FF:Aankhein(MP/NA) Complete, Pages 1, 2 and 3 - Page 71

Originally posted by: meteora_smt

Your Arjun??? 😆 You were expecting this??? Lolz did Rims leak out a part of the story to you... But am gonna say Arjun is just made for me yaar!!! 😡😆

Originally posted by: jinc118

Rimzi i love you...or do i. 🤗 But finally an update that didn't make me all sad and depressed.
will comment more in a few minutes. Gotta run.

Originally posted by: meteora_smt

Hey Rimz, I just read enough of the new chapter to know that NeeSha's kids name is Arjun!!! I like the name Arjun!!! 😃 haha of course you do...😉😆 I cudda scored some brownie points...but unfortunatel;y it wasn't intentional damn me!

Anyways jokes apart, I read this chapter and I thought it was very well done, I must say I liked it much better than the final part I which was no offense, a bit too depressing for me...Thats okay...I compleetly understand...for soem reason I like to read stuff like that😆 Atleast things are moving forward this way!!! they are they areeeeee😃 NeeSha have changed quite a bit from their previous selves, but its pretty realistic. yup and thank god you think so....pheyew *wipes brow*And I can understand both of their point of views. that was what I was after...Neev makes a pretty adorable father, which I'm sure he would be in the serial as well... uh huh...😭...if only they'd given him a chance😡

What I found interesting is the light in which you portrayed Ayesha as a mother, oh really...I found it intriguing because we never got to see Ayesha's maternal feelings in the show...no...you're right we didn't... And, it fits her character well...aaaah...I'm glad you think so... One part in the FF that tugged my heart was when Ayesha was thinking to herself, that had her child gone on her, he wouldn't have been accepted well at his school. That sentence just revealed so much about her character, and the type of childhood she led, and I think thats important because Ayesha's childhood is a crucial factor in shaping her up to be what she is. Yes you are right...it absolutely had a lot to do with it...and in a way, she's going out of her way to ensure that the opposite happens for her son...she's over protective and almost stifling Arjun because she got practically nothing in her childhood.You know one of the primary reasons I was interesting in writing a Neesha FF, is that I always wanted to pen down a chapter on the origins of Ayesha, what her childhood was like living with a mentally retarded mother and an absent father... That aspect really intrigued me. So I'm glad that you explored it as well. Thnak you Sonia and I still think that you should write it. I know time etc...and you already know this but I'll say it again...I'm the biggest fan of your writing and I can bet there are many more. So you wont have to "cheat" like me😆...I want to see a full blown Neesha fic, not only does it deserve to be explored but you write very well and you should develop it.

Anyways the chapter didn't have much of romantic NeeSha scenes,No...I might make up for it in flashbacks...😕😆 but I liked it as much as the previous chapters, because it gave a more wholesome perspective on NeeSha respectivelyIt did...there was little point to it, except introducing Arjun and showing where all the characters are at now..., and how their parenting methods differed, obviously due to the way each was brought up. Deff...the same difference would have arisen even if they were together,...it's their backgrouns that had determined it...

Originally posted by: milindkidewani

He he he...I knew a litle bit....😉

Sonia...kisi ko to chod de....Shabbir...Jay aur ab Arjun bhi????😡😆😆 Arjun to abhi bahut chota hai.....😆😆

Rima, are you and Munee having some sort of competition to see who can make us most miserable with their updates. 😡 😆

Aww, Ayesha as a mom. I always thought she would have been a very good mother and will undoubtedly love her child very much. And you potrayed it so well, right down to the fact that she doesn't like Arjun speaking English to her. But why oh why, didn't they didn't get back together when he found out she was keeping the baby. Anyway, inspite of showing just how separate lives they live and there is still so much mistrust there, I still have hope for a happily ever after.

😳 I dont why Im sharmaoying but OMG Neesha have a son!!! 😳😳😳 IM SO HAPPY! I wasnt this happy when my cousin was born 😕😆 And Arjun Kya naam hai 👏 O.k I jus love your Ayesha, she has grown so much as a person loved the part when she thinks that this was the son she was going to give away and regrets thinking about it (the hospital part)..and Neev why is he living with Priya? I could so imagine Neevu saying Champ how cute is that 😳 And i couldnt help feeling very sad when Arjun met with an accident can feel what ayesha must have been going through I justhope Neesha work it out soon, i dont feel right seeing them being sarcastic with each other in front of Arjun..i just want arjun to have both parents under one roof...living happily ever after very selfish i know..Anyways love the little secret part..how cute is arjun just like his Papa 😳

Originally posted by: jinc118

ok me back yayaya...🥳😆
😆Rima i just want to hug you for giving me this Neesha.awww 🤗there you go... Its an awe that not only do we share our love for Neesha but our understanding of them is similar to such an extent if not the same.OMG really...😳...that is so so good to know, you know I told you I didn't want to tell you the story much even though you were making me the mix...is because I wanted to see your reaction to it and it has made me so happy thinking tha you think that😕😆...at first I thought no one will get what I was doing😆...I think that may be part of the reason I loves yours so much too...I can completely understand them too... I think thats why your Neev and Ayesha i've always loved..cause i can completely understand where these two are coming from and where they stand.Ditto. The last update had left me a bit worried though like i said.yeh...I can udnerstand, it is a rather disturbing thought and I can appreciate that not many feel the same way about what she was going to do as I did... It wasnt' that anything lacked in your explanation of Ayesha but i just have a blind spot when it comes to children. Anyone or anything that brings harm to kids is evil for me so i tuned myself off to Ayeshaawww JC...thats so sweet...you're gonna be an excellent mom😊. Therefore i must hug you for not killing her for me. I would have cried buckets. lol...I was actually in two minds about it...I was going to have both of them make mistakes and then find a way to be together but I thought that would have been a bit extreme 😆...dunno why I'm hell bent on making them so tragic...

Somehow i am not sure if i ever believed Neev to move on with his life. Because's he's Neev😆...and because despite everything, he loved her and a part of him balmes himself for not understanding what was going on...Though you haven't made that part clear...i am not certain whether Neev and Priya are just good friends sharing living space or has their equation changed...which might have because what they've been living together for 5 years and Priya was in love with him all this time? Something like that...I was going to include it here but it seemed very improtant for the next part so I didn't...you'll see whats between neev and Priya soon...But for some reason i don't belive Neev to have moved on...maybe its my need for fluff. 😆 and you didn't really give me a reason to think so.lol...it's probably a bit of both...I have omited some stuff so I can use it later...😆 You did a fabulous job in doing justice to both of them. you really think so...I'm so glad!Helping explain their reasonings and their current state of mind and the complexity of how they reached where they are. And it made absolute perfect sense. Phew! That was what I was worried about the most. I knoew the story was good...but didn't know whether I could make it work for them...Thats what storytelling is about. Though i did wish that you have just elaborated a slight bit more on the scn when Neev finds out that Ayesha didn't get rid of the baby. But thats ok you got the point accross. Yeh...it was the plan...and also to elaborate on Ayesha's termination decision but I'm moving very quickly to finish so couldn't...had to edit alot...😆

And Arjun...sweetyes...there's little else to describe him right...I realised there was lttle of him in the update.... I think this is new to KYM...a kid being shuffled between the parents...would love to read more on him and his interaction with both his parents.Yes...thats the plan... Though i am a little sad for Ayesha seeing that even Arjun hasn't been able to curb her insecurities. She is still afraid of loosing him too. Seriously she is a tragic character. My heart goes out to her.Same here...but I didn't want her to just become fine with everything...I felt she would have been able to block out her feelings for Neev...it has been five years that they have been living apart but because Neev is still in her life...therehad to be soemthing else that she was worried, frightened, scared about.

Thank you so much JC...comments have been extremely useful...really made me glad I did it this way.🤗

Originally posted by: lizzy_de

Rimzzz great update..But the best part was Neesha's Kid Arjun.......i love the name....I wish we had a cute Neesha baby in the serial too........But Neesha are separated ..Sad.but is Neev really living with Priya.......When will Michi came back.........Plz update soon

Hey lizzy...😃(is that short for Elizabeth btw?) ...I'm so gald you liked it...I LOVE the name Arjun too...I think alot of us do.😃😆...me too wish Neesha had at least story to tell in the show...yesNA are not together and Neev lives with Priya. Hunny...please dont ask me when Michi will come back...😊...I already said na...not likely to. Next part will probably be my last or second to last part.

Originally posted by: blackcurrant

Rima, are you and Munee having some sort of competition to see who can make us most miserable with their updates. 😡 😆 Lol...I can tell you...she's winning😭😆...but with so much falir as well so I cannot fault her.

Aww, Ayesha as a mom. I always thought she would have been a very good mother and will undoubtedly love her child very much.Yes...I guess you can say that...she is a good mother despite her earlier misgivings regarding the baby. And you potrayed it so well, right down to the fact that she doesn't like Arjun speaking English to her.LOL...I'm glad you think so...My mother does that to us😆 she absolutely hates it... But why oh why, didn't they didn't get back together when he found out she was keeping the baby.Because for him...it was inexcusable that she had even thought of doing such a thing...thats and a combination of how it had been between them...perhaps being together would have harmed their child than not.the fights etc he wouldn't wnat his child to grow up in that kind of environment. Anyway, inspite of showing just how separate lives they live and there is still so much mistrust there, I still have hope for a happily ever after.we'll see how they end up. It's is rather wishful thinking that things ca be normal for them...but I'll try to do them jutice.

Thanks Ella😉.. man I gotta get used to that😆