Originally posted by: milindkidewani
Rima I read it yesterday and then later went to bed...
I m gonna post my comments in a while....😳
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I have just one word "MINDBLOWING"...bole to Shabbo ki bhasha mei....the way he says mindblowing...😃😃ahhhhhhhhhhhhh my Goldyyyyy had arriveddddddd😃😉...FABULOUSSSSSS... AHH😎
I loved Neesha. me toooooooThe whole scene was so hot😳.awww sach?..I kept waiting for the moment where Neev would kiss Ayesha but when he picked the file from the desk ..I almost started laughing😆😆LOL...Yep...that was the intetion...lekin I was sure you guys would find it predictable...😆.... Actually it reminded me of a scene from KDMHMD... Prem does the same thing except he is completely dripping wet n goes for the towel...omg omg...I've seen that...WOWWWWWWW😳That was hotttttt😉. I m always reminded of things while reading ur updates...guess u write so well I can actually picturise it and then it keeps giving me deja vu.😳 awww Thanks Goldy🤗...but I think it means I need to think up some original ideas...😆The way u wrote this scene was oh la la.....mazaa aa gaya... Neesha r hot and sizzling... and this was when they didn't have any dialogues.... 😆😆😉That they areeee...hai!! please koi unn creative ko ja ke kaheeeeeeeeeeee😡😭mujse aur subr nahin hota...
Michi Michi michi....inke to kya kehne😳..awww..exactly...lajhawaab hai ji😉😆.... was actaully getting mad at Milsi for not putting out the cig but then when Prachi took it in her hands and crushed it , burning her hand...that was ....hmmm...I m speechless here...can't find a proper adjective..😆😆 Koi gal nahin ji...I the UnderstandsssssssIt was so dramatic and had such a spark....wow...I m gonna remember the scene forever n ever.omg Goldy...sach...I feels so good to hear that...really I'm just beaming😃😳... I could picturise the pain on Prachi's face and in Milsi's eyes..😭. He must have hated himself so much in that precise moment for making Prachi hurt herself which made him throw away the whole pack .....I hope he never picks up a cig ever again..😊He wont...and he will never be able to forgive himself either...poor guy😭😭😭...aur kitne dukh sahega...
All in all a wonderful update...U keep getting better n better. and it never ceases to amaze me.... Wonderful job hun 👏omgggggg Goldy...wow! Thank you yaaaaaaaar...I dunno what to say...lekin Im getting emotional for sure...😆
Thankyou so much for writing this part....No probs!
Lub you so much...🤗awww love you too!!! especially because you wree having such difficulties...thanks Goldy for this!😃🤗
CID
