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Me slurping it up.
Lamba hai lamba hai...😛😛 Very happy.
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Ok i'll skip a bit in the beginning because i knew it would happen that way...but that moment of irrationality and what Ayesha said right before it...wah wah 👏👏 i loved the dialogs..."dil cheer" type of dialogs.💔 Actually at the end of this whole update i finally understood the significance of the scns you chose for both of them in the mix. They both had different reactions to the disintegration of their relationship. Neev grew numb and Ayesha kept burning. I think Ayesha regrets what happened to a greater extent than Neev and maybe it should be so. She was responsible for it to a greater extent too. But i was so sad when you made Arjun interrupt them. 😭 I guess its your story and i'll wait to see if interruption was a better way to go. And knowing what your intentions are maybe it was.
"Aisi galti dobara mat karna Neev... ( how sad i was to read it. But was a brilliant line. So weighed.
Their thougths after that moment of irrationality was i think most enjoyable part of the update. Neev kept himself away because he didn't trust himself...what he thought he'd fought so hard not to feel anything for her and this was threatening it all. Reminds me...the part where Neev noticed her about to tear up and he had felt a familiar chest tightening on seeing her this way... Silly boy thinks he doesn't love her anymore. And the fact that Ayesha finally felt that it was good he didnt' for Priya's sake..poor poor gyal. I know she so wanted him to kiss her. 🥺
Halwa...there it is again. Poor Arjun doesn't get to eat Halwa because his mother can't bare to remember the good times...the few good times she had with her husband.
And finally...to be honest i kinda skimmed thru the parts where Priya ji was proposing. Please understand it was heartbreaking for me. But but but...
He looked dumbfounded and when he did speak after a long uncomfortable silence, he said, "But I'm still married..." Well well well...aren't we good at surprises. Wah ji Wah....so these two are still married and never got a divorce....ofcourse they didn't.😆
But that begs the question...would Neev have said yes??? I recollect that he thought to himself that if Priya had asked him to marry her when there were the pressures on them..he would have..but he was glad she didn't ask. But now is the situation different? She is asking him to marry her because she loves him and not to shut the mouths of people...would he have said yes...woudl he have done that. I don't have any reason to think he wouldn't have. But that just kills me Rima...it kills me. You've killed me. My Neesha who were once so perfect for each other in my eyes and now you have forced me to rethink it...and i hate you. I don't mean it but i do hate you.😭 you broke my dream so mercilessly. 😭
I demand lots of fluff from you after you are done with this fic. You better make me very very fluffy. Please....
Lamba hai lamba hai...😛😛 Very happy.
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Ok i'll skip a bit in the beginning because i knew it would happen that way...but that moment of irrationality and what Ayesha said right before it...wah wah 👏👏 i loved the dialogs..."dil cheer" type of dialogs.💔 Actually at the end of this whole update i finally understood the significance of the scns you chose for both of them in the mix. They both had different reactions to the disintegration of their relationship. Neev grew numb and Ayesha kept burning. I think Ayesha regrets what happened to a greater extent than Neev and maybe it should be so. She was responsible for it to a greater extent too. But i was so sad when you made Arjun interrupt them. 😭 I guess its your story and i'll wait to see if interruption was a better way to go. And knowing what your intentions are maybe it was.
"Aisi galti dobara mat karna Neev... ( how sad i was to read it. But was a brilliant line. So weighed.
Their thougths after that moment of irrationality was i think most enjoyable part of the update. Neev kept himself away because he didn't trust himself...what he thought he'd fought so hard not to feel anything for her and this was threatening it all. Reminds me...the part where Neev noticed her about to tear up and he had felt a familiar chest tightening on seeing her this way... Silly boy thinks he doesn't love her anymore. And the fact that Ayesha finally felt that it was good he didnt' for Priya's sake..poor poor gyal. I know she so wanted him to kiss her. 🥺
Halwa...there it is again. Poor Arjun doesn't get to eat Halwa because his mother can't bare to remember the good times...the few good times she had with her husband.
And finally...to be honest i kinda skimmed thru the parts where Priya ji was proposing. Please understand it was heartbreaking for me. But but but...
He looked dumbfounded and when he did speak after a long uncomfortable silence, he said, "But I'm still married..." Well well well...aren't we good at surprises. Wah ji Wah....so these two are still married and never got a divorce....ofcourse they didn't.😆
But that begs the question...would Neev have said yes??? I recollect that he thought to himself that if Priya had asked him to marry her when there were the pressures on them..he would have..but he was glad she didn't ask. But now is the situation different? She is asking him to marry her because she loves him and not to shut the mouths of people...would he have said yes...woudl he have done that. I don't have any reason to think he wouldn't have. But that just kills me Rima...it kills me. You've killed me. My Neesha who were once so perfect for each other in my eyes and now you have forced me to rethink it...and i hate you. I don't mean it but i do hate you.😭 you broke my dream so mercilessly. 😭
I demand lots of fluff from you after you are done with this fic. You better make me very very fluffy. Please....
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