FF:Aankhein(MP/NA) Complete, Pages 1, 2 and 3 - Page 5

yay a new FF, thanx Rima 😊

the first part is brilliant, i loved the NA meeting, it reminded me of the initial NA meeting in the serial. i was laughing when neev moved his other cheek forward after the slap, lol, i can tell that the NA angle will be very amusing 😆

what can i say about michi, milsi seems to be taken by prachis beauty 😳 i was quite shocked when prachi said she was blind, but im sure we are in for a treat, i cant wait to see how michi love shapes up.

you know rima i always wanted to know how a chawl milsi and a soft spoken prachi would come together and i think i will get my answer thorugh ur FF 😊

thank u for starting another FF 😊

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

LOL..Does that mean Monkey's tail?😆 AWHY??????????????

lolz...no ullu means an owl. Owl's tail.😆😆😆 That was for the distraction that you provided me from what i was doing. I had been trying to finish some work for the longest time and one thing or the other kept distracting me and then your update and now the new FF...that was more for myself...that i am the ullu ki dum that just can't lay off IF or your FFs.😆 You probably thought it was for you. Sovvvy.😆

Ok for your FF...love Neev...and i am sure you'll have fun with Neesha here.😉 I can see his cheeky expression when he put his other cheek forward and i can also see Ayesha's red face.🤣 They'r perfect. Just like they were in the beginning of the show.

Milind too is the same more or less. Can imagine him hitting Ali and Ali being the typical side kick.😆😆😆 "Kaun dekha Sukriti ko"😆 I was on the floor. Reminded me of someone. newho...

Tumne sabko aankhein di except my doll. I am sad. Or is she playing a joke with Milind. Though i don't think she is...but then i don't know if Prachi's character is the same as it is in the show or have you decided to give her a playful, prankster kind of a character. But considering that the title of your FF is Ankhein, i am thinking she really is blind. Thats saddens me.😔 But i know whatever you have planned will be good and wonderful to read. I trust you.😃

luv🤗you for starting another one before finishing the other. Seriously i can't do without ur FFs.
JC

hey rima ur new FF im waiting for the nxt part its gr8...!!!!!

Originally posted by: panache

Hello..Shello...my darling... started a new one i seee!!! 😳
Hello😊...
Very interesting... NA/MP.... - NA...Perfectly written....The initially potrayal of Ayesha is visible in your writing... Awesome.. would love to read more... you know that i like NA..rite! 😃 I didn't know that but yay...good...I love NA too😆...yep, it would seem like that initial Ayesha becausethe scene was somewhat similar to the first time Neeva nd Ayesha meet too...

MP - Again...Interesting......and very nice begining...for some reason..i have this gut wrenching feeling that MP or NA are going to have to go through a tough time!! 😳 Bas interesting? lol...JK...they will have to go through a relatively tough time...but I'll try not to make it too dramatic lol...😊

Thank you Sangee...

Originally posted by: shabzc1

yay a new FF, thanx Rima 😊 No probs hunny...

the first part is brilliant, i loved the NA meeting, it reminded me of the initial NA meeting in the serial.Yes Shabz...you're right...it was so similar to that...😉 i was laughing when neev moved his other cheek forward after the slap, lol, i can tell that the NA angle will be very amusing 😆 Yes...lol...it will be initially but they will themselves have problems of their own...now Neev's reaction...I knew he would never get angry because the fault was his...so Gandhiji ki sala maan ke...he extended the other cheek...😆

what can i say about michi, milsi seems to be taken by prachis beauty 😳 i was quite shocked when prachi said she was blind, but im sure we are in for a treat, i cant wait to see how michi love shapes up. Yes...she is beautiful and I dont think Milind see that enough...and Prachi blind...I'm sowie...just brings an interesting element in...

you know rima i always wanted to know how a chawl milsi and a soft spoken prachi would come together and i think i will get my answer thorugh ur FF 😊 Aww me too Shabz...remember that day Prachi was in ayesha's house at the chawl and Milind comes in and just stares at her...that was explosive stuff...I wished they showed more of that...

thank u for starting another FF 😊

Thank you Shabz...😃

Originally posted by: fahimataq

hey rima ur new FF im waiting for the nxt part its gr8...!!!!!

Hey Fahima hun...Thank you so much...😊...I hope it dont distract you...study study study my darling...😆...😊

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Hey Fahima hun...Thank you so much...😊...I hope it dont distract you...study study study my darling...😆...😊

actually i am gonna lol !! no distraction hun!

Originally posted by: jinc118

lolz...no ullu means an owl. Owl's tail.😆😆😆 Oh does it...hehe...I see I've not given the right translation then...LOL...That was for the distraction that you provided me from what i was doing.sowieeeee I had been trying to finish some work for the longest time and one thing or the other kept distracting me and then your update and now the new FF...that was more for myself...that i am the ullu ki dum that just can't lay off IF or your FFs.😆hahaha...good good...I want you hooked...😆 You probably thought it was for you. Sovvvy.😆I did think that was me...LOL...and I was wondering why!!!😆 ....do Owls have tails?😕😆 LOL...

Ok for your FF...love Neev...and i am sure you'll have fun with Neesha here.I love Neev too lol...remember when he says to Prachi the first time he met Ayesha...kash woh (ayesha) pehle Mili hoti or soemthing like that...😆..actually I should thank you...you inspired me to write NA...because I loved it so much in yours I wanted to see more on them...aha...which reminds me...when will you start that fic that you were talking about?.😉 I can see his cheeky expression when he put his other cheek forward and i can also see Ayesha's red facehehe...haina? lol!!.🤣 They'r perfect. Just like they were in the beginning of the show.Yep...c'rect...absolutely my intention...I just hope I can keep up with the Lingo...took me ages to write that tapoori stuff...lol...I might have to go watch old clips...

Milind too is the same more or less. Yes...but he's not as intense right? Can imagine him hitting Ali and Ali being the typical side kick.haha...yeh LOL..😆😆😆 "Kaun dekha Sukriti ko"😆 I was on the floor. Reminded me of someone. newho...LOL...I could just imagine Ali baffled by what Milind was saying...lol...and didn't want Ali to seem like a creepy guy lol....

Tumne sabko aankhein di except my doll. I am sad. I'm sorry JC...but it wont hinder her in any way...Or is she playing a joke with Milind. haha...no she isn't..interesting that you though that....Though i don't think she is...but then i don't know if Prachi's character is the same as it is in the show or have you decided to give her a playful, prankster kind of a character. She's the same in the show...to a great extent...But considering that the title of your FF is Ankhein, i am thinking she really is blind. Yes she is...Thats saddens me.😔Why hun...? But i know whatever you have planned will be good and wonderful to read. I trust you.😃awwww...thank you...😃

luv🤗you for starting another one before finishing the other. Seriously i can't do without ur FFs.The feeling's mutual darling...😆...and it's no problem..I got time to kill hehe...
...JC

Thank you so much hun!!😃

Originally posted by: fahimataq

actually i am gonna lol !! no distraction hun!

hehe...Good luck hun...😃

oh my god, i just looked at it now!!!!!! sorry for a late comment, but that was too good to describe in words, i have never acually liked ayeasha and neev jodi in any other ff before but this, i guess it is the way you have described both of the jodis brillantly. keep going. loved it so much.
Is prachi really blind or was that out of humour that she said yes?
😆 please make the next update quick, thanks just can't wait!!!!