FF:Aankhein(MP/NA) Complete, Pages 1, 2 and 3 - Page 48

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Posted: 17 years ago

Rima the wait was definately worth it you have done a great job...

Firstly I love the whole Neesha track in your FF and the scene between them in this update was so intense...Also I am glad to see what a close relationship Ayesha and Prachi have it reminds me of the early days of Kayamath...The scene where Milind and Prachi are sitting on the wall is so heartbreaking...Milind not feeling deserving of Prachi while she is left in despair...When she crushed the cigarette in her hand I could see her pain and when Milind sees the burn he has has to force himself not to comfort her oh god it was so sad!!!!
Thank you for a great update now I am eagerly waiting for the next!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Grateful Dead

God Rimz'you updated!!!!!!!!!ahaha...you sound surprised...😲😆 a heartrending update and extremely engrossing!!Thank you...😊

Let me start from the last bityou're welcome to...I expected that would be the scene to stay with people.....the Michi Moment gave me goose bumps'it was indeed a tear-jerker ..i could feel their pain....Milind's pain is much more as he is forcing himself to hurt Prachi and run away from her'and when Prachi winced after burning her palm'I felt the burning sensation on my palm too'Awww hunny...damn...In a way, I'm really glad that you felt connected to it on such a level...a maudlin experience ..i hope..Milind sets Prachi's background aside and starts courting her'Not in the conventional sense of courting...but that'll be a while yet...

Milinds resolution to give up smoking shows his intensity of love for Prachi'I love himI love him too sweetheart...and yes it does in a way...😃

Well'the Neesha bit was very intense'I could visualize Neev's intense gaze on Ayesha'love the part where Ayesha she wanted to stop him; she wanted him to fight for her, for him to love her. This shows Ayesha is becoming dependent on Neev gradually'Yes, more on the affection she senses for him in him...though she's unwilling to admit it...she's not ever had that...she craves and wants it more than anything...but she's too scared to try...

As usual, I Love the way you are building up this FF'.with lot of profundity and insight..ahaha...thank you.

Love you for that.😳.awww

Update soon this time..😊I'll try...😃

Thanks GD
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sidroobaba25

thanx for the update yar!!!!

hahaha...no probolem...apologies for the wait😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
Superb! Update! I guess Milind is going to come back from turkey before these 2 meet again! After reading Neesha...i seriously hope that Kayamath develops a parallel track to Michi for Neesha...
As always it was a lovely update! With the rite amount of spice, love etc..etc..
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: bbb999

Rima the wait was definately worth it you have done a great job...sawww Thank you B...😃

Firstly I love the whole Neesha track in your FF Exceeeeellent!! My aim was to sell Neesha to everyone...and for the most part people seem to enjoy it...😃...makes meeeeeeeee so happyand the scene between them in this update was so intense.glad you thought so and it came across..Also I am glad to see what a close relationship Ayesha and Prachi have it reminds me of the early days of Kayamath..me too...I guess thats what I was striving for...loved it.The scene where Milind and Prachi are sitting on the wall is so heartbreaking.awwww...yeh in a way...but it's just the beginning yet.....Milind not feeling deserving of Prachi while she is left in despair...When she crushed the cigarette in her hand I could see her pain and when Milind sees the burn he has has to force himself not to comfort her oh god it was so sad!!!!awww B...I'm so happy that you guys enjoyed that...I had that scene in mind ages ago...you could say...I sort of revolved my story around it...😆
Thank you for a great update now I am eagerly waiting for the next!!!I'll try soon...
Thank you so much!!😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: panache

Superb! Update! I guess Milind is going to come back from turkey before these 2 meet again! After reading Neesha...i seriously hope that Kayamath develops a parallel track to Michi for Neesha... me tooo😆

As always it was a lovely update! With the rite amount of spice, love etc..etc..

OH DEAR LORD!!!!!! Look who it isssssss...Sangeeeeeee🤗
and 😡 for not replying to my PM!...lazy bum...
Thank you so much!! Chal I fulfilled my promise...your turn now...😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

Loved d update yaar 😃

Michi were so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee loved d last part 👏

Poor prachi burned her palm😭

& my neesha ……………………….. really love them😊 I can t get over them 😆😃😊

I hope Ayesha will confess neev that she loves him 😉

Pata nahi yeh creatives kab NA track shuuroo karenghe 😭😭

Agla update jaldi karna 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
Rims, that was such an amazing update!! Really Good, but hey that's expected! :D Guys, are such argghhhh (no words will be befitting at their hard headedness)....but u know what i mean!!
Looking forward to the next update!! I'm thinking Milind will pursue Prachi after he returns from Turkey....once he's in a respectable position!! mmm....so eager, as always!! :DD
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: MURALIDHARAN99

Loved d update yaar 😃Thanks Reva😃

Michi were so cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee loved d last part 👏awww so happy you thought so...

Poor prachi burned her palm😭Haina...stupid Milind!

& my neesha '''''''''.. really love them😊 I can t get over them 😆😃😊ahaha...so glad somene else is just as crazy over them...yay!😃😳

I hope Ayesha will confess neev that she loves him 😉dekhte jao agge agge hota hain kya😉😆

Pata nahi yeh creatives kab NA track shuuroo karenghe 😭😭Reva...pata nahin...better be soon but in my heart of hearts I know i'm chasing a dream...😭

Agla update jaldi karna 😃Illl try update Monday😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sailat

Rims, that was such an amazing update!! Really Good, but hey that's expected! :D Guys, are such argghhhh (no words will be befitting at their hard headedness)....but u know what i mean!!Completely get yaaaaa😆 saimaaaaaa it's been ages!! stop hiding!😡😆

Looking forward to the next update!! I'm thinking Milind will pursue Prachi after he returns from Turkey....once he's in a respectable position!! mmm....so eager, as always!! :DDaha...but how can you be so sure it'll go down that route?😉😆...wait and watch my dear...



Thanks Hun😃

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