons that keep pulling me back into kdmhmd@if.com - i had promised myself to not start reading ffics and find that i never want to leave here! so you shouldn't be posting ffics! 😡 and that too...

Please let me know if you are interested. Will be posting the first part in just a bit. Also, this is in part dedicated to Estee, because my Pm conversation with her regarding the Prem-death track and various methods for him to be brought back spawned the plot bunny that refused to die. 😆

... ones dedicated in part, of fully to me!!???!! *trying to think clearly using a suddenly wobbly, wanna-weepy brain* how sweet of you, radz. and we didn't even pm about it that much! ooooh, and taking the idea of prem-in-a-coma/with-amnesia to full story mode, eh!? which was it -- coma? or amensia?? *hitting myself to clear my head and come back to my senses!*

argh! radz! go back to your books! 😆

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kimmu

RESERVED!! -- Shut up, i will update this. Some time later................................................ *hides*

You'd better! Am waiting!

Originally posted by: sonali90

hey luved part 1!!! awesome....plz continue soon
luv sonali

Glad you enjoyed it! Will probably update later in the week!
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: estee

hey! ms. "hey-all! i'm radz"!! you have exams and you shouldn't be posting ffics! *now where did i put that phone number of those-who-try-to-keep-radz-glued-to-her-books??? 😆* I told you, plot bunnies don't leave me alone!!😆

as it is, i have too many reasons that keep pulling me back into kdmhmd@if.com - i had promised myself to not start reading ffics and find that i never want to leave here! so you shouldn't be posting ffics! 😡 and that too...

Please let me know if you are interested. Will be posting the first part in just a bit. Also, this is in part dedicated to Estee, because my Pm conversation with her regarding the Prem-death track and various methods for him to be brought back spawned the plot bunny that refused to die. 😆

... ones dedicated in part, of fully to me!!???!! *trying to think clearly using a suddenly wobbly, wanna-weepy brain* how sweet of you, radz. and we didn't even pm about it that much! ooooh, and taking the idea of prem-in-a-coma/with-amnesia to full story mode, eh!? which was it -- coma? or amensia?? *hitting myself to clear my head and come back to my senses!*

argh! radz! go back to your books! 😆
😆 Sorry E! But if you want to know which one it was, you're going to actually have to read it! 😆 [no comment on the books.. I do have to go back to them!]
Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey Radz,
awsome part yaar...
yay!! prem is alive..ionly if the bt peole had the sense to do something like this..
will wait for ur next update
all the best 4 ur exams
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashpush

hey Radz,

awsome part yaar...
yay!! prem is alive..ionly if the bt peole had the sense to do something like this..
will wait for ur next update
all the best 4 ur exams

Thank you! Glad you like it!
Yes, if only they had more sense, but then they'd probably be out of a job! 😆 I think Ekta only employs people that will give the weirdest twists ever!
Hopefully by Thursday it will be up.. 😉
Thanks!
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

aww radzie...ill come back to this... Ooh, you came back! I didn't realise..😆

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okayz, a year after the delhi bombings? hm kay sounds good! whooohooo, its gonna be on premeer's love 😃 hehe cant wait 😉 ooh la-la! i wish you were the one taking care of the show, then me would be helping estee and you with the analyzation on prem 😉😆 ey missy! course im interested 😆 but yea take your time with updating both of your fics! 😃 and good luck with your exams, dont think i've wished you luck yet 😆 Thank you! I wish I were too..😆
Part. 1-
kay love the song 😳 hm meher still bubbly yet more mature now, sounds good, maybe now i will re-start liking her like i used to in the beginning 😃 If you do, I'd have achieved one of my aims! preet is at the hotel already? i guess lallu's words have effected him in such a way that he is now showing how he is maturing 😳 ahh lekin you didn't show preet 😍 ah koi baat nahin, next time 😉😆 Haila, have you read my mind or something? (see part2 to know what I mean 😆) aww heer is so sweet, worrying about preet leaving without eating breakfast 😆 aww ashie ish preggers!! 😆 abey oy! mere preet ko baap banadiya? 😲😲 tsk tsk koi baat nahin. aww harman's stealing meher's food? how cute! are they married now? 😃 😆 I actually haven't decided yet, as I mentioned to someone else..
PREM!! he's here! aww his beginning paragraph was soo 👏 suited him and his situation 😃 um yeh ladki prem ko kyun touch kar rahi hai? 😡 grr yeh sanjana ki bachi ka main khoon kar doongi!! oooh i kinda have an idea of the whole thing that happened 😉 hm cant wait for next part! i wanna see premeer interact 😃 Not yet, sbr rakh meri dost, sabr rakh!
lub
rinkz
Thank you for the lamba comment!
Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello all! *waves* Thanks so much for the wonderful comments! (Kimz, you'd better comment on this one, nahi toh.. *takes out belan*) I'm overwhelmed by the feedback, and really glad you all enjoyed the first part..
Now, this part is dedicated to Rinki, because I could not make her present on time for her birthday, so until then can you make do with this? (I juts realised how apt this part was for you anyways, cos it's got Preet in it!😆) Love you sweetie, hope you enjoy!
Don't forget to comment please! Your feedback helps me write better, and change my storyline so as to not give you another Kekta serial! 😆
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Na Jaane Kab Se Umeedein Kuch Baaki Hain
Mujhe Phir Bhi Teri Yaad Kyon Aati Hai
Na Jaane Kab Se
"So Preet, kuch pata chala?" Harman asked his brother as he entered his cabin.
"Nahin yaar, PB ka kuch pata nahin chala," Preet rubbed his face wearily.
Harman worriedly looked his brother over. They had all changed in the last year, but Preet had begun working himself hard. Harman knew his younger brother partially blamed himself for their Bhai's disappearance, and no matter what anyone else said, he threw himself into his work and into their search in order to redeem himself. 'And it's all Bauji's fault,' Harman thought to himself angrily, not for the first time.
>flashback<
"Tumhare waje se Prem ab iss duniya mein nahi raha!" Lalit thundered, pointing at Preet. Preet looked at his father in horror and Harman was sure an identical look adorned his face. Behind this spectacle, he could see Ash and Meher trying to comfort his hysterical mother. Meher's eyes caught his, and he silently thanked her. She sent him a small, sad smile in reply.
"Bauji -"
Preet was cut off as Lalit continued. "Tumne Prem ko Delhi bhijvaya tha na? Tum to kaam karma hi nahin chahte the, toh mera beta chala gaya Delhi. Sirf tumhare waje se Prem gaya tha!"
"Bauji, Prem jaana chahta tha," Heer's soft voice broke in. Harman had never been so relieved to hear his Bhabhi's voice, especially considering how close his younger brother was to breaking down at the accusation being levelled at him by their father. "Aap yeh jaante hain toh phir aap Preet ko kyun doshi maan rahe ho?"
"Heer beta, iss nalayak, iss Preet ki wajae se humara Prem humse bohot door chala gaya aur tum -"
"Bauji, main yeh nahin maanti ke Prem ab iss duniya mein nahin raha."
Harman and Preet stared at their Bhabhi in disbelief, mixed with hope. They had a connection, Prem Bhai and Heer Bhabhi. If Heer Bhabhi was saying that she felt that Bhai was alive than maybe, maybe he was.
"Heer puttar, main jaanta hun ke tum shock mein ho," Lalit began patronisingly.
"Nahin Bauji," Heer stood resolute. "Prem mara hua nahin hain. Yeh main yakeen se keh sakti hoon."
"Bhabhi," Preet sounded so hopeful.
"Tum chup raho," Lalit ordered angrily. Preet stopped, his head hanging. This hatred he felt from his father was new. He was used to disappointment and annoyance, but the utmost hatred he heard in his voice today hurt him. He was being accused of his PB's death. 'But Bhabhi says PB is alive.' Preet thought. 'Bhabhi would know.'
"Aap maane ya na maane Bauji, main maanti hoon ki Prem ko kuch nahi hua hai."
"Heer yeh namumkin hain."
"Yehi sach hain," Heer stated.
"Harman beta, tu isse samjha," Lalit turned to his more sensible son. But he was to be disappointed.
"Agar Bhabhi yeh keh rahi hai, ke Bhai theek hain, toh phir Bhai theek hi hoga."
Lalit stared at him in shock. "Harman, tu?"
"Haan Bauji, main yeh maanta hoon ki agar Bhai ko kuch ho jaata, toh Bhabhi ko pata hota. Sabse pehle Bhabhi ko pata chalta."
Meher looked on proudly at her friend as he defended both his brother and her sister. This was why she had fallen in love with him. While he usually listened to his father, he had once admitted to her that he did disagree with him. He was just never verbal about it. But this had to do with Prem Jiju, and Meher knew that for Prem, his brothers could go to the ends of the earth. Standing up to his father was nothing.
>end flashback<
"Preet, shayed PB India mein nahin hai," Harman voiced something that had been bothering him for awhile. They had scoured the major cities in India extensively before searching the more obscure parts, but to no avail. "Maybe we should broaden our scope."
Preet nodded slowly. "Yeh main bhi soch raha tha. Par kaise? Hume kisi ek ko supervise karna padega, but which one of us can leave?"
"Yeh hum ghar ja ke bhi discuss kar sakte hain." Harman grinned slightly then as he recalled Heer's anger at Preet. "Vaise Bhabhi tujhse phir se naraaz hai."
The grin turned into chuckles and then outright laughter as Preet groaned melodramatically.
Door Jitna Bhi Tum Mujhse, Paas Tere Main
Ab Toh Aadat Si Hai Mujhko Aise Jeene Mein
Zindagi Se Koyi Shikwa Hi Nahi Hai
Ab Toh Zinda Hoon Main Iss Neele Aasmaan Mein

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btw, the blue bits were flashbacks, just in case you didn't get the colour change 😃
Hope you enjoyed!
Love,
Radz
Edited by Anhdara13 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggggg for next asap.

Aw, thank you! The next update should be up by next Friday.. I would have made it consistent and said Thursday (it's already the 6th here, though it is 12.30 in the morning), par I have exams from Monday through Thursday next week, hence Friday.. hope you don't mind..
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks for the update, that was pretty quick , after all ur warnings of not updating.....

nice part, i love the song u used in the beginning and end, i dont like harman in kis desh... i have been trying to replace his image for ur FF, i think arjun (i think thats his name) who was in LRL with harshad would be good in that role, so now i am going to picture him while reading this, he would look nice with meher :)

looking forward to the next update, good luck with ur exams

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