Dil Tujhko Hi Maanda (ficmix added pg 39) - Page 6

Originally posted by: heer hann

u r too good!i cant beleive its too good n i really like the story line but didnt show prem today!lol!love ur update plz continue very soon r give us a promo!hehe!

Originally posted by: nandini90

ok radz.....am trying to write sth here for a long time....but my gang is very bad(e).....first thing i came online i was planning to reply...but they gave me a song to listen...and now am not able to type properly......and sshhhh....not to let the song out at any cost......kkk Sure, sure blame the gang.. We both know it's really the song! 😆

well well....we saw onli harman and preet talking today huh.......btw....no offence...but i dont like this guy harman at all....the show is to be blamed.....i hav so much hatred...tht however gud he is shown...am not accepting him...and neither tht meher.....lols..... Hopefully, by the end of this, you won't hate them so much! 😆

and heer knowing and feeling prem is alive...wow....its just WOW.........and i think our real heer also does feel so...and i just cant express thru words....tht how much i love heer.....she is the same as prem for me........no prem no heer.....and now...i cant stop loving them both........ Of course, because Prem-Heer-are-one! 😆 Help me get E to read this na? Please? She's refusing to read it.. 😆

abhi.....i did miss premeer in this....but then....loved heer flashbak........and yaa..this updt was quick enuff.....thnx for tht......waiting for ur next part asap.......hai rabba......abh wat else shall i say??!!!.......i loved the lyrics yu hav used in btw.......thnx for the vm...thnx a lot... Next part has some Premeer, though it is not long.. and it'll only be up, earliest, next Friday! 😃 Glad you enjoyed it Nans.. Now enjoy the song!

luv nans

Love,

Radz

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

😆 About who?? 😉 😆 That's sweet and all Rinkz, but I'm still going to give it to you, whenever it's done anyways.. 😆

Ah that would be my friend who is ironically! just my friend 😆 ah these girls dnt get sarcasm do they? ah anyway...yea he is only my friend, i believe he is currently stalking a girl he likes 🤔😆 dnt remember, and im prolly gnna be helping him with that 😈 ah anyway me only thinks about me hotties ☺️😍 hehe the smexxyyy hotties of mine 😉😃 hehe ahh fine! i wnt say it anymore, then i will be waiting till ur done...and plz dnt push urself! if u cnt do it, then dont 😆 i dnt need anything, just make preet be mine and premeer meet 😉😆

Love,

Radz

rinks 😈--> suits me no? 😉

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

😆 Sorry yaar, but that's the soonest I can update..

And my exams are not over, they end on the 24th.. But by Friday, majority of my papers will be over.. 😃 I will only have one (the paper on the 24th) so I'd have more time to write...

Love,

Radz

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

hey
awesum
loved it

Originally posted by: kimmu

I'M HERE! No need to throw belans... Gosh, people these days. Throwing belans at innocent little children. 😛😆 Yay! You're here.. *puts belan away* And you're not all that innocent you know that na? 😉

Since I still haven't updated my last comment, lets combine. Booh-YAH! Smart, right? 😃 Starting from the first part, i loved how you showed Heer a with a smile on her face. Like she really belives he's out there, and he's going to come soon. Of course she knows he's alive, Prem-Heer-are-one, as E puts it! 😆 See the titles really cool like that, cuz first it comes from the title track, and second it totally suits your story track. (omg two tracks. 😲 i'm sorry... i just drank pepsi 🥱 Okay, so I can expect hyperness? 😆). I loved how she was all angry at Preet, just cuz he didn't eat breakfast. 😆 It's more than juts not being there for breakfast, but I guess that didn't come across so well.. It was more of a 'family-time' thing..

She's like the care-taker of the family now, has to know where everyone is. Hmm.. it might get on there nerves sometimes though. I know it gets on my nerves when people keep track of me, but Heer's different, and my moms different. My mom's all over me! She has to call 50 times, when i'm staying after. And then i can never finish what i was there for cuz of her calls. Ufff... moms these days worry to much. Its not like i'm doing anything wronggg... 🤔 Yeah, she's like the 'caretaker'.. You'll see more of this in part 3, to understand it more.. and no comment on your Mom.. mine's like that too.. 🤔

Hehe Meher and Harman were cute, even though they only got like a line, i still couldn't help but laugh at seeing Harman trying to steal Meher's food, and Meher smacking his hand with this expression 'MY FOOD!'.. Hehe reminds me of my lil sis. 😆 She's a foodie, and never shares. And my mom made biryani today. I came home late so never got to eat it fresh. *sigh* Hmm... then again, she makes biryani like everyday now. 😕 I think she's getting old and forgetting all the other recipes. 😆 I'm glad you liked the Harman-Meher scene! It was one line, but it was there! 😆 I still haven't decided what to do with them.. 😆 Biryani? We don't eat that often.. So I cannot sympathise.. 😆

Well thats all I can remember from the first part.. OH WAIT! I can't believe I forgot the most important part, PREM! Aaaaah.. Curse me. Then again, i'd rather not remember him with a sanjana all over him. Ughh, girl disgusts me. Thought it does make me curious to see how you made him end up with her. Like was it a plan from the beginning, or did it just happen by destiny. If it was destiny, mad i would choke destiny. If it was preplanned, then sanjana's dead. Wait, she's dead both ways... so never mindd.. Erm, Sanjana.. well, it was a little bit of luck and a little bit of scheming.. That's all I'm going to say at the moment.. 😆

Oh and make her get her arms of Prem before I chop them into tiny little pieces and feed them to the dogs. I'm just kidding, you know i'd never do that. I'm not the violent kind, but i can totally get Rinki to do it for me. She'd be happy, i could throw in Lallu too, and she wouldn't even think about it twice. That reminds me, i love how you didn't mention Lallu in the families 20 minutes of happiness. 😃 He deserves isolation. Since Prem lost his memory, i hope he feels a connection towards his entire family except Lallu. I hate Prem-lallu love. Lalit doesn't deserve it. *hmph* 😆 About Lallu, well, you'll see in part 3.. Also, no violence please (you can decide at the end of the story kay? 😆)

Lets get to the second part, eh? I think the first one was pretty long... I'm special. 😃 *sticks tongue out at everyone who doesn't have a longer comment then this* Ah its surprising how I like Harman here. You made his character seem so different in here, and he can actually act. Well in my imagination. Preet was looking adoooraablee... I felt kinda bad for him though. Like he has some kind of burden on his chest, and thanks to lallu he blames himself. The poor guy was already going through so much, and Lallu had to go and start the blame game. COME ON! Kindergardeners to that. (Whats the difference? He was scratching out Juneja's with a pen. I swear sometimes I wonder if this man has really gone into some kinda mental disorder). He seriously has to be the worst father. Where he's supposed to me trying to comfort his wife, his family, he goes and starts blaming Preet. How much is that going to hurt Preet? Not only Preet the whole family! You liked Harman? Yay! One aim achieved! 😆 I'm hoping to have everyone reconsidering him by the end of the story, cos I don't think it is the character that is evil or bad, just human and flawed, but the actor needs lessons, hence it comes across really bad.. 😆 And the whole Lallu-Preet thing? It's more that he needed a physical person to blame, and who best than bechara Preet, who he's always blamed for everything? I'm not condoning his actions, but later on flashbacks will show more into the situation..

But totally loved Heer standing up to him, talking back to him. YOU GO GIRL! Show the old man what your made of, sorry what your love is made of. There was really no point for Lallu to argue back, what kind of father kicks away the hope of there son living? Wow. Just wow... It kinda shocked me that he was trying to push away that ounce of hope that his best son was still alive. That really made him look like the mental one. I bet he was thinking 'Heer's crazy' and the poor buddha doesn't know everyone else thinks he's crazy. Tehehe... Of course Heer would stick up for him! I had so much fun writing that part.. 😆 And as for Lallu, wait for part 3 first.. 😃

Harman and Preet believing in Heer's love... that was really touching. Amazing how all three sons can be so good when the fathers so...... 🤢 Is Veera nice in here too? I guess we still have to get on in the story for that. I hope she dies...................... with Lallu. 😆 They are officially most hated on my list. I don't even hate Rishab that much. Sanjana, i'm still decide to see if she's the good one or bad one. But that little hug she did, she's close to the bad one. Ram-Bharat-Lakshman (Prem-Harman-Preet), so they would know how close Prem-Heer are na? Okay, that comment made more sense in my head.. 😆 Veera, you'll see.. 😆 I love witholding things!

So there in Canada? Ahhh gosh, leaving us all curious. You better post the next part quickly after this extremely long comment that i spent half an hour on writing. I didn't focus on anything else, but this. And well trying to remember what you wrote. I knew I shoulda copied and pasted and then kept looking up to see what you wrote. But I guess i was too lazy. *sigh* I hope i didn't miss anything. And if i do it'll come to me... sometime later. I prolly won't add it though, so deal with it. *sticks tongue out........ thwwppp* I think that was long enough. Where's rinki? Lemme ask her if this is the longest comment i've ever written. 😆
Nahin, not in Canada.. I never actually thought about it! 😕😆 Chalo, for your sake, I'll randomly plop them in the UK.. Give them a place to be.. 😆

kimz

So the lamba comment was awesome! Longest comment I've ever gotten! Thank you!

Love,

Radz

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

~~Edited~~

okay okay am here! hehe now i prolly wont be able to make it as long as a certain someone since they commented on both parts together! *cough-cheater-cough* but ill try my besht to make it long 😃 It doesn't have to be long.. but I don't mind long comments! 😆

firstly....tehehe its dedicated to me...*giggles* ahh lolz nah but the real firstly is PREET!!!! haiii koi toh nazar utharo iski, mera shona ish here!! ahh it even opened up with his name in the sentence or question hehe ☺️☺️ ooh-lala...preet come hither!! hehe aww, preet kitna dhaka hua lag raha hai, me will give him a huggie laterz 😆...okay fine, ill confess...im liking harman in here *bows head down with guilt* me thinks that he is pretty good and all but just has to wrk on his acting a bit more and his dialogue delivery and then he will be really really good, atleast thats my opinion, but till that happens, i WILL keep on glaring with anger at him in the show for doing something stupid or wrong 😈 Yay! Someone else likes Harman, kind of! 😆 I think the guy needs some acting lessons.. The character is sort of okay, flawed, but which person (besides Prem) isn't? 😆 now bak to the one in this ff, i appriciate how he knew what preet felt and understood it also! so that deserves a clap from me, becuz i rlly think that harman can become the bharat in our ram-lakshman jodi so then our laksh-bharat will get together to bring ram back! *hopeful* and harman is also angry at ullu ka patha!! kay he just totally scored more points rite there! 😆 oooh flashback...lets see how many more reasons this will give me for killing that ullu Yeah, I really wanted the show to go more into the whole Ram-Bharat-Lakshman relationship between the three brothers.. Ah, the possibilites! 😃 So I took matters into my own hands! Glad you liked it! (Of course, it has to do with being against Ullu, so who wouldn't? 😆)

you know i rlly would've ignored that FB but since it had such important scenes....ill talk abt it also *sigh* first of all, let me remove all sharp things around me...or else that baldie will die a slow painful death 😡...it was not preet's fault you freakin jerk!! ugh...why are u making me go through this again radz...*sigh* thank god i cant see it this time, or else i rlly would start crying again...but i can still picture this in my head and thats not helping my anger towards lallu...thank god harman is not supporting ullu in this one..or else...ahh that little scene btwn meher and harman was rlly touching and cute! 😃 but one question! is maya in here too? *grr* Yeah, she was here.. kind of.. will get into that in some of the flashbacks later on.. yayy!! heer is here, she believes its not preet's fault! great, cuz he needs support...which he wnt get frm that useless father of his...but i guess im being too harsh, if ur gonna make lallu regret his actions towards preet...than make him beg radz thats my plea to you, becuz he doesn't deserve to be forgived without an apologyy Things will happen, and hopefully, well things actually happen! 😆 Don't worry so much about Lallu.. I think you will sort of like the next part.. 😃

Heer believes prem is still alive, good! only she knows if he is, becuz he's her soul, she can feel him in her heart na...ahh that brought a ray of hope for preet and harman! really touching, that was! ^_^' 😃 Glad you thought so, because, in the end, we all know.. (say it with me people) Prem-Heer-are-one! ugh what kind of father would say his son is dead, seriously! you cling to that hope that no he is alive and here its a different story! *rolls eyes* then again it is ullu 😆 Wait for the next part.. It might explain things..😛 aww preet!! he sounds so hopeful, and that ullu! how dare he tell my preet to be chup? *thinks to torture plans* ahh i will have my revenge *ebil* Okay, is this what will happen if I disappear without updating for a really long time? Or do something to annoy you? 😲 Me is scared.. YAY!!! harmu is backing his bhabhi up! whoohooo!! awesome! he deserves a pat on the bak! *pats harmu* hehe aww that little part with meher being proud of harmu was rlly cute, and yes! he will stand up against his ullu father for his prem bhaiya...YEA!!! tehehe Yup! Like I said earlier about the Ram-Bharat-Lakshman thing, potential!

yesh yesh, please do broaden ur search and get prem out of that witch's hands!! *pleads* haii, which one is gnna leave?? 😆 Wait and watch sweetie.. NO spoilers! ooh and radz, what u said abt bringing someone else in as ash's hubby nd her love, if that happens...than ahhh hehe me will wait and see what u do abt that little track of urs! 😳 😕 HUH?? When did I say that?

haha preet!! poor guy! heer is gnna chew him alive eh? cnt wait to see her badgering him abt leaving without eating 😆 something i will be looking forward to 😉 oops.. I should probably add that in now.. 😆 I sort of skipped that bit.. sigh can it be a flashback in a later part? 😃

aww the lyrics were rlly cute!! what song is that? me wanna use em!!! 😆 me will be chorying them from you 😉 The song was 'Aadat'.. Like the song, but the over used it in Kasamh Se.. 😆

and yesh i noticed the color change, pretty color too!! hehe

i loved it!! i really did! it showed me a different side of harmu that i frankly have been hoping to see for a while and also it was all preet *blush-blush* hehe 😆 I figured you'd enjoy the part because of him.. And glad you liked Harman.. I swear if they make him marry that chudail, I'm seriously going to fly to India and.. *looks around for sharp things* Damn, I have no sharp things in my room! 😆

i cant wait for the next part!

hm when will we see prem next? anyway awesome part, cnt wait for the next one and the one after that and so on 😆 Next part! And I have to get on with writing the parts after the next.. 😆

lub and tons of thanks Love you too! You're welcome, and thank you for the lamba comment! *hugs*

rinkz

Love,

Radz