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Posted: 16 years ago
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okay okay am here! hehe now i prolly wont be able to make it as long as a certain someone since they commented on both parts together! *cough-cheater-cough* but ill try my besht to make it long 😃
firstly....tehehe its dedicated to me...*giggles* ahh lolz nah but the real firstly is PREET!!!! haiii koi toh nazar utharo iski, mera shona ish here!! ahh it even opened up with his name in the sentence or question hehe ☺️☺️ ooh-lala...preet come hither!! hehe aww, preet kitna dhaka hua lag raha hai, me will give him a huggie laterz 😆...okay fine, ill confess...im liking harman in here *bows head down with guilt* me thinks that he is pretty good and all but just has to wrk on his acting a bit more and his dialogue delivery and then he will be really really good, atleast thats my opinion, but till that happens, i WILL keep on glaring with anger at him in the show for doing something stupid or wrong 😈 now bak to the one in this ff, i appriciate how he knew what preet felt and understood it also! so that deserves a clap from me, becuz i rlly think that harman can become the bharat in our ram-lakshman jodi so then our laksh-bharat will get together to bring ram back! *hopeful* and harman is also angry at ullu ka patha!! kay he just totally scored more points rite there! 😆 oooh flashback...lets see how many more reasons this will give me for killing that ullu
you know i rlly would've ignored that FB but since it had such important scenes....ill talk abt it also *sigh* first of all, let me remove all sharp things around me...or else that baldie will die a slow painful death 😡...it was not preet's fault you freakin jerk!! ugh...why are u making me go through this again radz...*sigh* thank god i cant see it this time, or else i rlly would start crying again...but i can still picture this in my head and thats not helping my anger towards lallu...thank god harman is not supporting ullu in this one..or else...ahh that little scene btwn meher and harman was rlly touching and cute! 😃 but one question! is maya in here too? *grr* yayy!! heer is here, she believes its not preet's fault! great, cuz he needs support...which he wnt get frm that useless father of his...but i guess im being too harsh, if ur gonna make lallu regret his actions towards preet...than make him beg radz thats my plea to you, becuz he doesn't deserve to be forgived without an apologyy
Heer believes prem is still alive, good! only she knows if he is, becuz he's her soul, she can feel him in her heart na...ahh that brought a ray of hope for preet and harman! really touching, that was! ^_^' ugh what kind of father would say his son is dead, seriously! you cling to that hope that no he is alive and here its a different story! *rolls eyes* then again it is ullu 😆 aww preet!! he sounds so hopeful, and that ullu! how dare he tell my preet to be chup? *thinks to torture plans* ahh i will have my revenge *ebil* YAY!!! harmu is backing his bhabhi up! whoohooo!! awesome! he deserves a pat on the bak! *pats harmu* hehe aww that little part with meher being proud of harmu was rlly cute, and yes! he will stand up against his ullu father for his prem bhaiya...YEA!!! tehehe
yesh yesh, please do broaden ur search and get prem out of that witch's hands!! *pleads* haii, which one is gnna leave?? ooh and radz, what u said abt bringing someone else in as ash's hubby nd her love, if that happens...than ahhh hehe me will wait and see what u do abt that little track of urs! 😳
haha preet!! poor guy! heer is gnna chew him alive eh? cnt wait to see her badgering him abt leaving without eating 😆 something i will be looking forward to 😉
aww the lyrics were rlly cute!! what song is that? me wanna use em!!! 😆 me will be chorying them from you 😉
and yesh i noticed the color change, pretty color too!! hehe
i loved it!! i really did! it showed me a different side of harmu that i frankly have been hoping to see for a while and also it was all preet *blush-blush* hehe
i cant wait for the next part!
hm when will we see prem next? anyway awesome part, cnt wait for the next one and the one after that and so on 😆
lub and tons of thanks
rinkz
Edited by ~Rinki~ - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
#42
*reserved*

Can't read it properly.....ufff.....your FF is jinxed I tell you....JINXED....!!!

*unreserved*

OK, no worries about PMing it to me now, I'll just copy/paste it on Word...more work...but for you...I'll do it!🤗

OK warning, short comments from now till*looks at watch* June?🤣🤣🤣I hate school, my ideal life, movies,ice cream and books....ohh and ☺️

yeshhhhhhh!! Harman seems like an ok guy in this FF...I swear I can't stand that ullu ka phata....blaming Ullu! Gooooo Harman!!!!😲Never thought I'd say that...!

🤪Premeer have a connection..way to state the obvious...!🥱Stupid Ullu...not believing Heer...but yeaaaa Harman snibbed Ullu...I loved that whole sequence....read it over and over again...! I love how much faith Preet and Harman have in their Bhabhi.....choo chewwt! *pulls cheeks*

Loved how you wrote it all, loved the song selection again....like always...🤔

*skips off to write essay*

Shabz😳
Edited by shabo24 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
wow radz..
dint expect such a quick update..
that was an awsome update radz...
loved the way both the brothers supported heer😃
Haan Bauji, main yeh maanta hoon ki agar Bhai ko kuch ho jaata, toh Bhabhi ko pata hota. Sabse pehle Bhabhi ko pata chalta."
that dialogue rocked!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: fj08

thanks for the update, that was pretty quick , after all ur warnings of not updating.....
nice part, i love the song u used in the beginning and end, i dont like harman in kis desh... i have been trying to replace his image for ur FF, i think arjun (i think thats his name) who was in LRL with harshad would be good in that role, so now i am going to picture him while reading this, he would look nice with meher :)
looking forward to the next update, good luck with ur exams

I'm glad you liked it! Yeah, I got more comments than I had expected, and I had a break between my papers, so I thought I'd update.. The next one may be sometime from now, though I'm going to try to make it next Friday.. It really depends on how my papers next week go.. 😕
😆 Most people don't really like Harman I've noticed, though I think he has potential (the actor just really needs some lessons first 😆) I'm hoping to redeem the character in people's eyes. 😆 High hopes, I know.. Arjun Bijlani would have made a good Harman na? Especially if he went around just wearing VESTs.. 😳 😆 Picture him! Go right ahead!
Thank you!

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

~~Reserved~~
paka promise ill try to come and update by tomorrow!!
and aww radzie!!! you dedicated it to me? *blush* AWW!!! lub ya!!
hehe yesh it is apt...PREET!! *blush blush and blush* hehe
rinkz

I hope so! I'll come and check, and if you haven't! 😡 😆
😃 😉 Rinkz, this is only one part of your prezzie, still have to do the other bit once PSP starts to work.. so this is so you don't get angry at me for having absolutely nothing for you.. 😆

Originally posted by: shabo24

*reserved*

Can't read it properly.....ufff.....your FF is jinxed I tell you....JINXED....!!!

😆 You want me to PM it to you again?
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: ashpush

wow radz..

dint expect such a quick update..
that was an awsome update radz...
loved the way both the brothers supported heer😃
Haan Bauji, main yeh maanta hoon ki agar Bhai ko kuch ho jaata, toh Bhabhi ko pata hota. Sabse pehle Bhabhi ko pata chalta.'
that dialogue rocked!!!

Aw, I am so glad you think so!
Yeah, I am of the mindset that the three brothers are Ram-Lakshman-Bharat, so I couldn't have anything else could I? 😆
Glad you liked it! And this time the update was quick, but the next one is still unclear, though as I've mentioned, hope to have it up by next Friday.. only I haven't written part 4 yet, so it's still under consideration.. 😆
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Aw, I am so glad you think so!
Yeah, I am of the mindset that the three brothers are Ram-Lakshman-Bharat, so I couldn't have anything else could I? 😆
Glad you liked it! And this time the update was quick, but the next one is still unclear, though as I've mentioned, hope to have it up by next Friday.. only I haven't written part 4 yet, so it's still under consideration.. 😆
Love,
Radz


yeah..they are Ram.Lakshman Bharat...no doubt about that..(even though i dont like harman in the show..)
hmm next friday..isnt that too long??😲😆no yaar..take ur own time..
i know how much time ff writing can consume..
n wat abt ur xams? are they over?

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Posted: 16 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: ashpush


yeah..they are Ram.Lakshman Bharat...no doubt about that..(even though i dont like harman in the show..)
hmm next friday..isnt that too long??😲😆no yaar..take ur own time..
i know how much time ff writing can consume..
n wat abt ur xams? are they over?

😆 Sorry yaar, but that's the soonest I can update..
And my exams are not over, they end on the 24th.. But by Friday, majority of my papers will be over.. 😃 I will only have one (the paper on the 24th) so I'd have more time to write...
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
^^ oy me would never get mad at cha!! unless u call me cute like kimz does! *grrr* or like the other two devil sisters of mine decide to tease me about a certain someone! *glare* i dnt want anything radz! ur wish was more than enough! *smile*
rinkz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

^^ oy me would never get mad at cha!! unless u call me cute like kimz does! *grrr* or like the other two devil sisters of mine decide to tease me about a certain someone! *glare* i dnt want anything radz! ur wish was more than enough! *smile*

rinkz

😆 About who?? 😉 😆 That's sweet and all Rinkz, but I'm still going to give it to you, whenever it's done anyways.. 😆
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
u r too good!i cant beleive its too good n i really like the story line but didnt show prem today!lol!love ur update plz continue very soon r give us a promo!hehe!

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